Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and word choice, keep answer concise and natural, and give one clear example. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrases (e.g., "speak speaking", "polite policy").

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. For example, we often talk about books and art, which helps me discover new ideas and viewpoints.

Sugerencia: Maintain clear topic sentence and link supporting detail smoothly. Combine short fragments into one or two coherent sentences and avoid sentence fragments like "And have fun with them." Use linking words (e.g., "and", "which") correctly.

Ejemplo: We usually recommend books to each other and discuss new stories, which helps me learn different viewpoints and also have fun together.

Sugerencia: Good direct answer and personal reason. Improve fluency by removing hesitations and repetitions, and make the supporting detail more specific. Use a linking word to connect reason and example.

Ejemplo: I prefer chatting with my best friend because I feel safe sharing personal thoughts; for instance, I can talk about family matters or plans without feeling judged.

Sugerencia: Avoid short fragmented sentences and improve grammar ("prefer to communicate", "I love speaking with eye contact"). Combine ideas into one or two fluent sentences and explain why face-to-face is better with a clear reason.

Ejemplo: I prefer to communicate face-to-face, especially with friends, because eye contact and body language make conversations clearer and more enjoyable.

Sugerencia: Answer directly then provide a concise reason without filler words like "uh". Improve phrasing ("we have the same viewpoints"), and give a brief example or clarification of how you resolve differences if any.

Ejemplo: No, not usually, because we generally share the same viewpoints and discuss issues calmly; for example, if we disagree, we talk it through until we find a compromise.

× Yes, I love speak speaking with my friends about several topics like polite, polite policy and art books.

✓ Yes, I love speaking with my friends about various topics like politics, public policy, and art books.

The verb 'love' should be followed by the -ing form (gerund) when describing activities: 'love speaking.' Also 'polite, polite policy' seems to be incorrect word choice and repetition; 'politics' and 'public policy' are likely intended. Use 'various' instead of 'several' for naturalness.

× I enjoy speaking good with them about everything.

✓ I enjoy speaking well with them about everything.

'Good' is an adjective; after the verb 'speaking' which here is used with an adverb, use the adverb 'well' to modify how you speak. Alternatively, say 'I enjoy talking with them about everything.'

× We often recommend books to each other and discuss new stories, which helps me learn different viewpoints. And have fun with them.

✓ We often recommend books to each other and discuss new stories, which helps me learn different viewpoints, and we have fun together.

The fragment 'And have fun with them' lacks a subject and verb. Combine into one sentence with subject 'we' and verb 'have' to form a complete sentence: 'we have fun together.' This maintains tense and clarity.

× I prefer chatting with my best friend because I feel safe when I talk about my life or my thoughts or or something special for me.

✓ I prefer chatting with my best friend because I feel safe when I talk about my life, my thoughts, or something special to me.

Use 'chatting' after 'prefer' when describing habitual preference. Also remove duplicate 'or', replace 'for me' with the correct prepositional phrase 'to me.' Clean up the list with commas.

× I prefer communicate face to face, especially with my friends. Because. I love speak with eye contact, I understand.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face, especially with my friends, because I love speaking with eye contact; it helps me understand.

Include the infinitive 'to communicate' after 'prefer.' Avoid sentence fragments like 'Because.' Combine clauses properly and use 'speaking' (gerund) after 'love.' 'It helps me understand' clarifies the purpose and corrects structure.

× Because. I love speak with eye contact, I understand.

✓ Because I love speaking with eye contact, I understand.

Remove the fragment 'Because.' Use 'speaking' after 'love.' Also the clause order should be fixed so the sentence is complete. Ensure subject-verb agreement if needed.

× No, not really, because when we talk about anything, we have, uh, the same viewpoint and we deal in everything we talk about.

✓ No, not really, because when we talk about things, we share the same viewpoint and agree on everything we discuss.

'Deal in' is incorrect here; use 'agree on' or 'share' for opinions. 'Anything' is too broad—use 'things' or 'topics.' 'Talk about' and 'discuss' are redundant; streamline to 'everything we discuss.' This improves preposition and verb usage.