Rules— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and keep your answer concise. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ejemplo: No, there are no strict rules for students at my university because most of us are adults. Therefore, we are expected to manage our own time and responsibilities, such as meeting deadlines, without much supervision.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and structured but could be improved by using clearer linking words and more precise vocabulary. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'may need' and provide specific reasons or examples.

Ejemplo: I believe it depends on the students' age. Younger students benefit from more rules because they need guidance to develop good habits. However, older students should have more freedom to encourage independence and self-discipline.

Sugerencia: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrasing. Try to answer directly with a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar, and provide specific supporting details with linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have had a dedicated teacher. Dedicated teachers are not only strict but also know how to motivate students positively, which helps us learn better.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to express your opinion clearly with supporting reasons and avoid repeating ideas.

Ejemplo: I prefer fewer rules at school because strict regulations can make students feel controlled and less motivated.

Sugerencia: Your answer has serious grammatical errors and inappropriate content. Avoid exaggerations or inappropriate remarks. Provide a clear, respectful description with correct grammar and linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a very strict teacher in high school who strictly enforced all the rules and expected students to follow them carefully.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly with proper sentence structure and linking words. Avoid redundancy and clarify your points.

Ejemplo: Honestly, I would like to be a student in a rule-free school, but not a teacher. Without rules, teachers need to be very patient and attentive because some students might misbehave.

× No they're not since I'm studying in university and most of students are adults so you should have self-control to finish everything before the deadline and no one care about what are you doing, what's your routine?

✓ No, there aren't since I'm studying at university and most of the students are adults, so you should have self-control to finish everything before the deadline and no one cares about what you are doing, what's your routine?

The sentence has several pronoun and verb agreement issues. 'No they're not' is incorrect because the question asks about rules, so 'No, there aren't' is appropriate (There be issue). 'Most of students' should be 'most of the students' (article error). 'No one care' should be 'no one cares' (third person singular issue). 'What are you doing' should be 'what you are doing' to fit the sentence structure (incorrect use of pronouns). Also, 'studying in university' should be 'studying at university' (incorrect use of prepositions).

× No they're not since I'm studying in university and most of students are adults so you should have self-control to finish everything before the deadline and no one care about what are you doing, what's your routine?

✓ No, there aren't since I'm studying at university and most of the students are adults, so you should have self-control to finish everything before the deadline and no one cares about what you are doing, what's your routine?

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'university'; the correct preposition is 'at' when referring to attending university. This is a common prepositional error in English.

× No they're not since I'm studying in university and most of students are adults so you should have self-control to finish everything before the deadline and no one care about what are you doing, what's your routine?

✓ No, there aren't since I'm studying at university and most of the students are adults, so you should have self-control to finish everything before the deadline and no one cares about what you are doing, what's your routine?

The phrase 'most of students' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'students'. In English, when referring to a specific group, the definite article is required.

× No they're not since I'm studying in university and most of students are adults so you should have self-control to finish everything before the deadline and no one care about what are you doing, what's your routine?

✓ No, there aren't since I'm studying at university and most of the students are adults, so you should have self-control to finish everything before the deadline and no one cares about what you are doing, what's your routine?

The verb 'care' should be 'cares' to agree with the singular subject 'no one'. This is a third person singular verb agreement issue.

× Of course I do. I think a dedicated teacher, they are not only in the role follower which just really strict to students, but also they just they know how to motivate students positive aspect.

✓ Of course I do. I think a dedicated teacher is not only a follower who is really strict to students, but also knows how to motivate students positively.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'they' after 'a dedicated teacher' which is singular, causing pronoun disagreement. Also, 'in the role follower' is awkward and should be 'a follower'. 'Just really strict to students' is incorrect; 'really strict with students' or 'strict to students' is better. 'They just they know' is redundant. 'Motivate students positive aspect' is incorrect; it should be 'motivate students positively' (adverb form).

× Of course I do. I think a dedicated teacher, they are not only in the role follower which just really strict to students, but also they just they know how to motivate students positive aspect.

✓ Of course I do. I think a dedicated teacher is not only a follower who is really strict to students, but also knows how to motivate students positively.

The phrase 'motivate students positive aspect' is incorrect because 'positive' is an adjective but an adverb 'positively' is needed to describe the verb 'motivate'. This is an incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs.

× Yes I have that's teacher is still in my high school and he was really strict just like a robot. He just followed the everything and every details in the Rose and punch you when you doesn't follow it.

✓ Yes, I have. That teacher was still in my high school and he was really strict just like a robot. He just followed everything and every detail in the rules and punched you when you didn't follow them.

Several third person singular verb issues: 'that's teacher is' should be 'that teacher was'; 'doesn't follow' should be 'didn't follow' to match past tense; 'punch you' should be 'punched you' (past tense). Also, 'the everything' is incorrect; 'everything' does not need 'the'. 'Every details' should be 'every detail' (singular). 'In the Rose' is likely a typo for 'in the rules'.

× Yes I have that's teacher is still in my high school and he was really strict just like a robot. He just followed the everything and every details in the Rose and punch you when you doesn't follow it.

✓ Yes, I have. That teacher was still in my high school and he was really strict just like a robot. He just followed everything and every detail in the rules and punched you when you didn't follow them.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. Since the teacher is from the past, past tense verbs like 'was', 'followed', 'punched', and 'didn't follow' should be used consistently.

× Yes I have that's teacher is still in my high school and he was really strict just like a robot. He just followed the everything and every details in the Rose and punch you when you doesn't follow it.

✓ Yes, I have. That teacher was still in my high school and he was really strict just like a robot. He just followed everything and every detail in the rules and punched you when you didn't follow them.

The phrase 'in the Rose' is incorrect and likely a typo for 'in the rules'. Also, 'followed the everything' is incorrect; 'everything' does not require 'the'.

× No they're not since I'm studying in university and most of students are adults so you should have self-control to finish everything before the deadline and no one care about what are you doing, what's your routine?

✓ No, there aren't since I'm studying at university and most of the students are adults, so you must have self-control to finish everything before the deadline and no one cares about what you are doing, what's your routine?

The modal verb 'should' is used to give advice, but in this context, 'must' is stronger and more appropriate to express necessity for self-control to meet deadlines.

× To be honest I want to work as a student in a rule free school but not for a teacher because I think if that's rule free you should pay more patients and attentions on students because without the rule control there may a lot of naughty students in that school.

✓ To be honest, I want to be a student in a rule-free school but not a teacher because I think if it's rule-free, you should pay more patience and attention to students because without rule control there may be a lot of naughty students in that school.

The sentence has pronoun and article errors: 'that's rule free' should be 'it's rule-free' (contraction of 'it is'). 'Pay more patients and attentions on students' is incorrect; it should be 'pay more patience and attention to students'. 'There may a lot' should be 'there may be a lot'. Also, 'work as a student' is incorrect; 'be a student' is correct.