Rules— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi hataları ve anlam belirsizlikleri var. Daha doğal ve akıcı cümleler kurmaya çalışın. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve net tutarak, gereksiz tekrarları önleyin.

Ejemplo: At my school, there are many rules that everyone must follow. For example, running in the classrooms is not allowed. If you break something, you have to pay for it. Also, students must always wear uniforms.

Sugerencia: Cümle yapılarınızda ve kelime seçimlerinizde daha dikkatli olun. Anlatımınızda mantık ve tutarlılık sağlamaya çalışın. Bağlaçları kullanarak düşüncelerinizi daha açık ifade edin.

Ejemplo: I don't think students benefit from having more rules because too many rules can make them feel restricted. As a result, they may want to break the rules even more to feel free.

Sugerencia: Cümlelerinizi daha doğru gramer yapılarıyla kurun ve gereksiz kelime tekrarlarından kaçının. Ayrıca, daha spesifik detaylar vererek cevabınızı zenginleştirin.

Ejemplo: When I was in eighth grade, I had a dedicated teacher who was very kind and helpful. She always encouraged us to learn and made lessons interesting.

Sugerencia: Kelime seçimlerinize dikkat edin (örneğin, 'fever' yerine 'fewer'). Cümlelerinizi daha açık ve mantıklı bağlaçlarla bağlayarak anlatımınızı geliştirin.

Ejemplo: I prefer fewer rules at school because too many rules make students want to break them. With fewer rules, communication between teachers and students is easier.

Sugerencia: Cümlelerinizde dilbilgisi ve anlam hataları var. Daha basit ve doğru cümleler kurmaya çalışın. Ayrıca, düşüncelerinizi daha açık ve mantıklı şekilde ifade edin.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a very strict teacher in 10th grade. Many students did not like him because he was too strict. He felt attacked sometimes, but no one listened to him.

Sugerencia: Cümlelerinizi daha akıcı ve doğru gramerle kurun. Ayrıca, düşüncelerinizi daha net ifade etmek için bağlaçlar kullanın ve gereksiz duraklamalardan kaçının.

Ejemplo: I would not like to work in a school without rules because without discipline, it is hard to communicate effectively, especially with teenagers. I think being a teacher requires a lot of patience.

× There is too many obligations in my school and everybody has to follow them and you can't run in classes.

✓ There are too many obligations in my school and everybody has to follow them and you can't run in classes.

The subject 'obligations' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× If you break someone's think you should pay for it and you should wear uniforms for school always.

✓ If you break someone's thing, you should pay for it and you should always wear uniforms for school.

The word 'think' is incorrect; it should be 'thing'. Also, 'always' should be placed before the verb 'wear' for correct adverb placement.

× I don't think students would benefit more from morals because the more rules means the more kids feels umm, energetic, free.

✓ I don't think students would benefit more from more rules because more rules mean more kids feel energetic and free.

The word 'morals' is incorrect; it should be 'more rules'. Also, 'means' should be 'mean' to agree with plural subject 'more rules', and 'feels' should be 'feel' to agree with plural 'kids'.

× They want to try something else and because of it's not allowed it's became more good.

✓ They want to try something else and because it's not allowed, it becomes better.

'Because of it's' is incorrect; it should be 'because it's'. 'Became' is past tense but context requires present tense 'becomes'. 'More good' is incorrect; the correct comparative form is 'better'.

× I had a really good, dedicated teacher when I was eighth grade and she was a stunning person and she always helps us to teach something and she was always wanting to everybody should learn.

✓ I had a really good, dedicated teacher when I was in eighth grade. She was a wonderful person and she always helped us learn, and she always wanted everyone to learn.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Helps' should be 'helped' and 'was always wanting' should be 'always wanted'. Also, 'stunning' is better replaced with 'wonderful' for appropriateness, and 'to teach something' is awkward; 'learn' is better.

× I prefer to have fever rules at school because if we have more rules at school, it becomes attractive to us and we want to break the rules.

✓ I prefer to have fewer rules at school because if we have more rules at school, it becomes unattractive to us and we want to break the rules.

'Fever' is incorrect; the correct quantifier is 'fewer' for countable nouns like 'rules'. Also, 'attractive' contradicts the meaning; 'unattractive' fits better.

× But if we have several rules at school, it's easy to communicate well between teachers and students.

✓ But if we have several rules at school, it's easy to communicate well between teachers and students.

No correction needed here; the sentence is grammatically correct.

× Yes, I had a really strict teacher and when I was 10th grade in high school and nobody was loving him and he was so strict and affect he thinks he was attacked too but nobody cares about him and nobody was listens to him.

✓ Yes, I had a really strict teacher when I was in 10th grade in high school. Nobody loved him; he was so strict and, in fact, he thought he was attacked too, but nobody cared about him and nobody listened to him.

The sentence has multiple tense errors: 'was loving' should be 'loved', 'affect' should be 'in fact', 'thinks' should be 'thought', 'cares' should be 'cared', and 'was listens' should be 'listened'. Also, sentence structure is improved by splitting into shorter sentences.

× I wouldn't like to work as a teacher in a real free school because if there is no discipline, it's very hard to communicate well and being effective on people, especially teenagers.

✓ I wouldn't like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because if there is no discipline, it's very hard to communicate well and be effective with people, especially teenagers.

'Being effective on people' is incorrect; it should be 'be effective with people'. Also, 'real free school' should be 'rule-free school'.

× Umm I think being teacher is very. Patience job.

✓ Umm, I think being a teacher is a very patient job.

'Being teacher' needs an article 'a'. 'Patience' is a noun; the adjective 'patient' should be used to describe the job. Also, the sentence was fragmented and is corrected for clarity.