Part 1
Examinador
Do you like chatting with friends?
Candidato
Absolutely, I'm pretty into chatting with friends especially I'm feeling blue because my friends always encourage me, so I think chatting with friends feels like a energy boost to refresh my mind, which is really my thing.
Examinador
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Candidato
Sometime I usually chat with my friends about what thing can make us have a strength, bodies to plan our jogging together, something like that, our performance. We also talk about some celebrities, movies, even the school project.
Examinador
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Candidato
As are extroverted peoples. I always outgoing so I love chat with a group of people to share my feelings and ideas. I think chatting with a group of people feels like a more boost to recharge the batteries, which is so much fun.
Examinador
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Candidato
We are given the choice. I would definitely go for the formal one. I got confessed that many people would like to pink communicating in social medias because social media is convenient and accessible. But personally, face to face communication has always been my goal.
Examinador
Do you argue with friends?
Candidato
I argue with my friends quite often, especially at university, because we always need to do homework together and we always have a different ideas that times we lead discussions what is better.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答自然,但有多处语法和用词错误,句子冗长且重复。应直接给出主题句,随后用1–2句具体细节支持,注意时态与冠词使用,避免不必要的短语。建议练习用1个主题句+1个原因+1个例子,语言更简洁。
Ejemplo: Yes, I love chatting with friends. It cheers me up when I'm feeling down because they encourage me and offer practical advice, for example, last week a friend suggested a short walk which really improved my mood.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Puntuación: 58.0Sugerencia: 回答内容混乱且表达不准确,句子结构也不清晰。应先给出主要话题(主题句),然后用具体例子或分类来解释。注意词汇搭配(e.g. 'plan jogging' 应为 'plan to go jogging' 或 'go jogging together'),避免重复。
Ejemplo: We usually talk about hobbies and daily life. For instance, we plan to go jogging together to stay fit, discuss new movies or celebrities, and sometimes talk about school projects and how to divide the work.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Puntuación: 62.0Sugerencia: 回答表达清楚但语法和词汇有误(如 'As are extroverted peoples'、'I always outgoing')。应用一句清晰的主题句说明偏好,接着用一两句说明原因并举例,使用恰当的搭配(e.g. 'I'm outgoing','recharge my batteries')。
Ejemplo: I prefer chatting in a group because I'm an outgoing person. Group conversations let me share different ideas and laugh together, which helps me relax after a busy day.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答含混且句子不自然(如 'go for the formal one','I got confessed','pink communicating')。应直接表达偏好并给出原因,避免模糊短语,使用正确词汇(face-to-face, social media, convenient, prefer)。
Ejemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal and it's easier to understand emotions. Although social media is convenient, I find in-person talks more meaningful.
Do you argue with friends?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答意思明确但语法和表达不流畅(如 'a different ideas'、'that times we lead discussions')。建议用一到两句解释原因,并给出具体场景或结果,注意主谓一致和复数形式。
Ejemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends, especially at university when we work on group assignments. We often have different opinions about how to solve problems, but these discussions usually lead to better solutions.
× Absolutely, I'm pretty into chatting with friends especially I'm feeling blue because my friends always encourage me, so I think chatting with friends feels like a energy boost to refresh my mind, which is really my thing.
✓ Absolutely, I'm pretty into chatting with friends, especially when I'm feeling blue because my friends always encourage me, so I think chatting with friends feels like an energy boost to refresh my mind, which is really my thing.
问题类型:现在时与表达搭配错误。说明:句中“especially I'm feeling blue”应改为“especially when I'm feeling blue”以引入时间状语从句;“a energy boost”中“a”与以元音发音开头的名词“energy”搭配虽可但更自然的是“an energy boost”或直接“an energy boost”。建议:使用“when”引导时间状语从句;注意冠词a/an的使用(在元音音素前用an)。
× Sometime I usually chat with my friends about what thing can make us have a strength, bodies to plan our jogging together, something like that, our performance. We also talk about some celebrities, movies, even the school project.
✓ Sometimes I usually chat with my friends about things that can make us stronger, about our bodies and planning jogging together, things like that, and our performance. We also talk about celebrities, movies, and even school projects.
问题类型:句子结构混乱与词汇搭配错误。说明:“Sometime”应为复数形式“Sometimes”;“what thing can make us have a strength”结构不自然,应改为“things that can make us stronger”;“bodies to plan our jogging together”需拆分并改为“about our bodies and planning jogging together”;“the school project”应为复数或不加定冠词“school projects”。建议:简化表达,把并列内容用逗号或连词连接,注意名词单复数和固定搭配(make someone stronger, plan jogging)。
× As are extroverted peoples. I always outgoing so I love chat with a group of people to share my feelings and ideas. I think chatting with a group of people feels like a more boost to recharge the batteries, which is so much fun.
✓ I am an extroverted person. I'm always outgoing, so I love chatting with a group of people to share my feelings and ideas. I think chatting with a group of people feels like more of a boost to recharge my batteries, which is so much fun.
问题类型:代词和名词使用不当以及句子形式错误。说明:不能说“peoples”表示人群时用“people”或更好用“person”;“As are extroverted peoples”语序和表述错误,应为“I am an extroverted person.”;“I always outgoing”缺少动词,应为“I'm always outgoing”;“I love chat”应为动名词形式“love chatting”;“a more boost”应为“more of a boost”;“recharge the batteries”更自然为“recharge my batteries”。建议:注意主语与be动词一致,使用正确的人称代词和单复数形式,动词后接动名词时保持-ing形式。
× We are given the choice. I would definitely go for the formal one. I got confessed that many people would like to pink communicating in social medias because social media is convenient and accessible. But personally, face to face communication has always been my goal.
✓ We are given the choice. I would definitely choose the formal one. I have noticed that many people prefer communicating on social media because social media is convenient and accessible. But personally, face-to-face communication has always been my preference.
问题类型:情态动词及动词短语使用错误。说明:“I would definitely go for the formal one”可改为更自然的“choose the formal one”;“I got confessed”错误,正确表达应为“I have noticed”或“I've heard”;“would like to pink communicating in social medias”多处错误,应改为“prefer communicating on social media(s)”且“social media”通常不可数或复数形式“social media platforms”;“face to face”应加连字符“face-to-face”。建议:使用正确的动词短语表示观察或听说(have noticed/I've heard),用prefer表达倾向,注意短语连字符和不可数名词的用法。
× I argue with my friends quite often, especially at university, because we always need to do homework together and we always have a different ideas that times we lead discussions what is better.
✓ I argue with my friends quite often, especially at university, because we often need to do homework together and we always have different ideas, so we lead discussions about what is better.
问题类型:现在时和主谓一致问题。说明:“we always have a different ideas”中“a”与复数“ideas”冲突,应为“different ideas”;“that times we lead discussions what is better”语序和连接词错误,应改为“so we lead discussions about what is better”;使用“often”比“always”更合适描述频率性动作。建议:注意单复数一致,使用连接词(so, because, about)来理顺句子,保持动词时态一致。