Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Reduce hesitations and avoid filler words; give a clear topic sentence then one or two specific supporting details. Use correct grammar (e.g. “a group of friends”, “helps us share”). Keep answer concise (max 5 sentences).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends. I use WhatsApp every day and I’m in a group with close friends where we share thoughts and daily updates. It’s a convenient way to stay connected and keeps me informed about their lives.

Sugerencia: Organize answer with a clear topic sentence and specific examples; avoid repetition. Use linking words (for example, when, also) correctly and correct verb forms (e.g. “when I visit an interesting place”).

Ejemplo: We usually talk about our daily routines and personal thoughts. For example, I often send photos when I visit an interesting place, and we comment on each other’s pictures to stay updated.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct preference sentence, then give two concise reasons using linking words (because, and). Correct grammar (e.g. “it helps us”, “more fun for us”). Limit fillers and repetition.

Ejemplo: I prefer chatting in a group because it helps us stay informed about each other, and it’s more fun to share jokes and photos together. Group chats make the conversation livelier.

Sugerencia: Give a clear preference and one or two specific reasons. Fix grammar and word order (e.g. “I don’t have enough time”, “helps me stay informed about my family”). Avoid doubling words and keep it concise.

Ejemplo: I prefer communicating via social media because I don’t have enough time for face-to-face meetings. Social media helps me quickly keep in touch with family and follow what’s happening around me.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give a brief explanation with an example. Use natural phrases (e.g. “we have different viewpoints”, “it’s usually calm discussion”). Avoid awkward constructions like “needs not the rough argue”.

Ejemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends because we have different viewpoints. Usually these are calm discussions about opinions rather than serious fights, and we resolve them by talking things through.

× I like chatting with friends, umm, uh, I uh, use uh, WhatsApp application and uh, I use it every day.

✓ I like chatting with friends. I use the WhatsApp application every day.

Run-on and redundancy: 'chatting' is fine as present participle after 'like'. Split into two sentences to improve clarity. Use the definite name 'the WhatsApp application' or simply 'WhatsApp'. Remove filler words (umm, uh) for grammatical correctness and fluency.

× I have a some group of my friends and umm, it helps to us to share our thoughts and our everyday life each other and it is great.

✓ I have a group of friends, and it helps us share our thoughts and our everyday lives with each other; it is great.

Incorrect quantifier 'a some' should be 'a' or 'some'; 'a group of friends' is natural. 'Helps to us to share' is incorrect word order; use 'helps us share'. 'Everyday life' should be plural 'everyday lives' when referring to multiple people. Use 'with each other' for mutual action.

× We usually share our thoughts, uh, also we share everyday, uh, routines, uh, and when, uh, we take some, uh, nice photos or we are, I am maybe some interesting place.

✓ We usually share our thoughts and our daily routines, and when we take nice photos or visit interesting places, I usually share them.

Verb forms and word choice: 'everyday routines' should be 'daily routines' here. 'We are, I am maybe some interesting place' is ungrammatical; use 'visit interesting places'. Make pronouns and verbs consistent: 'I usually share them'.

× I, uh, would like to always share it to my friends with chats.

✓ I would always like to share them with my friends in chats.

Preposition 'share to' is incorrect; use 'share with'. 'Share it' mismatches plural 'photos' so use 'share them'. 'With chats' is awkward; use 'in chats'.

× I prefer to chat with a group of people because we are very close friends in this chats and uh, it help us to stay informed about each other and umm, uh, also it uh, is more fun to us, uh, and uh, we are, uh, enjoy this communication.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because we are very close friends in these chats, and it helps us stay informed about each other; it is also more fun, and we enjoy this communication.

Agreement and article issues: 'this chats' should be 'these chats' (number agreement). 'it help' should be 'it helps' (subject-verb agreement). 'more fun to us' is unnatural; use 'more fun' or 'more fun for us'. Remove extra filler words and fix word order.

× I prefer to communicate communicate via social media because I have no enough time to have face to face communication and social media help me to be stay informed about everything around my and my family so so.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media because I do not have enough time for face-to-face communication, and social media help me stay informed about everything concerning me and my family.

Double word 'communicate communicate' and 'no enough' incorrect; use 'do not have enough'. Use 'face-to-face' with hyphens and 'time for' rather than 'to have'. Remove extra 'to be' in 'help me to be stay' and fix 'around my' to 'concerning me'.

× Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because we are different individuals and we have different insights about everything and it's normal I think and natural.

✓ Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because we are different individuals and have different opinions about things; I think that is normal and natural.

Word choice: 'insights about everything' is better as 'opinions about things'. Tense mostly fine but streamline sentence and add connector 'that' for clarity.

× But it needs not the rough argue and it's not something snap.

✓ But it should not become a rough argument, and it is not something that happens suddenly.

Awkward structure: 'needs not the rough argue' is incorrect; use 'should not become a rough argument'. 'Something snap' is unclear; clarify as 'happens suddenly'.

× It's only different conversation.

✓ It is just a different kind of conversation.

Word order and collocation: 'different conversation' is grammatically possible but awkward; 'a different kind of conversation' is clearer and more natural.