Rules— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to be more concise and avoid unnecessary phrases. Also, end your answer clearly without incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are several rules at my school. They help students develop discipline, which is important for personal growth and becoming educated individuals.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and directly. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe students benefit from school rules because they promote personal growth and discipline, which I have experienced myself.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains many fillers like 'umm' and 'uh'. Try to reduce these to sound more fluent. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas and provide more specific details.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a dedicated teacher in grade 10 who was very humble. However, I felt upset because some students did not respect him.

Sugerencia: Your answer is fragmented and contains many fillers. Try to combine your sentences smoothly using linking words and avoid unnecessary pauses. Be clear and concise.

Ejemplo: I prefer having a reasonable number of rules that all students must follow because they bring positive changes in students' lives.

Sugerencia: Your answer has unclear parts and many fillers. Also, the phrase 'got really low milk' is confusing. Try to use clear vocabulary and avoid fillers. Provide specific details logically connected.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a strict math teacher in grade 5. She gave weekly tests and punished students who scored low marks, which was quite scary.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but contains some grammatical errors and fillers. Try to avoid fillers and use correct grammar. Also, use linking words to explain your reasons more smoothly.

Ejemplo: No, I would not like to work in a rule-free school because teaching undisciplined students without rules is very challenging.

× Of course, there are actually many rules to be followed by students at my school and they are very important for us in order to learn discipline, which will be very helpful for our growth and also which makes us an educated person.

✓ Of course, there are actually many rules to be followed by students at my school and they are very important for us in order to learn discipline, which will be very helpful for our growth and also which makes us educated persons.

The pronoun 'an educated person' is singular, but it refers to multiple students, so it should be plural 'educated persons' to agree with the plural subject 'students'. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1).

× What the.

✓ [Sentence incomplete and unclear, please clarify or remove.]

The sentence 'What the.' is incomplete and does not form a proper sentence. It lacks a verb and object, making it a sentence structure error (ID 26). It should be clarified or removed for coherence.

× Of course, students do really benefit from rules of school because I always want a student as well and the personal growth and discipline that I have learned in me was all because of the rules that were that were followed.

✓ Of course, students really benefit from school rules because I was also a student, and the personal growth and discipline that I have learned came from the rules that were followed.

The phrase 'I always want a student as well' is incorrect; it should be 'I was also a student' to correctly express the idea. Also, 'that I have learned in me' is incorrect; it should be 'that I have learned' or 'that I have gained'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12) and sentence structure error (ID 26).

× Umm, I do recall having a really dedicated teacher when I was in grade 10 and he was a very humble person. Uh, also the fact that students did not really, umm, respect him made me really kind of upset.

✓ Umm, I do recall having a really dedicated teacher when I was in grade 10, and he was a very humble person. Also, the fact that students did not really respect him made me quite upset.

The sentence is mostly correct but 'really kind of upset' is informal and awkward; 'quite upset' is clearer. No major grammar error but slight improvement in adverb usage (ID 13).

× I would actually prefer having an efficient amount of rules, not more nor less. That needs to be followed by each and every student. Which is really uh, umm, significant. Which brings really significant, uh, changes in uh individual students life.

✓ I would actually prefer having an efficient number of rules, not more nor less, that need to be followed by each and every student. This is really significant and brings significant changes in an individual student's life.

The original sentences are fragmented and have incorrect quantifier 'amount' for countable 'rules' (ID 14). Also, 'students life' should be 'student's life' (possessive). The sentence structure is improved by combining fragments and correcting quantifiers and possessives.

× I would actually prefer having an efficient amount of rules, not more nor less.

✓ I would actually prefer having an efficient number of rules, not more nor less.

'Rules' are countable, so 'amount' is incorrect; 'number' should be used instead. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers (ID 14).

× Yes, of course. I do remember that I had a really strict teacher when I was in grade 5 and that teacher taught maths. Uh, she took a weekly test and whenever, uh, any student got really low milk, she used to put up. So that was scary.

✓ Yes, of course. I do remember that I had a really strict teacher when I was in grade 5 and that teacher taught maths. She gave a weekly test, and whenever any student got really low marks, she used to punish them. So that was scary.

'Got really low milk' is incorrect; it should be 'got really low marks'. Also, 'she used to put up' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'she used to punish them'. This is incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12) and sentence structure errors (ID 26).

× No, absolutely not. I would rather go jobless than to be a teacher in a school which is rule free. Umm, the reason is that teaching students who does not have any discipline, who does not have any rule to follow is really hard and challenging.

✓ No, absolutely not. I would rather be jobless than be a teacher in a school that is rule-free. The reason is that teaching students who do not have any discipline and who do not have any rules to follow is really hard and challenging.

'Students who does not have' is incorrect; it should be 'students who do not have' to agree in number (plural subject with plural verb). Also, 'rule free' should be hyphenated as 'rule-free'. This is a subject-verb agreement error (ID 27) and incorrect use of adjectives (ID 13).