Part 1
Examinador
Do you like reading?
Candidato
I do like reading so much because it provide me a knowledge that I didn't have before. For example, I have read one book that talking about finance and I already curious about that topic so this book.
Examinador
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Candidato
I would say I prefer Brady on Skin because as a software engineer I used to work in front of the computer, so reading through the scheme more commonly for me than reading it on the newspaper or the.
Examinador
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Candidato
I think the time that I need to grading more careful is about like the town when I take an exam or reading a thing that I have to sigh or quite like have an effect in the terms of.
Do you like reading?
Puntuación: 46.0Sugerencia: Be concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and give one specific supporting detail. Use linking words (for example) correctly and avoid redundancy.
Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading because it helps me learn new things. For example, I recently read a book about personal finance that sparked my curiosity about investing, and I started following financial blogs to learn more.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Puntuación: 38.0Sugerencia: Give a clear direct answer (paper or screen), correct vocabulary, and a concise reason with one specific example. Use linking words like 'because' and avoid unclear words or typos.
Ejemplo: I prefer reading on a screen because, as a software engineer, I spend most of my day at a computer. For instance, I read technical articles and e-books on my laptop or tablet since it is more convenient and searchable.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Puntuación: 30.0Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence distinguishing the two situations. Use correct verbs and specific examples (e.g. exams, contracts) and linking words (for example, but). Keep it short and precise.
Ejemplo: I need to read carefully when the information has important consequences, for example, during exams or when signing a contract. By contrast, I skim casual articles or social media posts when I just want a quick overview.
× I do like reading so much because it provide me a knowledge that I didn't have before.
✓ I do like reading so much because it provides me with knowledge that I didn't have before.
The verb 'provide' must agree with singular subject 'it' (third person singular) so use 'provides' (also covered by subject-verb agreement). 'a knowledge' is incorrect because 'knowledge' is uncountable; remove the article and use 'with' to show what is provided. Suggestion: use 'provides me with knowledge' to be natural.
× For example, I have read one book that talking about finance and I already curious about that topic so this book.
✓ For example, I have read a book that talks about finance and I became curious about that topic because of it.
'that talking' is incorrect; relative clause needs finite verb 'talks' (present simple) to match 'a book that talks about finance.' 'I already curious' lacks a linking verb—use 'became' or 'am' depending on intended time; here past reading led to curiosity so 'became' fits. Also use 'a book' not 'one book' for naturalness and 'because of it' or 'because of this book' to indicate cause.
× I would say I prefer Brady on Skin because as a software engineer I used to work in front of the computer, so reading through the scheme more commonly for me than reading it on the newspaper or the.
✓ I would say I prefer reading on screen because, as a software engineer, I am used to working in front of a computer, so reading on a screen is more common for me than reading a newspaper.
Many preposition and word-choice errors: 'Brady on Skin' appears to be misheard for 'reading on screen.' Use 'on screen' and 'in front of a computer' or 'working in front of a computer'—'used to' with habitual past is incorrect here; use 'am used to' or 'used to working'—best: 'am used to working in front of a computer.' 'through the scheme' is wrong; use 'on a screen.' 'on the newspaper' should be 'a newspaper' or 'in the newspaper.' Also remove stray 'or the.'
× When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
✓ When do you need to read carefully, and when do you not?
The original question is grammatical but the student responses following must match. Here, to form the negative question clause in parallel structure, include 'do' in the second clause: 'when do you not?' This keeps auxiliary 'do' present for both parts. Alternatively 'when don't you?' is more natural.
× I think the time that I need to grading more careful is about like the town when I take an exam or reading a thing that I have to sigh or quite like have an effect in the terms of.
✓ I think the times when I need to read more carefully are around when I take an exam or when I read something that I have to sign or that could have an effect in terms of consequences.
Multiple tense and form errors: 'need to grading' should be 'need to read' or 'need to be more careful when reading'—use base verb after 'need to.' 'More careful' with adverb 'more carefully' is required for manner. 'The time' -> 'times' to match plural examples and subject-verb agreement: 'times ... are'. 'the town' likely misheard for 'the time' or 'the exam'—context suggests 'around when I take an exam.' 'sigh' is wrong for 'sign.' 'quite like have an effect in the terms of' unclear; corrected to 'that could have an effect in terms of consequences.' Keep past/simple present as appropriate: 'when I take an exam' (present habitual) and 'when I read something that I have to sign' (present/future obligation).