Rules— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and 'so yeah', and by using more precise vocabulary. Also, try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent and avoid repetition, for example, instead of repeating 'like', use 'for instance' or 'such as'.

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. When I was studying at my school, there were several rules. For instance, we had to wear the school uniform every day. Additionally, boys were required to keep their hair short, while girls had to tie their hair neatly.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but contains some errors such as 'roles' instead of 'rules'. Try to use correct vocabulary and add linking words to improve coherence. Also, provide more specific reasons to support your opinion.

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. I believe students benefit greatly from having rules because without them, everyone might act freely, which could compromise the professionalism and respectful environment of the school.

Sugerencia: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and phrases like 'so dedicated about like'. Use more natural expressions and correct grammar. Also, try to combine sentences using linking words for better flow.

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. I had a very dedicated teacher named Miss Myra, who taught me English in 7th grade. She was very professional and passionate about teaching her students.

Sugerencia: Your answer has grammatical errors such as 'a certain rules' instead of 'certain rules'. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and unclear phrases like 'diligent small moments'. Use clearer vocabulary and structure your answer with linking words.

Ejemplo: Well, I prefer having some rules at school, but not too many because excessive rules can isolate students and prevent them from enjoying small joyful moments in life.

Sugerencia: Your answer is informative but can be improved by using better sentence structure and avoiding repetition such as 'used to beat the student with with'. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had several strict teachers during my school life. One I remember was my Urdu teacher, Miss Shabana, in 5th grade. She was very strict and would punish students with a ruler if they gave wrong answers.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors such as 'many type of students' and awkward phrasing like 'I didn't have that skill set to teach'. Use correct grammar and more natural expressions, and try to link your ideas clearly.

Ejemplo: Well, no, I wouldn't like to be a teacher because it is a tough job. There are many different types of students, and I don't think I have the necessary skills to teach them effectively.

× Like boys have to have a short hacker and girls have to tie their hairs properly.

✓ Like boys have to have a short haircut and girls have to tie their hair properly.

The word 'hacker' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'haircut'. Also, 'hairs' is incorrect when referring to hair collectively; 'hair' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized here.

× I think students benefit a lot from these roles.

✓ I think students benefit a lot from these rules.

The word 'roles' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is 'rules'. 'Roles' means parts or functions, while 'rules' means regulations.

× She was so dedicated about like teaching students and by her profession she was very much professional.

✓ She was so dedicated to teaching students and by her profession she was very professional.

The phrase 'dedicated about like teaching' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'dedicated to' followed by the gerund 'teaching'. Also, 'very much professional' should be 'very professional'.

× Well, in my preference, I'd say, uh, it's good to have a certain rules at school, but not many because it also kind of isolate the students and they couldn't enjoy their like diligent small moments of life.

✓ Well, in my preference, I'd say, uh, it's good to have certain rules at school, but not many because it also kind of isolates the students and they can't enjoy their small diligent moments of life.

The phrase 'a certain rules' is incorrect because 'rules' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'isolate' should be 'isolates' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Couldn't' should be 'can't' to match present tense context.

× Yes in my school life after it had many strict teachers but the one teacher I remember from my 5th standard it was my Urdu teacher.

✓ Yes, in my school life, I had many strict teachers but the one teacher I remember from my 5th standard was my Urdu teacher.

The phrase 'after it had many strict teachers' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'I had many strict teachers'. Also, 'it was my Urdu teacher' should be 'was my Urdu teacher' to correctly complete the sentence.

× Like she literally used to beat the student with with the ruler.

✓ Like she literally used to beat the students with the ruler.

The singular 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with the context of multiple students being beaten.

× Well, no, I really don't like to be a teacher since I think it's a tough job to be a teacher and teach the student.

✓ Well, no, I really don't like to be a teacher since I think it's a tough job to be a teacher and teach students.

The singular 'student' should be plural 'students' to match the general statement about teaching multiple students.

× Like there are many type of students.

✓ Like there are many types of students.

The singular 'type' should be plural 'types' to agree with 'many', which requires a plural noun.

× So I think I didn't have that skill set to teach.

✓ So I think I don't have that skill set to teach.

The phrase 'I didn't have' is past tense, but the context suggests present tense 'I don't have' is appropriate to express current ability.