Hobby— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise, correct grammar, and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and pronunciation errors (e.g., "hobby", "I usually read").

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. I usually read fiction and non-fiction books in my spare time because they help me relax and learn new things. For example, I recently read a history book that taught me about modern politics, which I found fascinating.

Sugerencia: Use past tense consistently and avoid filler words. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add a specific detail about when and why you enjoyed it, using linking words like "because" or "so" for coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. When I was a child I loved cycling, and I used to ride my bike after school because it made me feel free and active. For instance, I often explored nearby parks with my friends on weekends.

Sugerencia: Avoid mixed tenses and improve grammar and sentence structure. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give specific current examples and link to the past with words like "since" or "still". Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. I have enjoyed cycling since childhood and I still cycle regularly because it helps me unwind after a busy day. For example, I go cycling twice a week on a nearby trail to stay fit and clear my mind.

Sugerencia: Make sentences grammatical and more specific. State clearly whether you share hobbies, then give a specific example with reasons and a linking word. Remove repetition and correct collocations ("go to street markets", "try new food").

Ejemplo: Yes, my mother and I share a hobby. We both enjoy visiting street markets because we like trying new foods and walking around together. For example, last weekend we tried several local snacks and discovered a delicious pastry we now buy regularly.

× Yes definitely. How can people live without hobbies? My favorite hob hurry is reading.

✓ Yes, definitely. How can people live without hobbies? My favorite hobby is reading.

The original contains a misspelling 'hob hurry' instead of 'hobby' and lacks a comma after 'Yes'. This is a sentence structure/word choice error. Correct by using the single word 'hobby' and adding appropriate punctuation: 'Yes, definitely.'

× I usually reading.

✓ I usually read.

The verb form 'reading' is incorrect after 'usually' which requires the simple present tense for habitual actions. Use base verb 'read' to form 'I usually read.'

× I usually read books when I have a spare time as it's can help me to gain more knowledge.

✓ I usually read books when I have spare time, as it can help me gain more knowledge.

Multiple errors: 'a spare time' is incorrect — use uncountable 'spare time' (article error). 'it's can help' incorrectly combines contraction with modal; use 'it can help' (sentence structure/present tense). Also omit 'to' after 'help' in this structure. Added a comma before the clause for clarity.

× Yes, for sure. When I was a child, I am a big friend of cycling, so I usually ride my bicycle after school and uh, it's make me feel a sense of freedom, I think.

✓ Yes, for sure. When I was a child, I was very fond of cycling, so I usually rode my bicycle after school, and it made me feel a sense of freedom, I think.

Tense inconsistency: 'When I was a child, I am' mixes past and present; change 'am' to past 'was'. 'a big friend of cycling' is unnatural — use 'very fond of cycling' (idiomatic correction). 'usually ride' should be past 'usually rode' for habitual past actions. 'it's make' should be 'it made' to match past tense.

× Yes, as I mentioned before I really enjoy cycling when I was child and I still keep this hobby even I will grow up and because it is really helps me to unwind I'm really passionate with.

✓ Yes, as I mentioned before, I really enjoyed cycling when I was a child and I still keep this hobby as I grew up because it really helps me to unwind; I'm really passionate about it.

Mixed tense and preposition errors: 'I really enjoy cycling when I was child' mixes present and past—use past 'enjoyed' for childhood. Add article 'a child'. 'I still keep this hobby even I will grow up' is awkward; use 'I still keep this hobby as I grew up' or 'and I have kept this hobby as I grew up'. 'because it is really helps' has extra 'is' — use 'it really helps'. 'I'm really passionate with' uses wrong preposition; use 'passionate about' and include the object 'it'.

× Yes, For example, my mother and I both like go going to street Market and just walk around now say which food is delicious and we can buy it to try so that we always go.

✓ Yes. For example, my mother and I both like going to the street market and just walking around to see which food looks delicious and which we can buy to try, so we often go.

Many errors: 'go going' is redundant — use 'going'. Capitalization 'Market' unnecessary; use 'street market'. 'just walk around now say' is incorrect — use 'walking around to see'. 'which food is delicious and we can buy it to try' is awkward; rephrase to 'which food looks delicious and which we can buy to try'. 'so that we always go' should be 'so we often go' to express frequency. These are primarily preposition and sentence structure issues.