Hobby— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct subject-verb agreement, and avoid redundancy. Add one specific detail about what you study and how often, using a linking word to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes. My main hobby right now is academic study because I am preparing for postgraduate studies abroad. For example, I read academic articles about educational psychology and practice research methods for a few hours each evening, which helps me improve my critical reading skills.

Sugerencia: Use past tense consistently and correct articles and plurals. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then give a specific detail, and link the reason using a connector like 'because' or 'so'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. My favourite hobby as a child was playing football because it let me spend time with neighbourhood friends, and we usually played together after school every day.

Sugerencia: Combine sentences to avoid repetition and correct grammar (articles, tense, agreement). Give clear frequency and a brief reason using linking words like 'because' and 'so'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I have played football since childhood because it keeps me fit and is a great way to socialise, so I still play once a week with my relatives.

Sugerencia: Make the response grammatically correct and specific. State clearly who shares the hobby, correct plurals and prepositions, and give a precise frequency with a linking phrase like 'for example' or 'for instance'.

Ejemplo: Yes, many members of my family enjoy football. For instance, my father and my two younger brothers like to play, and we usually have a match together once a month.

× Yes, I have several hobbies but my favorite hobbies at the moment is studying since I decided to continue my postgraduate studies abroad so that I have to learn and reading more on academic article.

✓ Yes, I have several hobbies, but my favorite hobby at the moment is studying, since I decided to continue my postgraduate studies abroad, so I have to learn and read more academic articles.

Errors: plural/singular mismatch ('hobbies' with 'is') and word choice/verb form. Use singular 'hobby' to match singular verb 'is' and keep subject-verb agreement. 'learn and reading' mixes infinitive and -ing; use parallel verbs 'learn and read'. 'academic article' should be plural 'academic articles'. Also add commas for clarity.

× Yes, I have a particular hobbies when I was a child, just like the common children at that time that is football because it allows me to spend more time with my neighborhood friends.

✓ Yes, I had a particular hobby when I was a child, like most children at that time: football, because it allowed me to spend more time with my neighborhood friends.

Errors: 'a particular hobbies' mixes singular article with plural noun; change to 'a particular hobby'. Tense consistency: question asked about past, so use past tense 'had' and 'allowed'. 'just like the common children' is awkward; use 'like most children'. Use colon or commas to clarify the example.

× Yes I have, besides my current favorite hobby right now, I've enjoyed a football since childhood because it keep me fit and is a great way to socialize. I usually play once in a week with my relatives.

✓ Yes I have. Besides my current favorite hobby, I've enjoyed football since childhood because it keeps me fit and is a great way to socialize. I usually play once a week with my relatives.

Errors: 'I've enjoyed a football' incorrectly uses article and verb; 'football' as an activity doesn't need 'a'. Use present perfect 'I've enjoyed football' and ensure subject-verb agreement 'keeps'. 'once in a week' is non-native; correct is 'once a week'. Remove redundant 'right now' when saying 'current'.

× Yes of course most of my family members form of football, for example my father and my 2 younger brother and we sometimes play football together once in a month.

✓ Yes, of course most of my family members are fans of football; for example, my father and my two younger brothers, and we sometimes play football together once a month.

Errors: 'form of football' is incorrect preposition/phrase; use 'fans of football' or 'are into football'. 'my 2 younger brother' mixes plural; use 'two younger brothers'. 'once in a month' should be 'once a month'. Also add commas and conjunctions for clarity.