Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh), correct grammar (e.g. "phone video calls" -> "video calls"), and reduce repetition. Use one or two supporting reasons linked coherently (use linking words like "because" or "so").

Ejemplo: I don't like chatting every day. I prefer face-to-face meetings or video calls because they make it easier to see someone's expressions and understand their emotions.

Sugerencia: Organize your answer: give a clear topic sentence then specific examples. Use correct tense and natural phrases ("how the day went", "interesting events"). Avoid vague words like "different" repeated; instead be specific about topics.

Ejemplo: I usually chat about interesting events or how our day went. For example, I often share stories about something unusual that happened at work and then we discuss our reactions.

Sugerencia: Make a clear preference statement and give a concise reason. Fix grammar ("most of the time", "one person", "individuals have different ways of speaking"). Use linking words such as "because" and provide a specific reason (e.g. easier to understand emotions).

Ejemplo: I prefer chatting with one person because it's easier to have a deep conversation and read their emotions; in a group some people talk over each other.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer and a clear, grammatical reason. Use natural expressions ("face-to-face", "on social media") and avoid unclear phrasing ("without any different emotions"). Mention a specific advantage of face-to-face communication.

Ejemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see body language and facial expressions, which helps me understand people better than messaging on social media.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and clearly: say whether you argue and why, then explain how you resolve conflicts. Correct vocabulary ("arguments", "personalities", "find a solution", "strengthen our relationship"). Keep sentences short and coherent with linking words like "but" or "however".

Ejemplo: Sometimes we have arguments because everyone has different personalities, but we try to talk things through and find solutions, which usually strengthens our friendship.

× Honestly not so much because I'm not a fan of chatting each day.

✓ Honestly, not so much, because I'm not a fan of chatting every day.

The phrase 'each day' is grammatically acceptable but 'every day' is more natural. Also the sentence needs commas to separate the introductory adverb 'Honestly' and the reason clause. Improve by using 'every day' and adding commas to clarify sentence structure.

× I prefer real meetings or online phones video calls which I found more accessible to see person to uh, understand her or his emotions rather than chatting and to understand which emotion they feel.

✓ I prefer real meetings or online video calls, which I find more useful for seeing a person and understanding their emotions rather than chatting.

Multiple problems: word order and adjective/adverb choice ('phones video calls' is incorrect; 'online video calls' is natural). Tense consistency: 'found' should be present 'find' to match 'I prefer'. Pronoun usage: use gender-neutral 'their' instead of 'her or his'. Remove filler 'uh'. Rephrase for clarity and concision.

× Usually I love to discuss different topics when I'm chatting, especially as something which happened intriguing or discuss how day was gone.

✓ Usually I like to discuss different topics when I'm chatting, especially intriguing events that happened or how the day went.

Verb choice and tense: 'love to discuss' is acceptable but 'like to discuss' is more natural; 'something which happened intriguing' is ungrammatical — reorder to 'intriguing events that happened'. 'How day was gone' is incorrect; use past tense 'how the day went'. Keep present habitual context.

× For example, I love to tell about different stories which happened today and chatting with my friends to discuss.

✓ For example, I like to tell different stories that happened today and chat with my friends about them.

Use parallel verb forms: 'tell' and 'chat' should match. 'Tell about different stories' is awkward; use 'tell different stories' and 'chat about them'. Replace 'which happened' with 'that happened' for defining clause.

× I appreciate both ways to speak with different people, however most of times I prefer to chatting with 1P person because each individuals have a different ways to talk and when I'm chatting with someone people I know his emotion.

✓ I appreciate both ways of speaking with different people; however, most of the time I prefer chatting with one person because each individual has different ways of speaking, and when I'm chatting with someone I can understand their emotions.

Multiple article and number errors: 'both ways to speak' -> 'both ways of speaking'. 'Most of times' -> 'most of the time'. 'prefer to chatting' -> 'prefer chatting' (gerund vs infinitive). '1P person' unclear -> 'one person'. Subject-verb agreement: 'each individuals have' -> 'each individual has'. Pronoun and clarity: 'people I know his emotion' -> 'I can understand their emotions'.

× I appreciate both group of conversation, however most of time I prefer to communicate with people face to face because I see them real without any different emotions such as in social media.

✓ I like both kinds of conversation, but most of the time I prefer to communicate with people face to face because I can see them and their real emotions, unlike on social media.

'both group of conversation' is ungrammatical; use 'both kinds of conversation' or 'both types of conversations'. 'most of time' -> 'most of the time'. 'see them real' -> 'see them and their real emotions'. Use 'unlike on social media' for contrast.

× They are not understanding all their feelings because I don't see them.

✓ I can't fully understand their feelings because I don't see them in person.

'They are not understanding' is awkward; use 'I can't fully understand' to express the speaker's inability. Clarify 'see them' by adding 'in person'. Maintain present simple for general truth.

× Sometimes it could be happened because all individuals have own characteristics and sometimes there could be different argues between us.

✓ Sometimes it can happen because everyone has their own characteristics, and sometimes we have different arguments.

'Could be happened' is incorrect; use 'can happen' or 'sometimes happens'. 'all individuals have own characteristics' -> 'everyone has their own characteristics'. 'different argues' should be 'different arguments'. Maintain natural subject-verb forms.

× However, we're trying to find different ways to have A1 solution for this argue which make our relationship stranger and we're deeply understand our feelings.

✓ However, we try to find different ways to resolve these arguments, which makes our relationship stronger, and we try to understand our feelings more deeply.

'have A1 solution' is unclear; replace with 'resolve these arguments'. 'this argue' -> 'these arguments'. 'make our relationship stranger' is incorrect and likely means 'stronger'. Grammar: 'which makes' for subject-verb agreement. 'we're deeply understand' -> 'we try to understand our feelings more deeply'.