Rules— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'talk each other' nên là 'talk to each other' và 'it can't distract' nên là 'it can distract'. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students are not allowed to talk to each other during class because it can distract others from learning. This helps maintain a quiet environment so everyone can focus better.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, đồng thời ý tưởng chưa được phát triển mạch lạc. Bạn nên tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và thêm các liên từ để câu trả lời logic hơn.

Ejemplo: I think it depends on the school environment. Small schools may not have many rules but still provide good quality education. I believe rules should be strict because they encourage students to focus and improve their behavior and learning.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không hoàn chỉnh, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên luyện tập cách sử dụng thì đúng, cấu trúc câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh những cụm từ không phù hợp để câu trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn.

Ejemplo: I was fortunate to have a dedicated teacher in high school. He was always open-minded and patient. Whenever students had questions about the subject, he tended to explain in detail to help us understand the material easily. His support was very helpful to me.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác, ví dụ 'feel not second house' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu trúc rõ ràng hơn để truyền đạt ý tưởng hiệu quả.

Ejemplo: I think there should be a balance when it comes to school rules. If there are too few rules, students might get distracted and not focus on their lessons. But if there are too many strict rules, students might feel uncomfortable and not at home. So, having the right number of rules can help create a good environment.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý nghĩa rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp như số nhiều/số ít và cách dùng thì. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì quá khứ và số ít đúng cách để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ejemplo: In the past, I had a strict teacher. It was annoying at that time. However, as I grew up, I realized it was for my personal growth. It helped me become a better person and more disciplined in my studies.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên luyện tập cách dùng từ và cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng để truyền đạt ý tưởng hiệu quả hơn.

Ejemplo: Definitely not. A school without any rules can make students lose focus on their lessons and they might not respect anything. I think every rule has its own reason. Therefore, having rules is important to ensure the school runs better.

× the students are not allowed to talk each other during class because it can't distract others from learning

✓ the students are not allowed to talk to each other during class because it can't distract others from learning

The verb 'talk' requires the preposition 'to' when indicating the person being spoken to. The phrase should be 'talk to each other' instead of 'talk each other'.

× it can't distract others from learning

✓ it doesn't distract others from learning

The modal verb 'can't' indicates impossibility, but the intended meaning is that talking distracts others, so 'doesn't' is more appropriate to express negation in present tense.

× the small school don't have many benefits but they always provide the best quality

✓ small schools don't have many benefits but they always provide the best quality

The subject 'school' is singular but the verb 'don't' is plural. Also, 'small school' should be plural 'small schools' to match the plural verb 'don't'.

× I think it's it should be hard because it encourage the students to focus and improve their behavior and learning

✓ I think it should be strict because it encourages the students to focus and improve their behavior and learning

The phrase 'it's it should be' is redundant; 'should be' is sufficient. Also, 'hard' is better replaced with 'strict' in this context. The verb 'encourage' should be 'encourages' to agree with singular subject 'it'.

× He was always open mind and patient

✓ He was always open-minded and patient

The adjective 'open mind' should be hyphenated as 'open-minded' to correctly describe a person's attitude.

× whenever the students have questioned about the subject, he tend to explain in details

✓ whenever the students have questions about the subject, he tends to explain in detail

The verb 'have questioned' is incorrect; it should be 'have questions' to indicate ongoing queries. The verb 'tend' should be 'tends' to agree with singular subject 'he'. 'In details' should be 'in detail'.

× because of his boss

✓ because of his passion

The phrase 'because of his boss' does not make sense in context. Likely intended to express motivation or dedication, so 'because of his passion' is appropriate.

× So I was very helpful about

✓ So he was very helpful to us

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. It should specify who was helpful and to whom, with correct prepositions.

× I think it should be balance when it come to school rule

✓ I think it should be balanced when it comes to school rules

'Balance' is a noun; the adjective 'balanced' is needed here. Also, 'come' should be 'comes' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Rule' should be plural 'rules'.

× But there are too many strict rules, the students might feel strict and feel not second house

✓ But if there are too many strict rules, the students might feel restricted and not feel at home

The sentence lacks a conditional conjunction 'if'. 'Feel strict' is incorrect; 'feel restricted' is appropriate. 'Feel not second house' is incorrect; 'not feel at home' is the correct expression.

× So exactly numbers of crew can help create a good environment

✓ So the right number of rules can help create a good environment

'Exactly numbers of crew' is incorrect. The intended meaning is 'the right number of rules'. 'Crew' is unrelated here.

× I remember that I have a strict teachers

✓ I remember that I had strict teachers

The subject 'I' with 'have' is present tense but the context is past. 'Teachers' is plural, so 'have' should be 'had' and 'a' should be removed.

× I remember that I have a strict teachers

✓ I remember that I had strict teachers

The verb 'have' should be in past tense 'had' to match the past context.

× I feel that it's it's just for my personal growth

✓ I feel that it's just for my personal growth

The phrase 'it's it's' is redundant; one 'it's' is sufficient.

× I realize it's helped me become a better version and more disciplined about my subjects

✓ I realize it has helped me become a better version and more disciplined about my subjects

The present perfect 'has helped' is appropriate to indicate an action that has relevance to the present.

× a school with full freeze can make students don't focus about their lessons

✓ a school with no rules can make students not focus on their lessons

'Full freeze' is incorrect; likely meant 'no rules'. 'Don't focus about' is incorrect; correct is 'not focus on'.

× they look like don't scare off anythings

✓ they seem not to be scared of anything

Incorrect pronoun and verb form. 'Don't scare off anythings' is incorrect; correct is 'not to be scared of anything'.

× So I think each rules has their own reasons

✓ So I think each rule has its own reason

'Each' is singular, so 'rules' should be singular 'rule', and 'their' should be 'its', 'reasons' should be 'reason'.

× So it was very nice to have the rule to guarantee the schools better version

✓ So it is very nice to have rules to guarantee the school's better version

The present tense 'is' is appropriate here. 'Rule' should be plural 'rules'. 'Schools' should be possessive 'school's'.