Rules— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve vocabulary and clarity by using correct words and sentence structure. Replace 'roads' with 'rules' and clarify the safety aspect. Avoid grammatical errors and be more specific.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are several rules at my school that help ensure students' safety and maintain order.

Sugerencia: Clarify your ideas and complete your sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid incomplete thoughts. Also, use correct vocabulary such as 'rules' instead of 'role'.

Ejemplo: I think it depends on the type of rules. For example, rules that prevent students from hurting others and encourage good behavior are very important and beneficial. However, unnecessary rules might not be helpful.

Sugerencia: Use correct tense and sentence structure. Avoid repetition and be more specific about how the teacher helped you. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a really dedicated teacher in my first year of high school who helped us discover our interests and passions.

Sugerencia: Correct vocabulary errors ('rolls' should be 'rules') and unclear phrases ('prescribed displayed person'). Complete your sentences and explain your opinion clearly with supporting details.

Ejemplo: I prefer fewer rules because I am a responsible person and can manage myself. However, I understand that some students might need more rules to guide their behavior.

Sugerencia: Use correct vocabulary ('crime school' is likely a mistake) and sentence structure. Be more specific about how the strict teacher helped you learn. Avoid filler words like 'uh'.

Ejemplo: Yes, last year at my school, the principal was very strict when teaching grammar, and I learned a lot from his lessons.

Sugerencia: Clarify your ideas and complete your sentences. Use correct vocabulary and grammar. Explain why a rule-free school would be challenging for you as a teacher.

Ejemplo: I would not like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because managing students' behavior would be very stressful without any rules.

× Yes, there's couple roads in my schools and I think the roads provide a safety place for students.

✓ Yes, there are a couple of roads in my school and I think the roads provide a safe place for students.

The phrase 'there's' is a contraction of 'there is', which is singular. Since 'couple roads' is plural, the correct form is 'there are'. Also, 'a couple of' is the correct quantifier. 'Schools' should be singular if referring to one school. 'Safety place' is incorrect; 'safe place' is the correct adjective-noun combination.

× Yes, there's couple roads in my schools and I think the roads provide a safety place for students.

✓ Yes, there are a couple of roads in my school and I think the roads provide a safe place for students.

The preposition 'in' is acceptable here, but 'at' or 'on' could be more precise depending on context. However, the main issue is with 'couple roads' needing 'a couple of'.

× I think it depends on what role.

✓ I think it depends on what rule.

The word 'role' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'rule' as the question is about rules for students.

× For example, if it's the rules it's about to not hurting others and behave well, I think that role is really important for student and beneficial.

✓ For example, if the rules are about not hurting others and behaving well, I think that rule is really important for students and beneficial.

The sentence misuses 'it's' and 'role'. 'It's' should be 'the rules are'. 'Role' should be 'rule'. Also, 'behave' should be 'behaving' to match the gerund form after 'about'. 'Student' should be plural 'students'.

× But if it's the role is not that, I think it's.

✓ But if the rule is not like that, I think it isn't important.

The sentence is incomplete and uses 'role' instead of 'rule'. Also, 'it's' is ambiguous; a clearer completion is needed to convey the intended meaning.

× Yes, I had a really dedicated teacher when I'm first year student high school.

✓ Yes, I had a really dedicated teacher when I was a first-year high school student.

The phrase 'I'm' is present tense and incorrect here; past tense 'I was' is needed. Also, 'first year student high school' should be reordered to 'first-year high school student'.

× The teacher really helps us help us to find out what we really like and what our deeply desired.

✓ The teacher really helped us to find out what we really like and what we deeply desire.

Repetition of 'help us' is redundant. 'Helps' should be past tense 'helped' to match the past context. 'Our deeply desired' is incorrect; it should be 'we deeply desire'.

× For me, I prefer fewer rolls because I think I'm a prescribed displayed person, so I don't think I need a lot of rules to control me.

✓ For me, I prefer fewer rules because I think I'm a self-disciplined person, so I don't think I need a lot of rules to control me.

'Rolls' is a misspelling of 'rules'. 'Prescribed displayed person' is incorrect; likely intended 'self-disciplined person'.

× But for others, I think we need more roles because the.

✓ But for others, I think we need more rules because they may need more guidance.

The sentence is incomplete and uses 'roles' instead of 'rules'. It needs completion to make sense.

× I think yes, when I went to the crime school at last year, the principal was really strict to teach us, uh, grammar, and I think I learned about a lot from the teachers.

✓ I think yes, when I went to the cram school last year, the principal was really strict in teaching us grammar, and I think I learned a lot from the teachers.

'Crime school' is a misspelling of 'cram school'. 'At last year' should be 'last year'. 'Strict to teach us' should be 'strict in teaching us'. 'Learned about a lot' should be 'learned a lot'.

× I don't want to work for a teacher and a real free school because I need to pay a lot of tensions on students behavior if they're not paying a lot of attention on me, so I rather just go for.

✓ I don't want to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because I would need to pay a lot of attention to students' behavior if they're not paying attention to me, so I would rather not.

'Work for a teacher' should be 'work as a teacher'. 'Real free school' should be 'rule-free school'. 'Pay a lot of tensions' is incorrect; it should be 'pay a lot of attention'. 'On students behavior' should be 'to students' behavior'. The sentence is incomplete and needs proper modal verbs for hypothetical situations.