Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Reduce hesitations and repetitions, use a clear topic sentence and two supporting details. Mention specific apps or reasons concisely and correct minor grammar (e.g. "the Facebook" → "Facebook", "missing as someone" → "missing someone"). Aim for 2–4 sentences and use linking words like "also" or "for example."

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. I often use WhatsApp and Instagram to keep in touch, and I also message my family. For example, when I miss someone, I usually send a voice note or photos to stay connected.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence and add specific details instead of vague phrases like "other stuff." Use linking words (e.g. "for example", "often") and fewer hesitations. Mention particular topics such as memories, plans, or hobbies.

Ejemplo: We usually talk about our school memories and what we did together in tenth grade. For example, we share funny stories, photos from old events, and sometimes we discuss plans to meet up or future goals.

Sugerencia: Structure the answer: state your preference and give two clear reasons using linking words ("because", "however"). Correct grammar (e.g. "It's all depend" → "It depends", "one of my friend" → "one of my friends"). Keep it concise and specific about situations.

Ejemplo: It depends on the situation. If I need personal advice, I prefer to talk one-on-one because it's private and easier to explain. However, when many friends are missing each other, we use a WhatsApp group to share photos and messages together.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and contrast the two options with reasons. Use linking words like "but" and "so" properly, and avoid filler words. Correct verb forms ("I preferred" → "I prefer") and be concise about when you use social media or video calls.

Ejemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it's more personal and clearer. However, when friends live far away, I use social media or video calls to stay in touch, for example, video calling them on weekends.

Sugerencia: Give a clear opening sentence, then explain reasons and give an example. Reduce hesitations and correct phrasing (e.g. "Not mostly" → "Not often", "we are agree on the one decision" → "we usually reach an agreement"). Use linking words like "however" and "usually."

Ejemplo: Not often — we rarely argue. However, sometimes we have different opinions about plans or money, and we discuss them calmly. Usually, we listen to each other and reach an agreement afterwards.

× I am using WhatsApp, Instagram, umm, and the Facebook for uh, chatting, uh, to with my friends, uh, and also with my family.

✓ I use WhatsApp, Instagram and Facebook to chat with my friends and my family.

The progressive 'am using' implies a current continuous action; here the student describes habitual behavior, so simple present 'use' is correct (Grammar problem type ID 10). Also 'to with' is incorrect preposition use; use 'to chat with' or simply 'to chat' (type 11). Remove unnecessary articles before 'Facebook'. Suggestion: use simple present for routines and 'chat with' for the verb+preposition collocation.

× and the Facebook for uh, chatting, uh, to with my friends, uh, and also with my family.

✓ and Facebook to chat with my friends and my family.

The definite article 'the' is not used before most social media names like 'Facebook' (Grammar problem type ID 22). Use the platform name without 'the'. Also correct verb-preposition order to 'chat with' (type 11).

× So it's very good thing if you are missing as someone so you can chat.

✓ So it's a very good thing: if you miss someone, you can chat with them.

Original sentence has wrong word order and missing articles/pronouns (Grammar problem type ID 26). Use 'a very good thing' and change 'you are missing as someone' to 'you miss someone'. Add 'with them' to complete the idea. Suggest practicing subject-verb-object order and using pronouns for clarity.

× Umm, it's about uh, my other friends, like uh, so uh, my friends from uh, 10th class, uh, so some when, when we are chatting, so we are uh, talking about our previous days, like how we enjoy and other stuff.

✓ It's about my other friends, for example my friends from 10th grade. When we chat, we talk about the past, how we enjoyed ourselves and other things.

'From 10th class' is a nonstandard prepositional phrase; use 'from 10th grade' or 'in 10th grade' (Grammar problem type ID 11). 'Previous days' is vague; 'the past' is better. 'How we enjoy' should be past 'how we enjoyed ourselves' (tense issue type 6/5), but primary errors are preposition and sentence structure (ID 11 and 26). Suggest using clearer prepositions and consistent tense for past events.

