Rules— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to directly state the rules and explain their purpose clearly and concisely. Avoid filler words and incorrect word forms.

Ejemplo: Yes, my school has several important rules. For example, students must wear a proper uniform and be punctual for classes. Additionally, mobile phones are not allowed during lessons because they distract students and affect their concentration.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses both advantages and disadvantages, which is good. However, improve grammar and clarity, and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, be more specific about how rules affect motivation and expression.

Ejemplo: I think more rules can help maintain discipline and create a structured environment. However, they might also limit students' freedom and creativity. For instance, too many rules can reduce motivation and make students feel uncomfortable expressing their opinions to teachers.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant but contains some grammatical errors. Use past tense consistently and add linking words to improve coherence. Also, expand slightly to explain why you found her dedicated.

Ejemplo: Yes, I was fortunate to have a very dedicated math teacher in 10th grade. She was polite and calm, and she provided extra classes on holidays for students who could not afford private tuition. Because of her support, many students improved their grades.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and repetitions. Try to organize your ideas logically, use linking words, and avoid filler sounds. Also, complete your thoughts fully to make your point clear.

Ejemplo: Honestly, I think it depends on the situation and the students. More rules can create a structured environment, but they also have drawbacks. For example, too many rules might prevent students from expressing their thoughts to teachers freely.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical mistakes and hesitations. Use correct verb forms and avoid filler words. Also, clarify your reasoning with linking words for better coherence.

Ejemplo: No, I have never had a strict teacher. I believe it depends on the students. If students always show respect to their teachers and complete their work on time, teachers tend to be less strict.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly and use correct tenses. Also, explain your reasoning with specific details and linking words.

Ejemplo: No, I would not like to work as a teacher because it is not my chosen profession. However, if I had the chance, I would prefer a school with some rules because both having rules and no rules have their benefits and drawbacks.

× At your school, just my school has several important rules that benefit all students all ways.

✓ At my school, there are several important rules that benefit all students in all ways.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'just my school' and lacks the verb 'there are' to indicate existence. Also, 'all ways' should be 'in all ways' to be grammatically correct.

× Moreover, mobile phones are not allowed during classy, which distract their student and do not focus to their studies.

✓ Moreover, mobile phones are not allowed during class, which distracts students and prevents them from focusing on their studies.

The word 'classy' is incorrect; it should be 'class'. 'Distract their student' is incorrect; it should be 'distracts students' to agree in number and subject. 'Do not focus to their studies' is incorrect; it should be 'prevents them from focusing on their studies'.

× However, it also restrict the student freedom and their creativity.

✓ However, it also restricts students' freedom and their creativity.

The verb 'restrict' should be 'restricts' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'The student freedom' should be 'students' freedom' to indicate possession and plural form.

× Sometime it can affect their motivation and the student cannot express their feelings among teacher.

✓ Sometimes it can affect their motivation and students cannot express their feelings to their teachers.

The word 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes'. 'The student' should be plural 'students' to match 'their motivation'. 'Among teacher' is incorrect; it should be 'to their teachers'.

× She also provide extra classes on holidays for those students who cannot afford their tuition fees from outside.

✓ She also provided extra classes on holidays for those students who could not afford their tuition fees from outside.

The verb 'provide' should be in past tense 'provided' to match the past tense context. 'Cannot' should be 'could not' to maintain past tense consistency.

× If I if schools have more rules, they can it can create having create and structured environment.

✓ If schools have more rules, they can create a structured environment.

The original sentence has repeated words and incorrect structure. Removing repetitions and correcting the phrase to 'create a structured environment' improves clarity and grammar.

× But there are many draw, uh, drawbacks as well that student cannot show express their thoughts toward teacher and it can create.

✓ But there are many drawbacks as well, and students cannot express their thoughts to teachers, which can create problems.

'Draw' is incorrect and should be 'drawbacks'. 'Student' should be plural 'students' to match the context. 'Show express' is redundant; 'express' alone is sufficient. 'Toward teacher' should be 'to teachers'. The sentence was incomplete and is completed for clarity.

× I believe that it totally depend on student.

✓ I believe that it totally depends on the student.

The verb 'depend' should be 'depends' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Also, 'student' should be preceded by 'the' to specify.

× If students uh always give a respectful environment toward their teacher and complete their work on time, then might then uh tend to be teacher tend to be less strict.

✓ If students always show respect towards their teachers and complete their work on time, then teachers tend to be less strict.

'Give a respectful environment toward their teacher' is awkward; 'show respect towards their teachers' is correct. The sentence had repeated and misplaced words which were corrected for clarity and grammar.

× No, I would not like to work as a teacher because it was not my chosen profession.

✓ No, I would not like to work as a teacher because it is not my chosen profession.

The phrase 'was not my chosen profession' should be in present tense 'is not my chosen profession' because the choice is current and ongoing.

× But if I had a chance, then I chose.

✓ But if I had a chance, then I would choose.

The conditional sentence requires 'would choose' to express hypothetical future action, not 'chose' which is past tense.

× Then I chosen both rules because in both rules have some benefits as well as drawbacks.

✓ Then I would choose both rules because both have some benefits as well as drawbacks.

'Chosen' is past participle and incorrectly used here; 'would choose' fits the conditional mood. 'In both rules have' is incorrect; 'both have' is correct.