Rules— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答时语言不够自然，表达有些重复和不连贯，且内容偏离了问题的核心。建议回答时直接针对学校的规则，避免提及无关的法律，并使用连贯的句子表达观点。

Ejemplo: At my college overseas, there are few strict rules for students. For example, smoking is prohibited in public areas, and using phones while driving is not allowed. Overall, the rules are designed to ensure safety and order.

Sugerencia: 回答结构不清晰，表达含糊且语法错误较多，缺乏具体细节和连贯的逻辑。建议明确表达观点，使用连接词，并举例说明规则的利弊。

Ejemplo: I don't think more rules would always benefit students because too many restrictions might make them feel controlled. However, some rules are necessary to prevent bad behavior and maintain discipline.

Sugerencia: 回答内容丰富但表达不够流畅，语法和词汇使用有误。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，并更具体地描述老师的特点和影响。

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a very dedicated teacher who taught film studies. He was knowledgeable and always willing to help, offering extra consultations whenever I had questions. His passion inspired me a lot.

Sugerencia: 回答不够清晰，表达混乱且缺乏具体理由。建议明确表达偏好，提供具体原因，并使用连贯的句子。

Ejemplo: I prefer fewer rules at school because too many restrictions can make students feel pressured. I believe a relaxed environment helps students learn better and be more creative.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然，且内容较为笼统。建议使用更准确的词汇，简洁表达，并举例说明严格老师的具体表现。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have had strict teachers, especially in China where discipline is emphasized. For example, my high school teacher was very strict about punctuality and homework completion.

Sugerencia: 回答表达了观点但结构不够清晰，语法和用词有误。建议直接回答问题，说明原因，并使用连贯的句子。

Ejemplo: I don't want to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because I prefer a structured environment. Also, since I am studying communication, I plan to pursue a career related to that field.

× we don't have a lot of rules, but in Singapore we do have a lot of laws.

✓ we don't have a lot of rules, but in Singapore we do have a lot of rules.

这里将laws（法律）改为rules（规则），因为题目问的是学校的规则，laws指的是法律，语义不符。

× you cannot smoke at public places.

✓ you cannot smoke in public places.

public places是复数形式，符合语法，但介词用错，应使用in而不是at。

× you cannot play phones while you are in the cars or something like.

✓ you cannot use phones while you are in cars or something like that.

play phones用法错误，应为use phones；in the cars中the不应出现，且cars为复数，去掉the；something like不完整，应为something like that。

× I wouldn't say so, but I do believe that the rule exists have its own reasons so it can like have the regulations for a lot of illegal or unsuitable behaviours.

✓ I wouldn't say so, but I do believe that the rules exist for their own reasons so they can regulate a lot of illegal or unsuitable behaviours.

rule应为复数rules；exists后面不应接have；句子结构混乱，改为更通顺的表达。

× As for student they may have the like attitude.

✓ As for students, they may have that kind of attitude.

student应为复数students；the like attitude表达不正确，改为that kind of attitude更合适。

× If you beg me to do something I would against you.

✓ If you beg me to do something, I would be against you.

缺少be动词，would后应接be；句子缺少逗号，连接词使用不当。

× I will say yes, I have met a lot of dedicated teacher but one like that makes me most impressive.

✓ I will say yes, I have met a lot of dedicated teachers but one like that impresses me the most.

teacher应为复数teachers；makes me most impressive表达错误，应为impresses me the most。

× He taught a lot of cinemas like the Apes on the Moana.

✓ He taught a lot about cinema like Apes and Moana.

cinemas用法错误，应为cinema（电影艺术）；the Apes on the Moana表达不清，改为Apes and Moana。

× He is very impressive person and he has been like works for the Cambridge for 11 years and whenever I have a question she he would ask me to go to a consultation.

✓ He is a very impressive person and he has been working for Cambridge for 11 years, and whenever I have a question, he would ask me to go to a consultation.

缺少冠词a；has been like works表达错误，应为has been working；she he混用，应为he。

× I prefer fewer rules at schools because I'm kind of people like a lot of parents said that she is not listen to the parents, she is not listen to the teachers.

✓ I prefer fewer rules at school because I'm the kind of person who, like a lot of parents said, does not listen to parents or teachers.

schools应为单数school；people应为person；listen应为listen（动词原形），且主谓一致错误。

× Oh yes, uh, since I was studying China before and now I'm studying in Singapore, I would say there is a very, uh, oblivious still difference between two countries.

✓ Oh yes, uh, since I studied in China before and now I'm studying in Singapore, I would say there is still a very obvious difference between the two countries.

was studying改为过去式studied；oblivious用错，应为obvious；two countries前应加定冠词the。

× I would say a lot of teacher I met was really strict.

✓ I would say a lot of teachers I met were really strict.

teacher应为复数teachers；was应为were，主谓一致。

× No, I'm not a person keen to be a teacher, but if I do have a chance, I think I can try once.

✓ No, I'm not a person keen on being a teacher, but if I do have a chance, I think I can try once.

keen后应接介词on；try once表达不自然，建议改为try it once。

× But I would not like my future to be there because I'm studying the communication.

✓ But I would not like my future to be there because I'm studying communication.

the communication中the不应出现，communication作为不可数名词不加冠词。