Rules— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, use correct tense and clearer sentence structure. Also, avoid redundancy and keep the answer concise and natural.

Ejemplo: Yes, there were several rules at my school in the past, especially regarding uniforms and student behavior, which were essential for maintaining discipline.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but has hesitation and some grammatical mistakes. Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and use plural forms correctly. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe more rules would benefit students because they provide clear guidelines on how to behave respectfully towards teachers and communicate effectively with classmates.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and avoiding repetition. Use more precise vocabulary and linking words to enhance coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, when I was in middle school, I had a math teacher who was very dedicated. She enjoyed teaching and always motivated us to pursue our goals and achieve great things.

Sugerencia: Your answer has unclear phrasing and grammatical errors. Focus on clarity and correct sentence structure. Use linking words to explain your opinion logically.

Ejemplo: In my opinion, there should be more rules at school, especially regarding behavior, because students need guidance on building good relationships and communicating effectively with teachers and classmates.

Sugerencia: Your answer repeats ideas and has grammatical mistakes. Use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. Try to combine sentences for better flow.

Ejemplo: Yes, before high school, I had several strict teachers who were dedicated and enforced discipline because our curriculum was challenging.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains hesitation and grammatical errors. Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

Ejemplo: I have never thought about that before, but I believe it would be difficult to work in a school without rules because students might not know how to behave respectfully towards teachers. Therefore, I would prefer not to work in such an environment.

× Yes, there were several rules at my school at the pass and especially that was related with a uniform and self behavior that was really essential for students of our school.

✓ Yes, there were several rules at my school in the past, especially those related to the uniform and self-behavior, which were really essential for students at our school.

The phrase 'at the pass' is incorrect; it should be 'in the past' to indicate a previous time. Also, 'that was related with' should be 'those related to' to correctly refer to plural 'rules' and use the correct preposition. 'Self behavior' should be hyphenated as 'self-behavior' to form a compound noun. The verb 'was' should be 'were' to agree with the plural subject 'rules.'

× I, I think yes, because rules can put the students in specific frames where they can behave their self, uh, well, toward the teacher.

✓ I think yes, because rules can put students in specific frames where they can behave themselves well toward the teacher.

The phrase 'behave their self' is incorrect; the correct reflexive pronoun is 'themselves' for plural subjects. Also, 'the students' can be simplified to 'students' for general statements. The adverb 'well' should be placed after the verb phrase for correct adverb placement.

× So I think that rules helps people to understand how to behave and how to, uh, interact with and communicate with their classmates.

✓ So I think that rules help people to understand how to behave and how to interact and communicate with their classmates.

The subject 'rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'help' instead of 'helps' to maintain subject-verb agreement. Also, 'interact with and communicate with' can be simplified to 'interact and communicate' for conciseness.

× Yes, when I was in the middle school, I had one math teacher who was really dedicated toward her students.

✓ Yes, when I was in middle school, I had one math teacher who was really dedicated to her students.

The phrase 'in the middle school' should be 'in middle school' as 'middle school' is a general term and does not require 'the.' Also, 'dedicated toward' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'dedicated to.'

× She enjoyed what she teaches and she always motivated her students to go toward their goals and and achieve big things.

✓ She enjoyed what she taught and she always motivated her students to pursue their goals and achieve big things.

The verb 'teaches' should be in past tense 'taught' to match the past context. The phrase 'go toward their goals' is better expressed as 'pursue their goals' for natural English usage. The repeated 'and' is a redundancy and should be corrected to a single 'and.'

× In my opinion, there should be more rules at school, especially related with behavior, since students shouldn't start how to be in a good relationship, how to communicate with their teachers and how to interact with their classmates.

✓ In my opinion, there should be more rules at school, especially related to behavior, since students should learn how to build good relationships, how to communicate with their teachers, and how to interact with their classmates.

The phrase 'related with' should be 'related to' as 'related to' is the correct prepositional phrase. 'Shouldn't start how to be' is incorrect; it should be 'should learn how to' to express the intended meaning. 'Be in a good relationship' is better expressed as 'build good relationships' for clarity and correctness.

× Yes. When I wasn't in high school, I had several teachers who was really strict, especially toward our studies and because our curriculum was really hard and challenging.

✓ Yes. When I was in high school, I had several teachers who were really strict, especially toward our studies because our curriculum was really hard and challenging.

The phrase 'wasn't in high school' is incorrect; it should be 'was in high school' to indicate the time when the events occurred. The verb 'was' should be 'were' to agree with the plural subject 'teachers.' The conjunction 'and because' is redundant; 'because' alone suffices.

× Our teachers was also really dedicated to teach us and they was really strict toward our studies.

✓ Our teachers were also really dedicated to teaching us and they were really strict toward our studies.

The verb 'was' should be 'were' to agree with the plural subject 'teachers.' The phrase 'dedicated to teach us' should be 'dedicated to teaching us' because 'dedicated to' is followed by a gerund. Subject-verb agreement errors are corrected here.

× But in my opinion, it's really hard to work in environment when there is no rules and people don't know how to behave them toward teachers and there is no respect toward them.

✓ But in my opinion, it's really hard to work in an environment where there are no rules and people don't know how to behave toward teachers and there is no respect for them.

The phrase 'in environment' requires the article 'an' to be grammatically correct. 'There is no rules' should be 'there are no rules' to agree with the plural noun 'rules.' The phrase 'behave them toward teachers' is incorrect; 'behave toward teachers' is correct as 'behave' is intransitive and does not take an object. 'Respect toward' should be 'respect for' as 'respect for' is the correct collocation.