Hobby— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural: give a direct topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Avoid listing with repetitive connectors and check article use (e.g., 'reading', not 'reading books' is fine). Use linking words smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have several hobbies. I enjoy reading novels and gardening because they help me relax; I also like listening to music when I work and I try to travel for short trips a few times a year.

Sugerencia: Clarify and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, use past tense consistently, correct pronouns, and avoid repetition. Add one specific detail to support the answer.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I enjoyed gardening as a child because my mother loved plants and often let me help her water and plant flowers; those memories made me enjoy being outdoors.

Sugerencia: Give a complete, grammatical response: state the hobby, use present perfect or present simple correctly, and complete supporting detail with linking words. Avoid unfinished sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still garden, which I started in childhood. I usually check and tend my plants every weekend, pruning and watering them to keep the garden healthy.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use correct pronouns and word order. Give one clear supporting detail showing how you share the hobby, and use a linking phrase.

Ejemplo: Yes, my mother and I share a love of gardening. We often spend time together planting flowers and exchanging tips, which makes gardening a pleasant family activity.

× Of course, I have several hobbies, for instance, reading books along with gardening and also listening to music.

✓ Of course, I have several hobbies, for instance, reading books, gardening, and listening to music.

The original sentence mixed plural items with awkward conjunctions. Listing hobbies uses parallel noun or gerund forms separated by commas and a final 'and'. No change in number required, but punctuation and parallel structure improved: use 'reading books, gardening, and listening to music' to maintain parallelism and clarity.

× Apart from that, traveling is one of my favorite hobbies.

✓ Apart from that, traveling is one of my favorite hobbies.

This sentence is grammatically correct. 'Traveling' is a gerund used appropriately as a noun. No correction needed.

× As far as I remember I had a hobby which was gardening and I inspired from my mother because my mother is a garden lover person so I motivated from him to garden so it it was.

✓ As far as I remember, I had a hobby of gardening, and I was inspired by my mother because she loves gardening, so she encouraged me to garden.

Errors include incorrect verb choice and preposition use: 'inspired from' and 'motivated from' are incorrect; use 'inspired by' and 'encouraged by' or 'encouraged me'. Pronoun 'him' is wrong for 'mother' and must be 'her' or restructure sentence to avoid pronoun. Fix tense consistency: past simple 'had' and 'was inspired'. Remove repeated words ('it it was') and use commas for clarity.

× Of course I have a hobby still is gardening that I had from my childhood and now I always try to check out my garden.

✓ Of course, I still have the hobby of gardening that I have had since my childhood, and now I always try to tend to my garden.

Use present perfect 'have had since my childhood' to indicate an action continuing from past to present. 'Hobby still is gardening' is awkward; use 'I still have the hobby of gardening' or 'I still garden'. 'Check out my garden' is informal and less precise; 'tend to my garden' or 'take care of my garden' is better. Added commas for readability.

× More specifically on the weekends I spend.

✓ More specifically, on weekends I spend time in the garden.

Original sentence is incomplete (no object) and has poor word order. 'I spend' requires an object (what or time doing what). Add 'time in the garden' to complete the thought and use 'on weekends' or 'on the weekends' for idiomatic phrasing.

× Of course my mother has same hobby is gardening and I motivated from him to garden so I also.

✓ Of course, my mother has the same hobby, gardening, and she inspired me to garden as well.

Multiple errors: missing articles ('the same hobby'), incorrect pronoun 'him' for mother (use 'her' or restructure), incorrect verb 'motivated from' should be 'inspired me' or 'motivated me'. Ensure parallel structure and include commas. Also complete the sentence by adding 'as well'.

× Enjoy investing time in on in gardening with my mother and I.

✓ I enjoy spending time gardening with my mother.

Original phrase has redundant and incorrect prepositions ('in on in') and incorrect verb 'investing' in this context; use 'spending time' or 'investing time in gardening' but avoid double prepositions. Also 'with my mother and I' is wrong; use 'with my mother' or 'my mother and me' depending on structure. Here 'with my mother' suffices.