Part 1
Examinador
Do you like reading?
Candidato
I like letting because it's make me feel calm and, uh, it's make me feel focused on the thing that I.
Examinador
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Candidato
I prefer to read on paper, uh, because uh, I can touch a paper, I like picture of it and uh, currently I usually raise on the skin more than paper.
Examinador
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Candidato
When do you need to reach us? Uh, I list carefully when I leave for knowledge for a check and exam and be not uh, I lead on a cartoon, uh, for entertainment.
Do you like reading?
Puntuación: 42.0Sugerencia: ปรับโครงสร้างประโยคให้ชัดเจน ใช้คำศัพท์ถูกต้อง และลดคำย้อนไป-มา (uh) ให้คำตอบเป็นประโยคสั้น ๆ ไม่เกิน 3-4 ประโยค เน้นประโยคหัวข้อแล้วตามด้วยเหตุผล/ตัวอย่างสั้น ๆ ใช้คำว่า "reading" แทน "letting" และแก้ไวยากรณ์ เช่น "it makes me" รวมถึงฝึกความคล่องแคล่วเพื่อลดการหยุดชั่วคราว
Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. It makes me feel calm and helps me concentrate on the topic, so I can relax and learn at the same time.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Puntuación: 38.0Sugerencia: ตอบตรงคำถามและจัดลำดับเหตุผลโดยใช้ linking words เช่น "because" และ "however" แก้คำศัพท์ผิด (เช่น "touch paper", "pictures") และประโยคที่ไม่สมเหตุสมผล ("raise on the skin") ให้ชัดเจนว่าชอบอะไรและทำไม หลีกเลี่ยงคำเติมเสียง (uh) และจำกัดความยาวไม่เกิน 4-5 ประโยค
Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper because I like the feel of the pages and the printed pictures, which make reading more enjoyable. However, I sometimes read on a screen for convenience when I'm traveling.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Puntuación: 35.0Sugerencia: ทำความเข้าใจกับคำถามก่อนตอบ เริ่มด้วยประโยคหัวข้อแล้วให้ตัวอย่างเฉพาะเจาะจง ใช้คำศัพท์และไวยากรณ์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น "read carefully" และ "read for fun" แสดงความแตกต่างระหว่างกรณีที่ต้องอ่านละเอียดกับกรณีที่ไม่ต้องอ่านละเอียด และใช้ linking words เช่น "when" หรือ "but"
Ejemplo: I need to read carefully when I'm studying for tests or checking important information, because accuracy matters. But when I'm reading comics or novels for fun, I don't read as thoroughly and just enjoy the story.
× I like letting because it's make me feel calm and, uh, it's make me feel focused on the thing that I.
✓ I like reading because it makes me feel calm and it makes me feel focused on what I am doing.
The student used 'letting' instead of the gerund 'reading' (correct -ing form) and omitted third person singular agreement ('it makes' not 'it's make'). Also sentence ended incompletely; replaced vague 'the thing that I' with 'what I am doing' to complete the idea. Suggestion: use correct gerund for activities and ensure subject-verb agreement with third person singular 'it makes'.
× I prefer to read on paper, uh, because uh, I can touch a paper, I like picture of it and uh, currently I usually raise on the skin more than paper.
✓ I prefer to read on paper because I can touch the paper, I like its pictures, and currently I usually read on a screen more than on paper.
Prepositions and word choices were incorrect: use 'on paper' and 'on a screen' for reading mediums, 'touch the paper' (not 'a paper'), and 'pictures' with possessive 'its' for illustrations. 'Raise on the skin' is incorrect; likely meant 'read on the screen'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions 'on' for devices/surfaces and accurate verbs 'read'.
× When do you need to reach us? Uh, I list carefully when I leave for knowledge for a check and exam and be not uh, I lead on a cartoon, uh, for entertainment.
✓ When do you need to read carefully? I read carefully when I study for tests and exams, and when I'm not studying I read comics or cartoons for entertainment.
Multiple present-tense and word-choice errors: 'reach' should be 'read', 'list' -> 'read', 'leave for knowledge for a check' -> 'study for tests', 'be not' -> 'when I'm not', 'lead on a cartoon' -> 'read comics or cartoons'. Correct present simple for habitual actions ('I read') and use contractions or 'I am' for present continuous if needed. Suggestion: use the verb 'read' consistently and correct tense forms for habits and temporary situations.'