Rules— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ chính xác hơn. Ví dụ, "disciplined rules" không đúng, nên dùng "disciplinary rules". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và thiếu liên kết mạch lạc giữa các ý.

Ejemplo: Yes, my school has several disciplinary rules, such as a strict uniform and footwear policy. Additionally, the school plans to regulate phone usage to maintain a productive learning environment.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Tránh lặp từ như "and and" và dùng từ phù hợp như "respecting teachers" thay vì "approve about respecting teacher". Nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe more rules can help students become more disciplined and develop a sense of responsibility. For instance, schools should encourage respect for teachers by promoting attentive listening and polite communication in class.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời khá tốt nhưng bạn nên thêm liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, nên sửa lỗi nhỏ như "she also my homeroom teacher" thành "she is also my homeroom teacher" để câu tự nhiên hơn.

Ejemplo: Definitely, my literature teacher, who is also my homeroom teacher, is very dedicated. What impresses me most about her is her patience and commitment, so I really admire her and consider her like a second mother.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần sửa lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. "strict revelations" không đúng, có thể bạn muốn nói "strict regulations". Câu "students can focus better on learning without failing test" không hợp lý, nên diễn đạt lại để ý nghĩa rõ ràng.

Ejemplo: I prefer fewer rules at school because it creates a more comfortable and relaxed environment. For example, with less strict regulations, students can focus better on their studies and perform well in tests, making school more enjoyable.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Cần sửa lại câu để ý nghĩa rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Ví dụ, "she have a lot of stretch" không đúng, nên dùng "she is strict" hoặc "she enforces rules strictly".

Ejemplo: Yes, as I mentioned before, my literature teacher is patient but also very strict to keep students disciplined and improve academic performance.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. "when I was dry" không đúng, có thể bạn muốn nói "when I was young". Câu cuối nên rõ ràng hơn về mục đích của bạn.

Ejemplo: Of course, becoming a teacher has been my dream since I was young. I want to help children become more disciplined and achieve good academic results.

× Of course, there are disciplined rules to give students intake and level the academic environment through footwear and uniform policy.

✓ Of course, there are disciplined rules to regulate student intake and level the academic environment through footwear and uniform policies.

The word 'students intake' is incorrect because 'students' is plural and 'intake' is singular; it should be 'student intake' to indicate the intake of students collectively. Also, 'uniform policy' should be plural 'uniform policies' to match 'footwear' which is plural, indicating multiple policies.

× Besides, my school also plan using phone in school to create a productive learning environment.

✓ Besides, my school also plans to use phones in school to create a productive learning environment.

The subject 'my school' is singular, so the verb should be 'plans' (third person singular). Also, 'plan using phone' is incorrect; it should be 'plans to use phones' to correctly express intention and pluralize 'phones' as it refers to multiple devices.

× I will say yes, I believe having more rules can have students become more disciplined and and develop a sense of responsibilities.

✓ I would say yes, I believe having more rules can help students become more disciplined and develop a sense of responsibility.

'I will say yes' is less appropriate here; 'I would say yes' is more polite and conditional. 'Can have students become' is awkward; 'can help students become' is better. Also, 'responsibilities' should be singular 'responsibility' when referring to a general sense.

× For example, I think schools should approve about respecting teacher such as listening carefully in class and talking with them.

✓ For example, I think schools should promote respecting teachers, such as listening carefully in class and talking with them.

The phrase 'approve about respecting teacher' is incorrect. The correct verb is 'promote' or 'encourage' and 'teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to generalize. Also, 'approve about' is not a correct prepositional phrase.

× Definitely my literature teacher is one of them, and she also my homeroom teacher.

✓ Definitely, my literature teacher is one of them, and she is also my homeroom teacher.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' in the second clause. It should be 'she is also my homeroom teacher' to be grammatically correct.

× Well as I mentioned before since my literature teacher and on those is patient but she have a lot of stretch to keep students in check and increase academic performance.

✓ Well, as I mentioned before, my literature teacher is patient, but she has a lot of strictness to keep students in check and increase academic performance.

The original sentence is confusing and contains errors: 'and on those' is incorrect and unnecessary. 'She have' should be 'she has' (subject-verb agreement). 'A lot of stretch' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'strictness'. Also, commas are needed for clarity.

× Of course, this is my dream when I was dry.

✓ Of course, this has been my dream since I was a child.

'When I was dry' is incorrect; likely intended 'when I was a child'. Also, 'this is my dream' should be 'this has been my dream' to indicate a dream from past to present.

× I want to be a teacher to teach children, become more disciplined and have a good academic performance.

✓ I want to be a teacher to teach children to become more disciplined and to have good academic performance.

The sentence lacks parallel structure. The infinitive phrases should be consistent: 'to teach children to become more disciplined and to have good academic performance.' Also, 'a good academic performance' should be 'good academic performance' without 'a'.