× It's all depend on situation if I need any advice and it's a personal thing of two people so I'm just talking with one of my friend.

✓ It all depends on the situation: if I need advice and it's a personal matter between two people, I just talk with one of my friends.

'It's all depend' should be 'it all depends' to match the singular subject with the verb (Grammar problem type ID 27). 'Situation' needs the article 'the'. 'One of my friend' needs plural 'friends'. Suggest checking subject-verb agreement and noun number.

× But otherwise if we are missing each other so we are just doing the group chat in Group because we have like as a group we can chat on a WhatsApp.

✓ Otherwise, if we miss each other, we have a group chat because as a group we can chat on WhatsApp.

Use 'miss each other' not 'are missing each other' for habitual feeling (tense but mainly preposition/word choice). 'Doing the group chat in Group' is awkward; say 'we have a group chat'. Use 'on WhatsApp' not 'on a WhatsApp' (Grammar problem type ID 11 and 22). Suggest simplifying and using correct prepositions for platforms.

× Uh, it's a depend on, uh, it's independent, it's totally on situation.

✓ It depends on the situation; it depends on circumstances.

'It's a depend' is ungrammatical; use 'it depends' for present tense habitual condition (Grammar problem type ID 6). Also avoid unnecessary repetitions. Suggest using 'depends on' + 'the situation' or 'circumstances'.

× So I preferred face to face.

✓ So I prefer face-to-face communication.

'Preferred' is past tense; here student expresses general preference so use present 'prefer' (tense issue ID 6) and hyphenate 'face-to-face' as an adjective/noun. Also 'communication' clarifies. Suggest using simple present for habitual preferences.

× Uh, but uh, some of my friends, uh, are in, umm, back home.

✓ But some of my friends are back home.

Original includes extraneous 'in' causing awkwardness; remove it to form a correct clause. The main issue is incorrect preposition leading to sentence awkwardness (Grammar problem type ID 11/23). Suggest keeping sentences concise and using correct prepositions.

× So, uh, for, that's why I need to, uh, choose the social media instead of face to face or otherwise I just do the video call.

✓ That's why I need to use social media instead of meeting face-to-face, or otherwise I just make a video call.

Use 'use' instead of 'choose' for common action, and 'make a video call' is the correct collocation. 'Face to face' as verb phrase needs 'meeting face-to-face'. Also tense/verb forms were mixed (Grammar problem type ID 8). Suggest learning common verb collocations: 'use social media', 'make/video call'.

× Not mostly, but uh, sometime, uh, we have different thoughts on different things.

✓ Not usually, but sometimes we have different opinions about different things.

'Not mostly' is incorrect adverb choice; 'not usually' or 'not mostly' is awkward. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Different thoughts' is better phrased 'different opinions' (Grammar problem type ID 20/13). Suggest using correct adverbs and collocations.

× So then sometime it's chance of the arguments.

✓ So sometimes there is a chance of arguments.

Missing indefinite article and wrong word order: use 'there is a chance of arguments' or 'there is a chance that we will argue' (Grammar problem type ID 22 and 3). Suggest using 'there is' to express existence and plural 'arguments' if generic.

× But after the arguments, we are agree on the one decision.

✓ But after the arguments, we agree on one decision.

'We are agree' is ungrammatical; correct is 'we agree' (verb form/pronoun use — Grammar problem type ID 12 and 6). 'The one decision' is unnatural; use 'one decision' meaning a single decision. Suggest using correct verb forms and articles.

× So it's not that much arguments in friends.

✓ So there are not many arguments among friends.

Incorrect quantifier and structure: 'not that much arguments' should be 'not many arguments' because 'arguments' is countable (Grammar problem type ID 13 and 14). Also 'in friends' should be 'among friends' (preposition). Suggest using 'many' with countable nouns and proper prepositions.