Hobby— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答自然且信息明确，但有小语法和表达上的不连贯处。建议：1) 注意时态和冠词（例如 “a few times a week”）。2) 把信息分成主题句和1–2个支持句，最多五句；使用连接词如 “so” 或 “which” 来增强连贯。3) 增加具体细节（例如每周上几次课、最近学到的动作）以丰富内容。

Ejemplo: I enjoy dancing and have done it since childhood. Recently, I have been taking jazz classes a few times a week, which have helped me improve my technique and boost my confidence. These classes also help me relieve stress and keep fit, so I feel happier and more energetic.

Sugerencia: 内容相关但表达有错误和不完整句子。建议：1) 纠正不明词汇（“Medellin” 可能是错误拼写，应说明具体舞种或课程）。2) 避免模糊或不完整的结尾，如 “in case it delays study” 应明确原因和结果。3) 使用简单连接词（because, so, therefore）把原因和结果连起来。

Ejemplo: Yes, I used to dance as a child. I took ballet classes at primary school and often performed in school shows, which helped me forget my worries and feel more confident. However, I eventually stopped because the classes took too much time and affected my studies.

Sugerencia: 句子结构混乱且有时态、语法错误。建议：1) 用清晰的主题句直接回答问题（Yes/No + brief）。2) 注意时态一致（“I have had” 或 “I had”），并把细节放在后面。3) 将句子分为两到三句，使用连接词如 “and” 或 “which” 来保持流畅。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have had dancing as a hobby since childhood. I used to take many classes at primary school and often performed in school shows, which helped me forget my worries and made me more confident.

Sugerencia: 回答偏离话题（家庭爱好）并且表达重复且有语法问题。建议：1) 直接回答是否与家人有相同爱好（Yes/No + reason）。2) 精简描述，避免重复词汇（use “various sizes and shapes”）。3) 给出具体例子说明如何一起分享这个爱好。

Ejemplo: Not exactly — my family and I don't always share the same hobbies, but we do enjoy collecting pretty plates together. We buy plates of various sizes, colors and shapes, and using them at dinner makes our meals feel special and brings me joy.

× Yes, I have enjoyed dancing since I was a child.

✓ Yes, I have enjoyed dancing since I was a child. (No change)

句子中“have enjoyed dancing”语法上是正确的，因为动词 enjoy 后接动名词(dancing)。此处为现在完成时表示从过去持续到现在的经历或爱好，符合语境，无需更改。

× Recently I have been taking jazz classes few times a week and they make me feel more confident and really happy because it can help me forget the stress and keep fit.

✓ Recently I have been taking jazz classes a few times a week and they make me feel more confident and really happy because they can help me forget the stress and keep fit.

句中缺少不定量前的冠词“a”，应为“a few times”。此外指代复数名词 classes 时，代词应使用“they”而非“it”。建议注意可数名词前量词和代词一致性。

× I used to dance when I was a child. I took Medellin classes at primary school and performed in school shows, which can help me forget the worries and help me feel more confident. But finally, in case it delays study.

✓ I used to dance when I was a child. I took Medellin classes at primary school and performed in school shows, which helped me forget my worries and helped me feel more confident. But finally, because it delayed my studies, I stopped.

句子主句为过去时，后面的从句也应使用过去时，故“can help”要改为“helped”。“worries”前加所有格“my”。最后一句原句结构不完整且时态与逻辑不匹配，改为“because it delayed my studies, I stopped”更清楚并与过去时一致。建议在叙述过去经历时保持过去时态一致并补全不完整句子。

× I have had a hobby when I was a child, I starts, I used to take many classes at primary school and I often performed in school show, which can help me forget the worries and help me feel more confident.

✓ I had a hobby when I was a child. I started dancing; I used to take many classes at primary school and I often performed in school shows, which helped me forget my worries and helped me feel more confident.

句中时态混用且动词形式错误。既然描述的是过去，应使用过去时：将“have had”改为“had”，“starts”改为“started”。“school show”应为复数“school shows”。从句“which can help”也应改为过去时“helped”。建议在叙述过去事件时统一使用过去时，并注意动词单复数和正确形式。

× Actually my family are all like to buy some pretty plates and different colors and different size and different shapes and we love to use a beautiful plate when we have dinner and it will make me very happy.

✓ Actually my family all like to buy pretty plates in different colors, sizes and shapes, and we love to use beautiful plates when we have dinner; it makes me very happy.

主语“my family”作为整体时通常看作单数或复数均可，但句中动词及短语表达混乱需整理。原句“are all like to buy”不合语法，正确表达为“all like to buy”或“are fond of buying”。“different colors and different size and different shapes”应并列为“different colors, sizes and shapes”，注意复数形式“sizes”。指代餐时使用的盘子应与前文一致，使用复数“plates”；“it will make me very happy”在一般陈述中改为一般现在时“it makes me very happy”。建议理清主语与谓语搭配，使用并列短语时注意一致的复数形式与标点分隔。