Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar while keeping specific supporting details. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with correct verb forms and linking words. Avoid repetition and unnecessary phrases.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading because it helps me relax after a busy day and recharges my energy. For example, reading novels and non-fiction gives me new perspectives and factual knowledge, which I can later apply at work or in conversations.

Sugerencia: Avoid hesitations and use clearer reasons with accurate vocabulary. Give one main reason plus a brief supporting example and use linking words (for example, moreover). Correct word choice (advertisements, key points) and concise phrasing will improve coherence.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper because it is easier to concentrate; for example, when I read on a screen I often get distracted by pop-up advertisements. Moreover, paper allows me to underline key points, which helps me remember important information.

Sugerencia: Reduce filler words and give a structured answer: state the main idea, then contrast two clear situations using linking words (for example, whereas). Provide a specific example for each case to show understanding.

Ejemplo: People need to read carefully when they deal with instructions or legal documents because mistakes can have serious consequences; for instance, signing a contract without reading it can cause problems. In contrast, reading fiction can be more relaxed and enjoyable, where detailed accuracy is less important.

× Yes, I am enthusiastic about reading because it helped me to get away from my hustle and bustle of my daily routines and it recharges my batteries.

✓ Yes, I am enthusiastic about reading because it helps me to get away from the hustle and bustle of my daily routine and it recharges my batteries.

Mixed tenses and form errors: 'helped' is past but the student speaks about a general habit so present simple 'helps' is correct. 'hustle and bustle' is a fixed expression and 'my daily routines' is better as singular 'my daily routine' to refer to overall routine. Also keep 'recharges' as present simple to match general truth. Suggest using present simple for habitual actions and fixed expressions.

× The other thing that I like to mention, when I read lots of stories, books and the like, I can get lots of experience and they can get raised my knowledge and information.

✓ Another thing I would like to mention is that when I read many stories, books and the like, I gain a lot of experience and they increase my knowledge and information.

Incorrect verb forms and collocations: 'The other thing that I like to mention' is wordy; 'Another thing I would like to mention' is more natural. 'read lots of' -> 'read many' (countable). 'I can get lots of experience' -> 'I gain a lot of experience' uses correct verb and noun collocation. 'they can get raised my knowledge' is ungrammatical; use 'they increase my knowledge' or 'they raise my level of knowledge'. Suggest learning common verb+noun collocations (gain experience, increase knowledge).

× To be honest with you, I prefer to read on paper because I can concentrate where, where you, uh, read on screen.

✓ To be honest, I prefer to read on paper because I can concentrate better than when I read on a screen.

Awkward comparative structure and tense clarity: 'where, where you read on screen' is unclear. Use 'better than when I read on a screen' to compare present habitual actions. Keep present simple 'prefer' and 'read' for habits. Suggest practicing comparative constructions 'better than when...'.

× There are lots of, uh, advertise.

✓ There are lots of advertisements.

Countable noun form: 'advertise' is a verb; the correct noun plural is 'advertisements'. Also 'lots of' requires plural noun here. Suggest learning noun-verb differences and plural forms.

× So, uh, it may distract you, uh, and you cannot concentrate well.

✓ So, it may distract you and you may not be able to concentrate well.

Modal and verb phrase clarity: 'you cannot concentrate well' is understandable but more natural to use 'may not be able to' to match 'may distract'. This keeps modality consistent. Suggest matching modal verbs for possibility and ability.

× And the other thing that I like to mention, uh, we can highlight on paper the boiled points.

✓ Another thing I'd like to mention is that we can highlight the key points on paper.

Wrong word choice and word order: 'boiled points' is incorrect; likely intended 'bullet points' or 'key points'. 'highlight on paper the boiled points' has awkward order; place object after verb: 'highlight the key points on paper.' Suggest learning common academic phrases 'key points' and correct word order.

× Uh, actually, I believe that when, uh, people want to read the instruction and also, uh, legal documents for signing and, uh, the other thing when they are prepared for exams, uh, they read, uh, carefully, uh, but uh, when they, uh, want to read the stories and other books, they don't need to be careful.

✓ I believe that when people want to read instructions or sign legal documents, or when they are preparing for exams, they should read carefully; but when they want to read stories or other books, they do not need to be so careful.

Run-on sentence and plural/singular issues: 'read the instruction' should be 'read instructions' or 'read the instructions'. Use 'preparing' for present continuous to describe ongoing preparation. 'They read carefully' is better expressed as 'they should read carefully' to indicate obligation. The contrasting clause needs clearer connector and modal. Suggest breaking long sentences into clearer clauses and using appropriate modals ('should') for advice.