Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct grammar (articles, verb forms) and finish your thought. Use one or two specific supporting details and linking words. Keep to 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. I usually talk about travel and food because we like sharing recommendations and experiences, and chatting helped me make new friends after I moved here.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence, then add one specific example with a linking phrase. Avoid hesitations and unfinished sentences. Use plural/singular consistently and correct prepositions and articles.

Ejemplo: We usually talk about hobbies, favorite foods and travel. For example, yesterday my best friend and I planned a trip in April and discussed places to visit and where to eat.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear preference, explain briefly why using linking words (because, however), and give one concrete reason. Fix grammar: "It depends," "we can focus on each other." Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: It depends on the situation, but I prefer chatting with a small group. Because in a group we can share more ideas and hear different opinions, which makes the conversation more interesting.

Sugerencia: State your preference clearly and give two specific reasons connected with examples. Avoid trailing off and fix grammar: "prefer to talk face-to-face," "comfortable." Use linking words like because and for example.

Ejemplo: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it feels more natural and it’s easier to read body language. For example, when I meet friends in person I can practice local languages and have deeper conversations.

Sugerencia: Answer directly then clarify with a concise condition and reason. Avoid repetition and hesitations. Correct grammar: "It depends," "I might argue with close friends because we are comfortable with each other." Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: It depends on the person: I might argue with close friends because we are comfortable expressing different opinions. However, I avoid arguments with new acquaintances to keep the relationship polite.

× Definitely, I love talking with my friends especially my favorite topics are traveling a hobbies and a favorite foods.

✓ Definitely, I love talking with my friends. My favorite topics are traveling, hobbies, and favorite foods.

The original sentence misuses the article 'a' before plural nouns and runs clauses together. Use a period to separate ideas and remove 'a' before plural nouns (hobbies, favorite foods). Also add commas to list items for clarity.

× When I move here I didn't have enough friends but now I have been a.

✓ When I moved here, I didn't have enough friends, but now I have some.

Use past tense 'moved' to match the past time frame. 'Have been a' is ungrammatical; use 'have some' to indicate an increase in friends. Add commas for clarity.

× I usually chat with my friend about it, hobbies and favorite foods and traveling.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about hobbies, favorite foods, and traveling.

Use plural 'friends' to match general habit and remove the unclear 'it'. Use commas to separate list items and maintain parallel structure.

× Yesterday when I met the best friend in here, I talked about the next trip in April. Uh, we.

✓ Yesterday when I met my best friend here, I talked about our next trip in April.

'The best friend in here' is awkward; use 'my best friend here'. Remove the incomplete fragment 'Uh, we.' and make the sentence complete with 'our' to show shared plans.

× It's depend on the situation and there are, so there are several negative points about this.

✓ It depends on the situation, and there are several negative points about this.

Use the third person singular verb 'depends' to agree with 'it'. Remove the unnecessary 'so there are' repetition and add a comma for readability.

× And for me it is better to chat with others.

✓ For me, it is better to chat with others.

Move 'and' is unnecessary at the sentence start; begin directly with 'For me'. Add a comma after the introductory phrase.

× That's why, uh, we can focus on talking each other.

✓ That's why we can focus on talking to each other.

Use the correct preposition 'to' with 'talk to each other'. Remove filler 'uh' and place comma appropriately.

× Definitely, I prefer talk face to face, that's why it is easier and comfortable for me to connect with others.

✓ Definitely, I prefer to talk face to face; that's why it is easier and more comfortable for me to connect with others.

Use the infinitive 'to talk' after 'prefer'. Use a semicolon or period to separate independent clauses. Use comparative 'more comfortable' for correct adjective form.

× It is very interesting to use local languages, English and other languages so and I can.

✓ It is very interesting to use local languages, English, and other languages, and I can do that too.

The original has disordered conjunctions and an incomplete clause 'and I can.' Reorder with proper commas and finish the thought with 'do that too' for clarity.

× Hmm, it's depend on the situation.

✓ Hmm, it depends on the situation.

Use third person singular 'depends' to agree with subject 'it'.

× For my best friends, I can argue about something, some things, everything is.

✓ With my best friends, I can argue about some things; everything is open for discussion.

Original is fragmented and awkward. Use 'with my best friends' for correct preposition, 'some things' for partial items, and complete the idea with 'open for discussion.' Use semicolon to connect related clauses.

× But if I met, if I meet a friend for the first time, I can't, I can't argue.

✓ But if I meet a friend for the first time, I can't argue with them.

Remove unnecessary tense switch 'if I met' and duplicate 'if I meet'. Use simple present 'meet' for hypothetical present/future and complete the clause with 'argue with them' to indicate whom. Remove repeated 'I can't'. 'Them' is a gender-neutral singular pronoun appropriate here.