Rules— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some errors like 'roles' instead of 'rules'. Try to be more direct and clear by stating the rules and their purpose. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

Ejemplo: Yes, there were several rules at my university. For example, students were evaluated not only on academic performance but also on their behavior. These rules encouraged us to maintain good conduct throughout our studies.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: I believe students would benefit from having more rules because rules help maintain discipline. For instance, with clear guidelines, students are less likely to misbehave, which creates a better learning environment.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but could be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words. Also, try to avoid emotional expressions like 'depressed' and instead explain the impact more objectively.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a very dedicated teacher in secondary school who guided us both academically and personally. He was committed to our success, but sadly, he left before our final exams, which was quite disappointing for us.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some unclear phrases like 'checkmated'. Try to use simpler and clearer words to express your ideas. Also, add linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Ejemplo: I prefer having more rules at school because they help control students' behavior. For example, strict rules can reduce misconduct and create a safer environment for everyone.

Sugerencia: There is a typo 'street' instead of 'strict'. Also, try to provide more specific details and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a strict teacher at university who was serious about discipline. Although he was not very friendly, his teaching was effective. However, many students did not like him because of his strictness.

Sugerencia: There are some errors like 'roof free' instead of 'rule-free'. Your answer is repetitive and a bit unclear. Try to express your reasons clearly and avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: No, I would not like to work in a school without rules because students might behave disorderly. Since I get easily overwhelmed, I prefer a structured environment where rules help maintain order.

× We had so many roles for students and this helped us to be of our best behavior in school.

✓ We had so many rules for students and this helped us to be of our best behavior in school.

The word 'roles' is incorrect here; it should be 'rules' because the context is about regulations, not positions or functions. This is a singular and plural issue where the wrong plural noun was used.

× So I believe that students would benefit more from the more rules if they are put in place because this helps to checkmate should the students behavior and in the long run.

✓ So I believe that students would benefit more from more rules if they are put in place because this helps to checkmate the students' behavior in the long run.

The phrase 'the more rules' is incorrect; 'more rules' without 'the' is appropriate here. Also, 'should the students behavior' is incorrect; it should be 'the students' behavior' with a possessive apostrophe. This is an article error and singular/plural possessive issue.

× Unfortunately, he left us when we are about writing our final exams and this made me so depressed.

✓ Unfortunately, he left us when we were about to write our final exams and this made me so depressed.

The verb tense 'are about writing' is incorrect for a past event; it should be 'were about to write' to match the past tense context. This is a past tense issue.

× I prefer to have more rules in school than fewer rules because the more the rules, the more the behaviour and character of every student is being checkmated and this helps to reduce the level of crime in the university.

✓ I prefer to have more rules in school than fewer rules because the more the rules, the more the behaviour and character of every student are being checkmated and this helps to reduce the level of crime in the university.

The subject 'behaviour and character' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× Yes, I had a street teacher when I was in university.

✓ Yes, I had a strict teacher when I was in university.

The word 'street' is a typo and should be 'strict'. This is a vocabulary error but relates to incorrect word usage, which can be considered under singular/plural or word choice issues.

× He had so many issues with so many students and this made students not to like him.

✓ He had so many issues with so many students and this made students not like him.

The phrase 'made students not to like him' is incorrect; the correct form is 'made students not like him' without 'to'. This is an incorrect use of infinitive after 'make'.

× No I would not love to work as a teacher in a roof free school because the student tend to do whatever they like and I'm this kind of person that is easily overwhelmed so and my emotional health matters a lot to me.

✓ No, I would not love to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because the students tend to do whatever they like and I'm this kind of person who is easily overwhelmed, so my emotional health matters a lot to me.

'Roof free school' is a typo for 'rule-free school'. 'Student' should be plural 'students' to agree with 'they'. 'That' should be 'who' when referring to a person. Also, sentence structure is improved by removing 'and' after 'so'. This involves incorrect use of pronouns and singular/plural issues.