Hobby— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct, limit length to 2–3 sentences, use clear topic sentence and specific details. Correct grammar (e.g., "learning Dutch"), avoid redundancy ("learning some new things such as learning..."). Add a brief reason or an example to enrich the answer.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have several hobbies. I especially enjoy reading novels and listening to music, and recently I’ve been learning Dutch because I plan to visit the Netherlands next year.

Sugerencia: Use past tense consistently and be concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail or example. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "so") appropriately and avoid vague phrases like "freedom and activities."

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. As a child I loved playing outside and cycling with my friends because it gave me freedom and helped me stay active, especially on weekends when we raced our bikes.

Sugerencia: Clarify meaning and correct grammar. Give one clear topic sentence naming the hobby you’ve kept since childhood, then support with a specific detail or memory. Remove confusing phrases (e.g., "paying authors").

Ejemplo: Yes, one hobby I’ve kept since childhood is cycling. I still ride regularly with friends, and I remember long summer rides when we explored nearby parks.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and then give one or two clear comparisons with correct grammar and tense. Use linking words like "however" correctly and keep sentences concise. Replace unclear phrases (e.g., "enjoy response through TikTok") with specific activities ("making videos on TikTok").

Ejemplo: No, we don’t share all the same hobbies. However, my cousin and I both enjoy making videos on TikTok and sometimes go window shopping together, and we also like reading novels when we have free time.

× I have several hobbies such as reading books, especially novels, and I always listen to music and learning some new things such as learning the language of Netherlands.

✓ I have several hobbies such as reading books, especially novels, and I always listen to music and learn new things such as learning the Dutch language.

Parallel structure error: after 'and' verbs should be in the same form. 'listen' is base form, so replace 'learning' with 'learn'. Also 'the language of Netherlands' is awkward; use 'the Dutch language' or 'Dutch'. Use consistent verb forms for clarity.

× Yes, I had several hobbies as a child. I enjoy playing outside, cycling and playing outdoor games with my friends because I like the freedom and activities.

✓ Yes, I had several hobbies as a child. I enjoyed playing outside, cycling and playing outdoor games with my friends because I liked the freedom and activities.

Tense consistency: the question asks about childhood (past), so verbs describing childhood activities should be in past tense. Change present 'enjoy' and 'like' to past 'enjoyed' and 'liked'.

× Yes, I have few hobbies since especially paying authors riding bicycles.

✓ Yes, I have a few hobbies since childhood, especially reading works by authors and riding bicycles.

Multiple problems: 'have few' likely needs 'have a few' to mean some. 'since especially paying authors' is ungrammatical; probably intended 'since childhood, especially reading works by authors'. Clarify with 'riding bicycles' as plural activity. This fixes singular/plural and word choice.

× I love cycling and do some activities with my friends.

✓ I love cycling and do activities with my friends.

Minor wording: 'do some activities' is acceptable but slightly informal; removing 'some' produces a cleaner parallel structure with 'love cycling and do activities'. No tense change required.

× No we don't share the same hobbies. However my cousin and I both enjoy response through TikTok, go window shopping and did some activities to learn new things and read novels.

✓ No, we don't share the same hobbies. However, my cousin and I both enjoy creating content on TikTok, going window shopping, doing activities to learn new things, and reading novels.

Pronoun and verb form issues and word choice: add comma after 'No'. 'Enjoy response through TikTok' is incorrect; likely 'enjoy creating content on TikTok' or 'responding' — 'creating content' is clearer. Use parallel gerund forms: 'creating', 'going', 'doing', 'reading'. Change 'did some activities' to 'doing activities' to keep present tense and parallel structure with 'enjoy'.