Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one supporting detail with correct verb forms and prepositions. Avoid redundancy and correct small errors (e.g., "on the past" → "in the past", "fascinated by" → "I am fascinated by").

Ejemplo: I enjoy reading mainly literature and history because I like learning about events in the past and how cultures have changed. For example, I recently read about the Kashmir Files to understand social and political changes in Kashmir over the last two decades.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one specific, correctly formed reason. Fix grammar (e.g., "which give" → "which gives", "fault or unfold" unclear — use "flip" or "turn"). Avoid wordy or vague phrases and keep within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper because turning the pages gives me a physical sense of progress and satisfaction. Also, paper causes less eye strain than screens, so I can read for longer without discomfort.

Sugerencia: Start with a concise topic sentence answering both parts, then add a clear contrast using linking words (e.g., "however," "whereas"). Improve grammar and phrasing (e.g., "detail factual information" → "detailed factual information", "that's you are reading" → "that you are reading").

Ejemplo: Generally, you do not need to read carefully when the main idea is obvious, such as short informal texts; however, you should read carefully when the text contains detailed factual information like dates, statistics, or instructions because those details are important for accurate understanding.

× I love reading books based on literature and history just to know the events that happened on the past and also fascinated by exploring the different culture and evolution of the world over the years.

✓ I love reading books about literature and history just to know the events that happened in the past and I am also fascinated by exploring different cultures and the world's evolution over the years.

Incorrect adjective/adverb forms and sentence structure: 'based on literature and history' is better expressed as 'books about literature and history'; 'on the past' should be 'in the past' (preposition error but corrected within restructuring); 'also fascinated by' needs a subject and verb ('I am also fascinated'); 'different culture' should be plural 'different cultures'; 'evolution of the world' is more natural as 'the world's evolution'. Suggestion: include a clear subject and use plural nouns for general references.

× For example, recently I studied about the Kashmir Files, how the evolution of Kashmir happened in last two decades.

✓ For example, recently I studied the Kashmir Files and learned how the situation in Kashmir changed over the last two decades.

Incorrect verb form and preposition use: 'studied about' is incorrect; use 'studied' or 'learned about' without 'about' after 'studied'. 'How the evolution of Kashmir happened' is awkward and uses 'evolution' incorrectly; use 'how the situation in Kashmir changed'. Also add the definite article 'the' in 'the last two decades'. Suggestion: use appropriate verbs ('studied' or 'learned about') and clearer nouns ('situation' or 'history') for readability.

× I prefer to read on paper which give me a sense of satisfaction when I fault or unfold the papers.

✓ I prefer to read on paper, which gives me a sense of satisfaction when I fold or unfold the pages.

Singular/plural and verb agreement errors: 'which give' should be 'which gives' to agree with singular 'paper' (or with the idea as a whole). 'Fault' is the wrong word; use 'fold'. 'The papers' is better as 'the pages' when referring to a book or printed material. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and use correct vocabulary for actions with paper.

× It also helps me to be eloquent in literature and do not reduce my level of visibility that a screen do when we watch excessive amount of screen.

✓ It also helps me become more fluent in literature and does not reduce my ability to focus the way a screen does when we watch an excessive amount of it.

Subject-verb agreement and word choice errors: 'do not reduce' should agree with singular subject 'It' so use 'does not reduce'. 'My level of visibility' is incorrect for meaning; use 'my ability to focus' or 'my readability/visibility' depending on intent. 'A screen do' should be 'a screen does'. 'Excessive amount of screen' needs an article and pronoun: 'an excessive amount of it' or 'excessive screen time'. Suggestion: match verbs to subjects and choose idiomatic phrases like 'become more fluent' and 'screen does' or 'screen time'.

× On the whole, if the font is bold and the meaning is obvious, you don't need to read very carefully.

✓ On the whole, if the font is bold and the meaning is obvious, you do not need to read very carefully.

Contraction use is acceptable but ensure consistency: 'you don't need' is informal; expanded 'you do not need' is clearer in formal answers. No major tense error, but maintain consistent present simple. Suggestion: use full forms in formal speech and keep present simple for general truths.

× On the other hand, you must read carefully when a text contains detail factual information such as dates and specific figures, because those details are essential to understand the basic paragraph that's you are reading.

✓ On the other hand, you must read carefully when a text contains detailed factual information such as dates and specific figures, because those details are essential to understand the paragraph you are reading.

Incorrect adjective form and awkward clause: 'detail factual information' should be 'detailed factual information' (adjective form). 'the basic paragraph that's you are reading' has a grammatical error: 'that's you are reading' is incorrect; use 'the paragraph you are reading' or 'the paragraph that you are reading'. Suggestion: use correct adjective forms and simplify relative clauses by omitting unnecessary words like 'that' when followed by a subject pronoun.