Part 1
Examinador
Do you like reading?
Candidato
No, I'm not big fan of everything because I think it's very boring and waste time. Also, I would like to prefer to play the video game instead of reading in my leisure time because I believe that video game is more interesting than reading.
Examinador
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Candidato
I prefer reading on a screen because I can store many books on one device, which makes it such more convenient than carrying physical books. It's also lightens the range of my bed so I can read anytime and anywhere.
Examinador
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Candidato
I think we need to read carefully when we see the post on social media because the information there can be misleading or even offensive to some people. On the other hand, I don't think we need to be careful to read the textbooks because they are actually written by experts and.
Do you like reading?
Puntuación: 48.0Sugerencia: 回答需要更直接并且语言更自然,避免语法和词汇错误。可用一到两句表达总观点,再用一到两句具体原因或例子。注意冠词、固定搭配和动词形式(例如:"not a big fan", "a waste of time", 不用重复情态或偏好词)。同时控制句子数量不超过5句。
Ejemplo: No, I'm not a big fan of reading because I often find it slow and less engaging. I prefer playing video games in my free time since they offer interactive stories and immediate rewards, which keep me more focused.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答总体清晰但需更准确和自然的表达,避免不地道的短语(例如:"such more convenient", "lightens the range of my bed")。可以先给出直接观点,再用两到三个具体原因并用连接词使逻辑连贯。
Ejemplo: I prefer reading on a screen because I can store many books on one device, which is much more convenient than carrying physical books. Also, e-readers are lightweight and let me read anytime and anywhere, especially in bed.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答观点明确但有逻辑和内容不完整的问题(句子未完结),且有不准确的绝对化表述(比如教材总是正确)。应避免绝对化,用连接词衔接对比,并补充具体例子说明何种情况需仔细阅读。
Ejemplo: We should read social media posts carefully because they can contain misleading or biased information, especially when they discuss health or politics. By contrast, textbooks usually undergo review, so they are generally more reliable, though it's still wise to double-check facts in critical situations.
× No, I'm not big fan of everything because I think it's very boring and waste time.
✓ No, I'm not a big fan of reading because I think it's very boring and a waste of time.
句中缺少不定冠词“a”和关于“everything”的用法不当。原句想表达“我不是很喜欢读书”,应使用“a big fan of reading”。此外,“waste time”前需加不定冠词“a”,并补全“of reading”以明确对象。建议:遇到表示“一位……的粉丝”时使用“a big fan of + 名词/动名词”;表示“一种浪费时间”的说法用“a waste of time”。
× Also, I would like to prefer to play the video game instead of reading in my leisure time because I believe that video game is more interesting than reading.
✓ Also, I prefer to play video games instead of reading in my leisure time because I believe that video games are more interesting than reading.
原句中“would like to prefer”用法重复且不自然,应直接用“prefer”。“the video game”指代不准确,习惯用复数“video games”表示游戏这一类,且谓语与复数主语需一致用“are”。建议:使用“prefer + to”或“prefer + -ing”结构,选择恰当的单复数。
× I prefer reading on a screen because I can store many books on one device, which makes it such more convenient than carrying physical books.
✓ I prefer reading on a screen because I can store many books on one device, which makes it much more convenient than carrying physical books.
短语“such more convenient”是错误搭配,正确表达应为“much more convenient”或“so much more convenient”。建议记住比较级修饰词搭配,使用“much more + 形容词”。
× It's also lightens the range of my bed so I can read anytime and anywhere.
✓ It also lightens the load on my bag so I can read anytime and anywhere.
原句语法错误:主语“It”与动词“lightens”后接名词短语需合理搭配,且“range of my bed”意义不明。根据语境应表达“减轻我包的负担(less to carry)”,可用“lightens the load on my bag”。建议:表达“减轻负担”用“lighten the load/burden”。
× I think we need to read carefully when we see the post on social media because the information there can be misleading or even offensive to some people.
✓ I think we need to read carefully when we see posts on social media because the information there can be misleading or even offensive to some people.
原句“the post”指单数,但社交媒体上通常是泛指多条帖子,应使用复数“posts”。这是可数名词的单复数问题(也可归入there be/数问题),应选复数以与泛指语境一致。建议:泛指习惯使用复数形式。
× On the other hand, I don't think we need to be careful to read the textbooks because they are actually written by experts and.
✓ On the other hand, I don't think we need to read textbooks carefully because they are actually written by experts.
原句结构混乱:短语“be careful to read”不自然,应为“read ... carefully”。句尾出现不完整的“and.”导致句子残缺。修正为“don't think we need to read textbooks carefully”。建议:动词与副词顺序通常为动词+副词(read carefully);避免句尾留下未完成的连接词。