Hobby— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Focus on giving a clear, concise topic sentence and then one or two specific supporting details. Avoid filler words (uh, um) and incorrect words (e.g. 'aunties' instead of 'activities'). Keep to natural sentence structures and correct grammar (use plural/singular consistently and correct verb forms). For example, start with: 'Yes, I have several hobbies.' Then add specific activities and a brief reason using a linking word (because/so).

Ejemplo: Yes, I have several hobbies. I enjoy drawing and reading books, and I also like watching movies because they help me relax after a busy day.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear topic sentence in the past tense and follow with specific examples and correct verb forms. Use linking words (and, also) to join ideas. Correct common grammar errors: 'used to draw', 'we played football on weekends'. Keep the answer to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had several hobbies when I was a child. I used to draw with my friends, and we also played football together on weekends.

Sugerencia: Answer directly using present perfect or present simple to show continuity (e.g. 'I have had... since childhood' or 'I have enjoyed... since I was a child'). Remove fillers and repeat words. Provide one reason or brief detail to enrich the answer.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have enjoyed drawing and sketching since I was a child because it helps me express my ideas and relax.

Sugerencia: State clearly whether your hobbies are shared, using correct word order and grammar (e.g. 'Yes, my sisters and I enjoy similar hobbies'). Give a specific example of a shared activity and one brief detail (how often or why). Avoid vague phrases like 'we are interesting'.

Ejemplo: Yes, my two sisters and I share similar hobbies. We all enjoy drawing and sketching, and we often draw together at the weekend to practice and exchange ideas.

× Yes I have many aunties I uh full time with this somethings I love like drawing and reading books, watching movie. This give me enough time to clear my.

✓ Yes, I have many hobbies. I am a full-time student, and I love drawing, reading books, and watching movies. These activities give me enough time to relax.

Multiple issues: incorrect word choice 'aunties' should be 'hobbies' (vocabulary), run-on sentences and missing commas (sentence structure), incorrect tense and subject-verb agreement 'This give' should be 'These activities give' (plural agreement), 'full time with this' unclear — corrected to 'full-time student'. Suggestion: use clear nouns, separate ideas into sentences, ensure subject and verb agree, and use plural forms for plural subjects.

× Yes, when I was a child I used to drawing with my friends.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I used to draw with my friends.

After 'used to' the verb should be in the base form (draw), not the -ing form. Suggestion: use 'used to + base verb' for habitual past actions.

× And. We were play football together on weekend.

✓ We used to play football together on weekends.

The original mixes past progressive structure incorrectly. 'Were play' is ungrammatical; use 'used to play' for habitual past actions or 'we played' for simple past. Also 'on weekend' should be 'on weekends' or 'at the weekend'. Suggestion: choose a past tense form and correct the time expression.

× Yes, I had a hobby, uh, from childhood. The the best and the most favorite hobby is uh, drawing and sketching. Umm.

✓ Yes, I have had a hobby since childhood. My favorite hobby is drawing and sketching.

Tense consistency: 'I had a hobby from childhood' is awkward; 'have had since childhood' expresses continuation to the present. Redundant 'the the' removed and 'most favorite' simplified to 'favorite'. Suggestion: use 'have had since' for activities continuing from past to present and avoid redundant modifiers.

× Yes, we are interesting. About the same things I and my two sisters. I'm just thinking about drawings and sketching pictures and with my.

✓ Yes, we are interested in the same things: my two sisters and I enjoy drawing and sketching pictures together.

'We are interesting' incorrectly uses adjective 'interesting' instead of 'interested'. Word order 'I and my two sisters' should be 'my two sisters and I'. Sentence fragments were present; combined into a complete sentence. Also 'thinking about drawings' unclear, corrected to 'enjoy drawing'. Suggestion: use 'interested in' to describe preferences, order pronouns politely, and complete sentences.