Hobby— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and incorrect verb forms and articles.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading books. For example, I read historical novels and short stories because they keep my mind active and teach me about different cultures and ideas.

Sugerencia: Use past tense consistently and give a concise structure: topic sentence + one specific detail + a reason. Remove repetition and incomplete endings. Use linking words like 'and' or 'which' correctly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved painting when I was a child. I often painted landscapes and animals, which helped me develop concentration and creativity.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use present perfect or present simple appropriately to show continuation. Reduce fillers (uh, so) and finish your sentences. Give a specific example of what you draw now and explain why.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have kept drawing since childhood. These days I create modern art and small sculptures, which keeps my imagination active and improves my artistic skills.

Sugerencia: Be precise about who shares your hobby and explain briefly how it affects you both. Avoid vague phrases like 'our knowledge about' and remove fillers. Use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' to show result.

Ejemplo: Yes, my younger brother and I both enjoy painting. Because we practice together, we learn from each other and stay motivated to improve our skills.

× As I do, I like to reading stories book which helps to keep my mind active and gives valuable knowledge and skill about whole old.

✓ As I do, I like reading story books which help to keep my mind active and give valuable knowledge and skills about the past.

The error involves incorrect use of the verb + -ing form and pluralization. 'Like to reading' is incorrect; use either 'like reading' or 'like to read'. Also 'stories book' should be pluralized to 'story books' or 'stories' and verbs must agree with the plural subject ('help' not 'helps', 'give' not 'gives'). 'Skill' should be plural 'skills' and 'about whole old' is unclear; 'about the past' is a clearer, grammatical phrase.

× Yes, definitely in my childhood I like to do draw painting and drawing different kinds of painting in my childhood, which helps to me to keep my mind sharp and.

✓ Yes, definitely in my childhood I liked to draw and paint different kinds of pictures, which helped me to keep my mind sharp.

The sentence refers to a past period ('in my childhood') so verbs must be in the past tense: 'liked', 'drew' or 'liked to draw', and 'helped'. Remove redundant phrases and correct verb forms: 'like to do draw painting' is ungrammatical; use 'liked to draw and paint'. Also 'helps to me to keep' should be 'helped me to keep' or 'helped me keep'.

× Yeah, so definitely when I was child, I like to draw a painting of different, uh, things. But now I also like to draw different kind of modern art and sculpture, which helps to keep my mind sharp and.

✓ Yeah, so definitely when I was a child, I liked to draw paintings of different things. But now I also like to create different kinds of modern art and sculptures, which help to keep my mind sharp.

Two issues: article use before 'child' ('a child') and tense consistency (past 'liked' for childhood). Also pluralization and noun forms: 'a painting of different things' -> 'paintings of different things'; 'different kind' -> 'different kinds'; 'sculpture' plural 'sculptures'. 'Helps' should be 'help' to agree with plural subject 'kinds of modern art and sculptures'.

× Yes, definitely. My younger brother and I have same or similar kind of habit, like to draw different kind of paintings and modern art, which helps to focus on my own, uh, dreams and gain our knowledge about.

✓ Yes, definitely. My younger brother and I have the same or similar habits: we like to draw different kinds of paintings and modern art, which help us focus on our own dreams and gain knowledge.

Pronoun and agreement errors: 'have same or similar kind of habit' should be 'have the same or similar habits'. Use consistent pronouns: 'we like' instead of mixing 'I' with 'our'. 'Helps to focus on my own' should be 'help us focus on our own'. Remove incomplete phrase 'gain our knowledge about' and replace with 'gain knowledge' or specify the object.