Hobby— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence naming 2–3 main hobbies, then add one brief specific detail for one hobby. Avoid repetition and incomplete phrases. Use linking words (and, also, besides) correctly and keep to 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I have several hobbies, including reading, playing with friends, and gardening. I especially enjoy gardening because I find it relaxing and I like growing flowers and vegetables. Besides that, I sometimes write short poems for fun.

Sugerencia: Make the answer more natural and specific: begin with a direct statement, then give a brief supporting detail about who you did it with and what you grew. Correct grammar (plural/singular) and use one linking word for coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoyed gardening as a child. I often gardened with my mother, who loved plants, and we planted many vegetables such as tomatoes and spinach in our backyard.

Sugerencia: Avoid wordiness and repetition: state clearly that gardening is a lifelong hobby, then add one specific current activity or reason you keep it. Use correct tense and concise linking words (and, so, because). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, gardening has been my hobby since childhood and I still enjoy it. I now focus on growing fruit trees and flowering plants because I like the fresh fruit and the colorful garden they create.

Sugerencia: Be clear and correct: answer directly (yes/no), name the family member, and give one specific example of how you share the hobby. Check vocabulary (e.g., 'garden' not 'guy') and grammar (help + infinitive). Keep it to 2 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, my mother shares my interest in gardening. She helps me plant new seedlings and teaches me how to care for the garden, such as watering and pruning the plants.

× Of course, I have several hobbies like reading books along with playing with friends and also. Writing a poem and also gardening is one of them that I really prefer.

✓ Of course, I have several hobbies, such as reading books, playing with friends, writing poems, and gardening, which I really enjoy.

The original sentence has fragmented structure, unnecessary words (along with, also), incorrect punctuation, and singular/plural inconsistency (writing a poem vs writing poems). Combine items in a parallel list using commas and conjunctions, remove redundant words, use plural 'poems' for a general hobby, and use a relative clause 'which I really enjoy' to express preference. Grammar problem type ID:26

× When I was a child I had a hobby which is gardening and I enjoyed gardening with my parents, more specifically with my mothers who love gardens and planted lots of vegetables in garden.

✓ When I was a child, my hobby was gardening and I enjoyed gardening with my parents, especially my mother, who loved gardens and planted lots of vegetables in the garden.

Errors include tense mismatch ('had a hobby which is' should use past tense 'was'), incorrect plural 'mothers' when referring to one mother, missing article 'the' before 'garden', and slight word choice issues. Use past tense consistently, singular 'mother' if referring to one, and include 'the garden'. Grammar problem type ID:5,11,12,22

× Of course, I have a hobby which is a gardening that I have since my childhood and at present I'm very much enthusiastic about gardening and planting lots of fruit plants and also flower plants along with.

✓ I have enjoyed gardening since my childhood, and at present I am very enthusiastic about gardening and planting many fruit trees and flowers.

The original mixes awkward phrases and incorrect articles ('a gardening'), incorrect tense for a state that started in the past and continues now (use present perfect 'have enjoyed' or 'have had'), and awkward noun phrases ('fruit plants and also flower plants along with'). Use 'since' with present perfect, remove unnecessary articles, and use clearer nouns like 'fruit trees' or 'fruit plants' and 'flowers'. Grammar problem type ID:6,22,26

× In my family members my mother has same kind of hobby like me which is gardening and she always helps me to planting lots of plants and also assists me to take care of the guy.

✓ In my family, my mother has the same hobby as I do: gardening, and she always helps me plant many plants and assists me in taking care of the garden.

Errors: incorrect phrase 'In my family members' (use 'In my family'), missing article 'the' before 'same', incorrect comparative structure 'same kind of hobby like me' (use 'the same hobby as I do'), incorrect verb form 'helps me to planting' (should be 'helps me plant'), and 'take care of the guy' is likely a typo for 'garden'. Also change 'assists me to take care of' to 'assists me in taking care of'. Grammar problem type ID:11,12,8,26