Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Reduce hesitations and repetitions, make the response more coherent by using a clear topic sentence and two supporting details. Be specific about what you read and why it interests you. Use linking words like “for example” or “lately” correctly and avoid grammatical errors (e.g., “I became interested in religion”). Keep it under five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading because it lets me learn about new subjects from home. For example, lately I have been reading books about world religions to understand different beliefs and practices. This has helped me see how culture and faith influence people’s lives.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then give two clear reasons with correct vocabulary and grammar. Avoid odd phrases like “You are my tech person.” Use linking words such as “first” and “also.” Be specific about sensory details (texture, glare, ease) and correct word forms (e.g., “how light is reflected”).

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper rather than on a screen. First, I like the texture and feel of paper, which makes reading more comfortable. Also, paper pages reduce glare and feel more natural to my eyes, so I can read for longer periods without strain.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence and then contrast two situations using linking words like “when” and “however.” Use precise verbs (e.g., “read carefully,” “skim”) and correct grammar (e.g., “I tend to skim them” → “I tend to skim them” but match plural/singular). Provide a brief reason or example for each case.

Ejemplo: It depends on the purpose: when I need to learn or make decisions, I read very carefully to understand details and avoid mistakes. However, when I read casual news or light articles, I usually skim them to get the main idea quickly.

× Yes, I, I enjoy reading a lot because it provides me a way to, uh, explore new things even I'm at home.

✓ Yes, I enjoy reading a lot because it provides me a way to explore new things even when I am at home.

The original sentence misuses 'even I'm at home'. This is a clause that needs a subordinating word and correct verb form: use 'when I am' (present simple progressive isn't needed). Remove filler duplications 'I, I' and unnecessary commas. Suggestion: practice linking clauses with conjunctions like 'when' and use subject + auxiliary for clarity.

× Uh, for example, recently I, uh, I have a strong learning, I get interested into religion.

✓ For example, recently I have developed a strong interest in religion.

Multiple issues: 'have a strong learning' is incorrect collocation and 'get interested into' conflicts with correct preposition. The correct phrase is 'developed a strong interest in'. Use present perfect 'have developed' to indicate a recent change continuing to present. Remove filler and duplicate pronoun.

× You are my tech person.

✓ You are my tech person.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable in meaning, though informal. No correction needed other than context; it correctly uses pronoun 'you'. No change required.

× I do prefer to read on paper because specifically I like the texture and they how they light, uh, reflected on the paper.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because I specifically like the texture and how the light is reflected on it.

Problems: unneeded auxiliary 'do' (acceptable for emphasis but unnecessary), phrase 'they how they light' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use 'how the light is reflected' and replace 'on the paper' with 'on it' or 'on paper'. Also place 'specifically' before the clause it modifies.

× It just really unique.

✓ It's just really unique.

Missing auxiliary verb 'is' causes a sentence fragment; contraction 'it's' or 'it is' completes subject-verb structure. The adjective 'unique' is fine. Suggestion: ensure every clause has a verb.

× If I'm reading some very serious topic, I'll tend to reason more carefully, and if I'm reading something that is not that important, I would, uh, tend to skim them.

✓ If I'm reading a very serious topic, I'll tend to read more carefully, and if I'm reading something that is not that important, I'll tend to skim it.

Several issues: 'reason more carefully' is incorrect collocation — should be 'read more carefully'. 'Skim them' mismatches singular 'something' with plural pronoun 'them'; use 'it'. Also keep conditional/modal consistent: use 'I'll' for both clauses to reflect future tendency. Remove filler 'uh' and ensure pronoun agreement.