Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Perbaiki kejelasan, tata bahasa, dan kosakata yang tidak tepat. Jawaban Anda terlalu panjang dan agak berbelit; gunakan kalimat topik yang jelas, dukungan spesifik singkat, serta kata-kata yang tepat (mis. 'reading' bukan 'free', 'history' bukan 'historian'). Batasi ke maksimal 3-4 kalimat dan gunakan linking words sederhana untuk keterkaitan.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. I have loved books since I was a child because they help me relax and escape daily stress. I read many kinds of books, especially fiction and history, which I find both entertaining and informative.

Sugerencia: Perbaiki grammar (mis: 'prefer reading' bukan 'prefer to reading') dan hilangkan pengulangan/keraguan ('uh'). Ganti frasa salah seperti 'cocktail' dengan kata yang tepat ('comfort' atau 'tactile feeling'). Berikan alasan spesifik singkat tentang kenyamanan dan contoh situasi.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper because it's more comfortable for my eyes and I enjoy the tactile feeling of holding a book. For example, I like reading novels in bed or at a café where paper books feel more relaxing than screens.

Sugerencia: Perbaiki struktur dan kata pengantar yang tidak perlu ('Next, basically') serta gunakan kontras yang jelas. Tambahkan detail spesifik tentang apa yang Anda lakukan saat membaca secara teliti (mis. membuat catatan, memeriksa argumen). Batasi menjadi 2-3 kalimat ringkas.

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully for academic purposes, for example when I study journal articles for exams; I usually take notes and check the main arguments. In contrast, I don't read comics or light novels carefully because I read them mainly for relaxation.

× Yes absolutely, I do love free since I was a child and everything is one of my favorite hobbies that really helped me a lot to unwind and escape from my daily stress.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I have loved reading since I was a child, and it is one of my favorite hobbies that really helps me unwind and escape from my daily stress.

The original sentence misused 'free' instead of 'reading' and mixed tenses. The verb tense should be present perfect 'have loved' to describe a past action continuing to the present. 'Everything' was vague; 'reading' is clearer. 'Helped' should be present simple 'helps' because it describes a habitual effect. Suggestions: replace incorrect word 'free' with 'reading', use present perfect for continuing states, and use present simple for habitual results.

× And I really like many different type of books such as fiction, historian.

✓ I really like many different types of books such as fiction and history books.

There is a singular/plural mismatch and wrong noun form: 'type' should be plural 'types' when modified by 'many', and 'historian' (a person) is incorrect for the genre; use 'history books' or 'historical books'. Also use 'and' not a comma before the last item for clarity. Suggestions: change 'type' to 'types' and use correct genre nouns.

× Personally, I much prefer to reading on paper because it's really more comfortable for me and for my eyes, and I really enjoy the cocktail and the sense of, uh, holding physical book rather than a digital or uh.

✓ Personally, I much prefer reading on paper because it's more comfortable for me and for my eyes, and I really enjoy the feel and the sense of holding a physical book rather than a digital one.

After 'prefer' use the base verb or gerund; 'prefer reading' is correct, not 'prefer to reading'. Remove redundant 'really' and 'more' (prefer already implies comparison). 'Cocktail' is the wrong word; probably meant 'feel'. Use article 'a' with 'physical book' and 'one' to refer to 'book' previously mentioned. Suggestions: use 'prefer reading', replace 'cocktail' with 'feel', add articles where needed.

× When do you need to read carefully, and when not?

✓ When do you need to read carefully, and when do you not?

The original is understandable but omitted the auxiliary verb in the second clause; for parallelism include 'do you' before 'not'. This is a sentence-structure/auxiliary omission issue. Suggestion: maintain parallel structure by repeating the auxiliary.

× Next, basically I really need to read carefully when it comes to academic purpose, such as reading an article or journal for my exam.

✓ Basically, I need to read carefully when it comes to academic purposes, such as reading an article or a journal for my exams.

Use plural 'purposes' for general situations and include articles: 'a journal'. 'For my exam' is better as 'for my exams' to indicate recurring events. Remove redundant 'next' and 'really' for clarity. Suggestions: use plural forms for general contexts and include articles before countable nouns.

× And on the other hand, I don't really need to read carefully when I read comics or novel.

✓ On the other hand, I don't really need to read carefully when I read comics or novels.

Use plural 'novels' to match 'comics' and for general statements about types of reading. Also remove leading conjunction 'And' for formal clarity. Suggestions: use plural nouns for general categories and avoid starting sentences with unnecessary conjunctions.'