Hobby— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammatical accuracy, clarity and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct verb forms and articles, and avoid filler words. Keep answer concise (max 4–5 sentences). Add one or two specific details (types of novels, a recent book) and link ideas with simple connectors (for example, “because,” “so,” “also”).

Ejemplo: I enjoy reading novels. I mainly read contemporary and psychological fiction because they help me understand characters’ emotions. Reading lets me escape everyday stress and also teaches me how people handle difficult situations, which I find useful in my own life.

Sugerencia: Focus on correct tense and simpler sentence structures. Give a direct topic sentence in past tense, then add one specific supporting detail and a linking word. Remove hesitations and incomplete thoughts.

Ejemplo: Yes. When I was a child, I loved pretending to be characters from television shows. I would imitate their voices and gestures because it helped me practise speaking and understand different emotions. It was a fun way to build confidence in front of others.

Sugerencia: Use correct vocabulary (baking, pastries), tenses, and concise structure. State the hobby clearly, explain why you enjoy it with a specific example, and use linking words like “because” or “so.” Avoid repetition and filler sounds.

Ejemplo: Yes. I have enjoyed baking since I was a child. I like making cakes and pastries because it is rewarding to taste something I made myself. For example, last weekend I baked chocolate cupcakes for my friends, and they said they were delicious.

Sugerencia: Improve grammar (negation, verb forms) and clarity. Give a direct topic sentence, then provide two brief contrasting examples with linking words (“for example,” “however”). Correct vocabulary (watching dramas, investing in currency).

Ejemplo: No, we do not share the same hobbies. For example, my mother enjoys watching television dramas, while my father is interested in investing in foreign currency. Therefore, our interests are quite different, and we usually spend free time separately.

× I would say reading the novel is my hobby.

✓ I would say reading novels is my hobby.

Plural vs singular: 'reading the novel' sounds like one specific book; generally we use the plural 'novels' to indicate the activity. Use plural to describe a general hobby. Suggestion: use 'reading novels' or 'reading books' to describe the general activity.

× It make me escape from the reality and immersive video character with their emotions.

✓ It makes me escape from reality and immerse myself in the characters' emotions.

Subject-verb agreement and verb form: 'It' (singular) requires 'makes'. 'Immersive' is an adjective; use verb 'immerse' to indicate the action. 'Video character' is unclear; likely 'characters' and possessive 'characters' emotions' is needed. Also remove 'the' before 'reality' when speaking generally. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with subjects and choose correct verb vs adjective forms.

× It can also teach me how to deal with the difficult situation and what we have handwritten.

✓ It can also teach me how to deal with difficult situations and how to express things I have written by hand.

Incorrect noun forms and unclear phrase: 'the difficult situation' should be plural 'difficult situations' for general statements. 'what we have handwritten' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'how to express what I have written by hand' or 'what I have written by hand.' Rephrase to clarify meaning. Suggestion: use plural for general habits and replace 'handwritten' with a clearer phrase such as 'written by hand.'

× Uh, you are action Yeah, I think it is a very.

✓ Uh, you are right. Yeah, I think it is very enjoyable.

This fragment is ungrammatical and incomplete. 'You are action' makes no sense; likely 'you are right'. 'I think it is a very' is incomplete; needs a noun or adjective. Provide a complete thought such as 'very enjoyable' or 'very useful.' Suggestion: make sure sentences are complete and use appropriate adjectives or nouns to finish phrases.

× When I was young, I like to acting like I am the actor that I saw in the television is also can make me, uh, absorb the emotional, uh, feeling from 1 character that I saw.

✓ When I was young, I liked to act like the actors I saw on television; that also helped me absorb the emotions of a character.

Tense and verb form errors: 'When I was young' requires past tense 'liked'. Use base verb 'act' after 'liked to'. 'I am' should be past 'I saw' or rephrased. 'On television' is the correct preposition. Remove 'is also can make me' and replace with 'that also helped me' for past causation. 'Absorb the emotional feeling from 1 character' should be 'absorb the emotions of a character.' Suggestion: match past time reference with past tense verbs and use correct verb forms after 'like to'.

× And I also want to be look good on the, uh.

✓ And I also wanted to look good on stage/TV.

Pronoun and verb form: 'want to be look' is incorrect; use 'wanted to look' or 'wanted to appear' depending on meaning. Missing object/location; likely 'on stage' or 'on TV.' Suggestion: complete the sentence with the correct past tense and specify the place (stage, TV, etc.).

× Since I was young, I always like to do some bakeries is uh, maybe I, I like to eat some bakery.

✓ Since I was young, I have always liked baking; maybe I like to eat baked goods.

Article and noun choice: 'do some bakeries' is incorrect; use 'baking' or 'make baked goods.' 'Some bakery' is wrong; use 'baked goods' or 'pastries.' Also 'always like' should match with perfect aspect 'have always liked' to indicate continuous preference from past to present. Suggestion: use 'baking' for the hobby, and 'baked goods' or 'pastries' for the items eaten.

× And so I love doing it by myself because of the reward of doing those eat that I can have the delicious sweet in front of me and I can eat.

✓ And so I love doing it myself because the reward is that I get delicious sweets I can eat.

Awkward structure and incorrect word order: 'reward of doing those eat' is ungrammatical. Use 'the reward is that' and 'delicious sweets' plural. 'In front of me and I can eat' is redundant; simplify to 'I can eat.' Suggestion: simplify sentences, use 'the reward is that' and choose correct noun forms ('sweets' or 'treats').

× No, to be honest, I not even know what, uh, my parents like to do.

✓ No, to be honest, I don't even know what my parents like to do.

Incorrect negation: 'I not' is ungrammatical in present tense; use 'I don't' (do not). Also remove unnecessary filler commas. Suggestion: use correct auxiliary 'do' for negation in the present tense.

× For example, my mum, she likes washing the drama on the television, so I don't think we share the same hobby.

✓ For example, my mum likes watching dramas on television, so I don't think we share the same hobby.

Pronoun redundancy and article/preposition errors: 'my mum, she' is redundant; use one subject. 'Washing' should be 'watching'. 'The drama' should be plural 'dramas' or 'TV dramas', and 'on television' (no 'the'). Suggestion: avoid redundant pronouns and use correct verb 'watching' and pluralize general nouns.

× And also my dad, he like to investing in the, uh, currency.

✓ And my dad also likes investing in currencies/foreign currency.

Subject-verb agreement and verb form: 'he like' should be 'he likes'. After 'likes', use gerund 'investing' not 'to investing'. 'The, uh, currency' is vague; use 'currencies' or 'foreign currency'. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with subjects and use gerund after 'like/likes' when describing hobbies.