Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, ngắn gọn và tự nhiên hơn; sửa ngữ pháp và dùng câu chủ đề, theo sau là 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ. Tránh lặp từ và dùng từ phù hợp (ví dụ: extrovert, share). Nên nói tối đa 3-4 câu, đúng thì thì và mạch lạc.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. Im quite extroverted, so I enjoy chatting with friends about my daily life. For example, we often talk about what happened during the day or things that made us happy.

Sugerencia: Cần trả lời trực tiếp chủ đề (nội dung trò chuyện) và nêu các chi tiết cụ thể; sửa ngữ pháp (use "study or work", "we usually discuss"). Sử dụng liên từ để liên kết ý và tránh tiếng umm quá nhiều.

Ejemplo: Mostly we talk about my studies and part-time work. For instance, we discuss assignments, upcoming exams and how to balance work and university life.

Sugerencia: Trả lời cần rõ ràng (group or one-to-one) và sửa lỗi từ vựng (không dùng "children" nếu không đúng), dùng lý do cụ thể, tránh tiếng lấp đầy. Giữ cấu trúc: topic sentence + 1-2 supporting reasons với linking words.

Ejemplo: I prefer chatting in a group. In groups I can meet lots of people, share experiences and learn about different perspectives, which I find more enjoyable.

Sugerencia: Cần diễn đạt rõ ý chính (face-to-face) và dùng lý do chính xác, sửa cấu trúc câu và từ ("face to face", "understand" not "corner"). Tránh lặp từ và filler, dùng 2 câu thôi: nói lựa chọn + lý do cụ thể kèm ví dụ ngắn.

Ejemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because its easier to understand someones emotions through facial expressions and tone of voice. For example, when were in person I can tell if a friend is upset and offer support.

Sugerencia: Cần trả lời trực tiếp (yes/no) và giải thích ngắn gọn về lý do và hậu quả, sửa ngữ pháp ("sometimes", "we argue about project topics"). Nên đề xuất cách giải quyết để cho câu trả lời cụ thể hơn.

Ejemplo: Sometimes we argue, usually about group project topics or workloads. These disagreements can harm teamwork, so we try to resolve them by discussing roles and agreeing on a clear plan.

× Yes, of course people would know me always review this and an extrovert person.

✓ Yes, of course people would always know me as an extroverted person.

The student used pronouns and phrasing incorrectly: 'know me always review this' is ungrammatical. Use 'always know me as' to express how others perceive someone. Also use the adjective 'extroverted' rather than the noun phrase 'an extrovert person'. Suggestion: say 'people would always know me as an extroverted person' or simply 'people always know me as outgoing.'

× I like chatting with my friend and share with them about my daily life and how I love and other story about daily life.

✓ I like chatting with my friends and sharing with them about my daily life, what I love, and other everyday stories.

Problems: inconsistent singular/plural between 'my friend' and 'them' and wrong verb forms. Use plural 'friends' to match 'them' or change 'them' to 'him/her'. Use '-ing' form 'sharing' after 'like'. Parallel structure: list items with consistent forms. Suggestion: 'I like chatting with my friends and sharing my daily life and interests.'

× Now I'm 20 years old and as I remember the most team we mentioned is about my study in work.

✓ Now I'm 20 years old, and as I remember, most of the topics we mention are about my studies or work.

Problems: tense and word choice. 'Most team we mentioned' is incorrect; use 'most of the topics we mention' (present habitual). 'Study' should be plural 'studies' or 'my studies' and 'work' is fine. Suggestion: use 'topics' and keep present simple for habitual actions: 'we mention' or 'we talk about.'

× Umm, I think that's is the most concentration we need to focus in this time.

✓ Umm, I think that's the main thing we need to focus on at the moment.

Problems: extra 'is' in 'that's is', awkward noun 'concentration' and preposition use. Use 'main thing' or 'main topic' and the phrasal verb 'focus on'. 'At the moment' is a natural time expression. Suggestion: 'that's the main thing we need to focus on right now.'

× MMM, I think that I prefer children with a group of people.

✓ MMM, I think that I prefer being with a group of people.

'Prefer children with a group' is wrong word choice: 'children' is unrelated. Use 'being with a group of people' to express preference. Suggestion: 'I prefer being in a group of people.'

× I can connect with many people and share with them, and I also can hear about, uh, their daily life, how make them happy or even says.

✓ I can connect with many people and share with them, and I can also hear about their daily lives, what makes them happy, or other things they say.

Problems: 'share with them' is okay but 'hear about, uh, their daily life' needs plural 'daily lives'. 'how make them happy' should be 'what makes them happy'. 'even says' is ungrammatical; use 'other things they say'. Suggestion: use complete clauses: 'hear about their daily lives and what makes them happy.'

× MMM, I prefer communicate fee to feed with people because I think that we can corner more when we face to face and we don't know how people think, uh, after the screen and what we can see that's in the eye when we are contact with each other.

✓ MMM, I prefer to communicate face-to-face with people because I think we can connect more when we are face-to-face; we don't know how people think behind the screen, and we can see things in their eyes when we are in contact with each other.

Multiple errors: 'communicate fee to feed' should be 'communicate face-to-face'; need infinitive 'prefer to communicate'; 'corner more' is wrong; likely 'connect more'. Use 'face-to-face' consistently and 'behind the screen' to mean through screens. 'When we are contact' should be 'when we are in contact'. Suggestion: practice common collocations: 'prefer to communicate face-to-face', 'connect more', 'behind the screen'.

× Umm, sometime we argue about a team, uh, presentation title or other about my study in the universities and I think that's it, the worst way to build our teamwork.

✓ Umm, sometimes we argue about team presentation titles or other study-related issues at university, and I think that's the worst way to build teamwork.

Errors: 'sometime' should be plural 'sometimes'; 'a team, uh, presentation title' is awkward—use 'team presentation titles'; 'my study in the universities' should be 'study-related issues at university' or 'my studies at university'. 'That's it, the worst way' is unneeded 'it'. Suggestion: use plural forms where appropriate and concise phrasing: 'sometimes we argue about team presentation titles or other study-related issues at university.'