Rules— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer more concise, grammatically correct and directly address the question. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief comment), then add one specific example (e.g., punctuality) with one reason. Use correct articles and singular/plural forms, and avoid redundant phrases.

Ejemplo: Yes. My school had several rules to maintain discipline and ensure fairness. For example, there was a strict punctuality rule: students had to arrive before the first bell, which reduced late arrivals and kept classes running on time.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear opinion sentence followed by one or two specific reasons. Avoid repetition and fragmented sentences. Use linking words (because, so) to connect ideas and keep answers within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe students benefit from reasonable rules because rules improve discipline and concentration. For instance, a homework policy ensures students complete assignments regularly, which helps them understand lessons better and achieve higher grades.

Sugerencia: Answer with a clear topic sentence naming the teacher and state one specific way they helped you. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Provide a short example of what the teacher did (e.g., extra lessons, positive feedback) and the result on your learning.

Ejemplo: Yes. In fifth grade I had a dedicated English teacher who gave me extra after-school lessons to improve my grammar and speaking. Her encouragement and regular practice boosted my confidence, and I saw clear improvement in my class tests.

Sugerencia: Give a direct preference (more or fewer) and support it with one clear reason and a specific example. Avoid vague phrases and contradictory wording. Use correct word choices (strict vs. more rules) and concise structure.

Ejemplo: I prefer more rules at school because they promote good habits and safety. For example, a rule requiring teamwork projects teaches responsibility and improves students' social skills.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence and mention one reason why the teacher was strict. Give a concise example of how their strictness affected you (positive or negative). Correct tense and phrasing to make the answer natural.

Ejemplo: Yes. My history teacher in middle school was very strict and insisted on memorising dates and facts. Because of her firm expectations, I studied more carefully and gradually improved my recall for exams.

Sugerencia: Give a clear yes/no answer followed by a balanced reason. Explain one negative consequence of a rule-free school with a specific example. Avoid filler words and incorrect vocabulary (rural vs. rule-free) and keep sentences short and coherent.

Ejemplo: No, I would not like to teach in a rule-free school because lack of rules can harm students' learning. For example, if students use phones during lessons, it distracts others and reduces lesson time, so teachers cannot cover the curriculum effectively.

× I really remember that there are number of rules in my schools that help the students to keep in discipline as well as preventing the fairness between them.

✓ I remember that there are a number of rules in my school that help students keep discipline and prevent unfairness between them.

The phrase 'there are number of rules' needs the article 'a' before 'number'; 'schools' should be singular 'school' to match 'my'; 'the students' can be general 'students'; 'to keep in discipline' should be 'keep discipline'; 'preventing the fairness' is incorrect — use 'prevent unfairness'. Improve by using correct articles and noun forms and simpler verb phrases.

× I remember that there was a essential rules regarding the punctuality as well.

✓ I remember that there were essential rules regarding punctuality as well.

After 'there' the verb must agree with the plural noun 'rules' so use 'were' not 'was'. Also 'a' is incorrect before plural 'rules'; use 'essential rules' and drop 'the' before 'punctuality'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct article usage.

× Yes, I definitely believe that students get a better results by following the rules.

✓ Yes, I definitely believe that students get better results by following the rules.

'A better results' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'a' and use 'better results'. Also 'students get' is correct for plural. Ensure number agreement between articles and nouns.

× Because if they are under the rules and following all the rules, they it helps to increase their discipline as well as their concentration about their studies and they get good academic scores in there further as well as if they following the rules they they it helps them to.

✓ If students follow the rules, it helps to increase their discipline and concentration on their studies, and they get better academic scores in the future.

Original sentence has redundant phrases, incorrect pronouns ('they it'), wrong verb forms ('if they following'), and 'there further' is incorrect for 'in the future'. Reorganize into a conditional 'If students follow...' and use correct verb forms, pronouns, and prepositions to make a clear, grammatical sentence.

