Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and filler phrases, and add one specific detail to support your answer. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and stay updated on their lives. For example, we often share funny stories and make plans for the weekend, which keeps our friendship strong.

Sugerencia: Reduce hesitations and be specific. Give a clear topic sentence, name the teams correctly, and explain briefly why the topic interests you. Avoid trailing off at the end.

Ejemplo: We usually chat about football because we all support clubs like Real Madrid and Barcelona. For instance, we discuss El Clasico matches, players' performances, and predictions for upcoming games.

Sugerencia: Clarify your preference and give a logical reason with correct vocabulary. Avoid unclear phrases and unnecessary words. Use a linking word like 'because' to explain your choice and provide a brief example.

Ejemplo: I prefer chatting with one friend because group conversations can be noisy and I often lose track of the discussion. For example, when we chat one-on-one I can focus and have a deeper conversation.

Sugerencia: Make the sentence smoother and correct grammar. Use one or two supporting details explaining advantages of face-to-face communication and a linking word such as 'because' or 'so'.

Ejemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it's easier to concentrate and have deeper conversations. For example, we can read each other's expressions and resolve misunderstandings more quickly.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and organize your response. State whether you argue, briefly explain why arguments happen, and give a short example. Avoid repetition and unclear phrasing.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do argue with my friends sometimes because disagreements are natural among close people. For instance, we might argue about plans or opinions, but we usually resolve it quickly and it can even strengthen our relationship.

× Yes, I love chatting with my friends. Actually chatting with my friends is one of the most favorite hobbies that I have.

✓ Yes, I love chatting with my friends. Actually, chatting with my friends is one of my favorite hobbies.

'Most favorite' is redundant and ungrammatical; 'favorite' already indicates the superlative. Also use the possessive phrase 'one of my favorite hobbies' rather than 'one of the most favorite hobbies that I have.' Add a comma after 'Actually' for readability.

× And as you know, chatting is so easy and really quick to contact with my friends.

✓ And as you know, chatting is so easy and it is really quick to contact my friends.

The verb 'contact' does not require the preposition 'with' when used with a direct object: say 'contact my friends.' Also the original sentence lacked a clear subject for 'is really quick'; adding 'it is' makes the sentence grammatical.

× I usually chat about umm football with my friends because we are all fans of UMM, Real Madrid and Barcelona and uh, that's why we always chat about El Clasico with my.

✓ I usually chat about football with my friends because we are all fans of Manchester United, Real Madrid, and Barcelona, and that's why we always chat about El Clásico together.

Abbreviated or incorrect team name 'UMM' is unclear; use correct team names. The phrase 'with my' is incomplete and needs an object; 'together' completes the idea. Also add commas in a list. 'El Clasico' is commonly written 'El Clásico' (accent optional) and the sentence needs 'together' or 'with each other' to be grammatical.

× I prefer to chat with all the boyfriend because when I chat with a group of people I lost in umm, actually in things I lost in umm thingies.

✓ I prefer to chat with my boyfriend because when I chat with a group of people I get lost in the conversation.

'All the boyfriend' is incorrect pronoun/noun use; use 'my boyfriend' or 'friends' depending on meaning. 'I lost' is wrong tense and verb choice; use 'I get lost' to indicate a habitual present reaction. 'Lost in the conversation' is the natural collocation.

× And yeah, that's why I chat with only one friend.

✓ And yeah, that's why I chat with only one friend.

This sentence is grammatically correct in present tense to express habitual action. No change needed. (Included for completeness.)

× I prefer 100% to communicate face to face because when I communicate face to face with my friends or I can more concentrate and have deeper actual conversation with my friends.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because when I talk with my friends in person I can concentrate more and have deeper, more meaningful conversations with them.

Remove unnecessary '100%'; it is acceptable but informal. 'Face to face' should be 'face to face' or 'in person' consistently. The clause 'or I can more concentrate' is ungrammatical; correct word order is 'I can concentrate more.' 'Deeper actual conversation' is awkward; use 'deeper, more meaningful conversations.' Also replace repeated 'with my friends' with 'with them' to avoid repetition.

× That person is actually is common the most common things between close friends. Yeah, and 100% I argue with friends with my friends and and actually I like I like it.

✓ Arguments are actually one of the most common things among close friends. Yes, I do argue with my friends, and actually I like it.

The original sentence has repeated words and incorrect word order ('That person is actually is common the most common things'). Use a noun phrase 'Arguments are one of the most common things among close friends.' '100% I argue with friends with my friends' repeats and misorders pronouns; use 'I do argue with my friends.' Remove duplicated words and simplify wording to be grammatical and clear.