Rules— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains redundancy. Try to be more concise and use correct grammar, such as 'there are some strict rules' instead of 'quiet rules'. Also, avoid repeating words like 'strictly, strictly'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are several strict rules at my school. For example, students are not allowed to use their phones during lessons, and attendance is closely monitored to ensure everyone attends regularly.

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas logically using linking words like 'however' or 'on the other hand'. Also, be specific about how rules affect students.

Ejemplo: I think it depends. On one hand, having fewer rules allows students to be more independent and make their own decisions. However, too few rules can lead to a lack of discipline, which may negatively affect learning.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Use clear sentences and avoid unnecessary words. Also, provide specific examples of dedication.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have had a few dedicated teachers who always used their lesson time effectively and were willing to help students even after school hours.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains errors like 'Also screw up' and double negatives. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons, using correct grammar and vocabulary.

Ejemplo: I prefer to have fewer rules because it allows me to make independent decisions during school time. However, some rules, like no smoking and no phone use during lessons, are necessary to prevent distractions.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains awkward phrasing. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid unnecessary details. Use linking words to connect your points.

Ejemplo: I have never had a very strict teacher. Most of my teachers are understanding about deadlines and discipline, and as students, we try to respect their efforts by working hard.

Sugerencia: Your answer has many grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to organize your ideas logically and use correct grammar. Be specific about why a rule-free school would be challenging.

Ejemplo: I would not like to work in a school without rules because students might feel they can do anything without consequences. This could lead to a lack of discipline and respect towards teachers.

× Yes, there is. Yes, there are some quiet rules at my school.

✓ Yes, there are some quiet rules at my school.

The phrase 'Yes, there is' is incorrect because 'rules' is plural, so the correct form is 'there are'. This is a 'There be issue' where the verb must agree in number with the subject.

× Yes, there is. Yes, there are some quiet rules at my school.

✓ Yes, there are some strict rules at my school.

The adjective 'quiet' is incorrectly used to describe 'rules'. The correct adjective should be 'strict' to convey the intended meaning. This is an 'Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs' error.

× Some are about phones and not to use their phones during the lesson.

✓ Some are about phones and not using their phones during the lesson.

The phrase 'not to use' is incorrect here; the gerund form 'not using' fits better after 'are about'. This is an 'Incorrect use of prepositions' error involving verb form after prepositions.

× And it's really strictly, strictly maintained that there should be a good attendance at my school and.

✓ And it's really strict, strictly maintained that there should be good attendance at my school.

The adverb 'strictly' is incorrectly used to modify 'maintained' here; 'strict' as an adjective better describes the rule enforcement. Also, 'a good attendance' should be 'good attendance' as attendance is uncountable. This is an 'Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs' and 'Incorrect use of quantifiers' error.

× And it's really strictly, strictly maintained that there should be a good attendance at my school and.

✓ And it's really strict, strictly maintained that there should be good attendance at my school.

The article 'a' before 'good attendance' is incorrect because 'attendance' is an uncountable noun. This is an 'Incorrect use of quantifiers' error.

× I think it depends because when students have no rules, they are more independent and they think what they should do.

✓ I think it depends because when students have no rules, they are more independent and think about what they should do.

The phrase 'they think what they should do' is incomplete and awkward. It should be 'think about what they should do' to be grammatically correct. This is a 'Sentence structure errors' issue.

× It works time but and sometimes laws can be very stressful, but when you don't have rules they are too free that they may be out of discipline and things.

✓ It works sometimes, but sometimes rules can be very stressful. When you don't have rules, students are too free and may lack discipline.

The original sentence has incorrect conjunctions and awkward phrasing. 'It works time but and sometimes' is incorrect; 'It works sometimes, but sometimes' is correct. Also, 'laws' should be 'rules' in this context. This is an 'Incorrect conjunction use' and 'Sentence structure errors' problem.

× Yes, I have had a few teachers that were so dedicated that they will always trying not to have a free time during their lessons and not they should be always working and trying to work with students even after school time and things.

✓ Yes, I have had a few teachers who were so dedicated that they were always trying not to have free time during their lessons and they were always working and trying to work with students even after school time.

The sentence mixes tenses incorrectly: 'will always trying' should be 'were always trying' to match past tense. Also, 'that' should be 'who' when referring to people. This is a 'Past tense issue' and 'Sentence structure errors' problem.

× Yes, I have had a few teachers that were so dedicated that they will always trying not to have a free time during their lessons and not they should be always working and trying to work with students even after school time and things.

✓ Yes, I have had a few teachers who were so dedicated that they were always trying not to have free time during their lessons and they were always working and trying to work with students even after school time.

The phrase 'and not they should be always working' is incorrect and confusing. It should be 'and they were always working'. This is an 'Incorrect conjunction use' and 'Sentence structure errors' issue.

× I prefer to. I personally prefer to have fewer. Also screw up because I can independently decide what I want to do during my school time.

✓ I prefer to. I personally prefer to have fewer rules because I can independently decide what I want to do during my school time.

The phrase 'Also screw up' is incorrect and unclear. It seems to be a mishearing or typo. The sentence needs the object 'rules' after 'fewer' to be complete. This is an 'Incorrect use of pronouns' and 'Sentence structure errors' problem.

× But also there should be some rules that have to be strictly obeyed such as no smoking or I don't not using telephones because it's distraction.

✓ But also there should be some rules that have to be strictly obeyed such as no smoking or not using telephones because it's distracting.

The phrase 'I don't not using telephones' is incorrect. It should be 'not using telephones'. Also, 'distraction' should be 'distracting' to describe the effect. This is an 'Incorrect use of pronouns' and 'Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs' error.

× I have never had a strict teacher. All my teachers are quite good and they always try to be OK with deadlines and about discipline, but as students also try not to be too harsh on them and give them back the effort they've given us and to try hard.

✓ I have never had a strict teacher. All my teachers are quite good and they always try to be OK with deadlines and discipline, but as students, we also try not to be too harsh on them and give back the effort they've given us by trying hard.

The phrase 'but as students also try not to be too harsh on them' lacks a subject and is unclear. Adding 'we' clarifies the subject. Also, 'give them back the effort' should be 'give back the effort'. This is an 'Incorrect use of pronouns' and 'Sentence structure errors' issue.

× I would not like to work as a teacher in a row through school because there would be students that would think that they are the main figure and everything.

✓ I would not like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because there would be students who would think that they are the main figure and everything.

The phrase 'in a row through school' is incorrect and should be 'in a rule-free school'. Also, 'that' should be 'who' when referring to people. This is an 'Incorrect use of prepositions' and 'Incorrect use of pronouns' error.

× They I don't have think that they would listen to me, they would not have any disciplines and they would not have any respect behaviour towards teachers.

✓ I don't think that they would listen to me; they would not have any discipline and would not show respectful behavior towards teachers.

The phrase 'They I don't have think' is incorrect and should be 'I don't think'. Also, 'disciplines' should be 'discipline' (uncountable), and 'respect behaviour' should be 'respectful behavior'. This is an 'Incorrect use of pronouns' and 'Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs' error.