× Yes, in my formative years when I was in my 5th 5th standard, I had a really dedicated teacher that always helped me to motivate in my weak subjects I am quite weak in.

✓ Yes, in my formative years when I was in 5th standard, I had a really dedicated teacher who always helped motivate me in the subjects I was weak in.

Use 'who' for people instead of 'that'; 'helped me to motivate' should be 'helped motivate me' or 'helped me to become motivated'; 'I am quite weak in' should be backshifed to past tense 'I was weak in' to match 'had'. Remove repeated '5th' and use correct relative pronoun and verb form.

× I was quite weak in English subject.

✓ I was quite weak in English.

'English subject' is redundant; 'English' suffices as the subject name. Remove unnecessary noun to improve natural phrasing.

× She always motivated me as well as helped me to increase my confidence level and whenever I was feeling low she helped me to enhance my.

✓ She always motivated me and helped increase my confidence, and whenever I felt low she helped me recover.

Sentence had awkward connectors 'as well as', redundant 'confidence level', and incomplete ending 'enhance my.' Use parallel structure 'motivated me and helped increase my confidence' and complete the idea with 'helped me recover' or similar. Use past tense 'felt' to match narrative.

× In my view, I believe that a strict rule should be taken in the school because it is essential for the overall development of the children, as well as fewer rules makes them, you know, in a big concentration.

✓ In my view, I believe that strict rules should be enforced in school because they are essential for the overall development of children; having fewer rules makes them less focused.

Use plural 'rules' and 'enforced' rather than 'taken'. 'Fewer rules makes' is incorrect — plural subject needs 'make' and the phrase 'in a big concentration' is ungrammatical; replace with 'less focused'. Also avoid filler 'you know'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and clearer conjunctions.

× Yes, it definitely. I had a really strict teacher in my school time when I was in Swift Standard.

✓ Yes, definitely. I had a really strict teacher during my school days when I was in Sixth Standard.

'It definitely' is incomplete; use 'definitely' alone. 'School time' should be 'school days' and 'Swift Standard' seems incorrect — likely 'Sixth Standard'. Use past tense consistent phrasing and correct noun collocations.

× The teacher of history is I found it very strict for me because I was not very well in historical subject and I always forgot the dates and the years so.

✓ The history teacher was very strict with me because I was not good at history and I always forgot dates and years.

Original has awkward word order 'The teacher of history is I found it very strict for me'. Use 'The history teacher was very strict with me'. 'Not very well in historical subject' should be 'not good at history'. Remove filler 'the' before 'dates and years'. Simplify and correct article and preposition use.

× Yes, definitely everyone likes to umm, work in a tea as a teacher in the rural free school because it quite easy for them to do anything.

✓ Yes, many people would like to work as teachers in a rule-free school because it is quite easy for them to do whatever they want.

Original mixes 'definitely everyone likes' (overgeneralization) and has 'work in a tea' (typo) and 'rural free school' instead of 'rule-free school'. Use conditional/modal 'would like' to express preference. Ensure correct noun 'teacher' and hyphenated adjective 'rule-free'.

× They're using their mobile phone as well as spending a free time in there.

✓ They use their mobile phones and spend free time there.

'They're using' present continuous is odd for habitual action; use simple present 'use'. 'Their mobile phone' should be plural 'phones' to match plural subject. 'Spending a free time in there' is ungrammatical — use 'spend free time there'. Fix pronoun-verb agreement and natural collocations.

× But in my perspective it gave a bad impact on the children's because they need to giving a huge time to their children's to update.

✓ But from my perspective it has a negative impact on children because they need to spend a lot of time updating themselves.

'In my perspective' should be 'from my perspective'. 'Gave a bad impact on the children's' is ungrammatical — use 'has a negative impact on children'. 'Need to giving a huge time' should be 'need to spend a lot of time'. Remove incorrect possessive 'children's'. Use correct adverbs and noun forms.