Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and fix subject-verb agreement and awkward phrasing.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially motivational books. For example, I read about time management and then try to apply those techniques to organize my day better.

Sugerencia: Reduce hesitation words and streamline your answer. Give a clear preference sentence, then one specific reason with linking words. Correct sentence structure and avoid repetitions.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on my iPhone because I have a busy schedule. For instance, the reading app lets me pick up where I left off during short breaks or while commuting.

Sugerencia: Provide a concise topic sentence and then one or two specific situations with linking words. Eliminate filler sounds and repeat ideas only if adding new detail.

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully when I am researching a specific topic or preparing assignments because I must understand theories accurately. However, I read less carefully when I just want to get the main ideas or enjoy a story.

Sugerencia: State your preference clearly, then give a specific reason and an example using linking words. Remove hesitations and improve phrasing to sound more natural.

Ejemplo: I prefer scanning because I usually have limited time and want to grasp the main points quickly. For example, when reading articles, I read headings and first sentences to identify the key ideas.

× Yes, I do, reading books are my favorite, is my favorite hobby and whenever I have some spare time I like to read motivational books and I also want to implement the theories and everything which I learned from the books in my daily life.

✓ Yes, I do. Reading books are my favorite: they are my favorite hobby, and whenever I have some spare time I like to read motivational books, and I also want to implement the theories and everything that I learn from the books in my daily life.

The sentence contains number and agreement problems. 'Reading books are my favorite' is awkward because 'reading' (gerund) is a singular activity while 'books' is plural; better to separate into clauses: 'Reading books is my favorite' or 'Reading books is my favorite hobby.' Also 'everything which I learned' mixes past with present context; use present simple 'learn' for habitual action. Suggestion: use 'Reading books is my favorite hobby' or 'Reading books is my favorite; they are my favorite hobby' and keep tense consistent.

× Uh, as I have busy schedule, so I mostly like digital books on my iPhone.

✓ Uh, as I have a busy schedule, I mostly like digital books on my iPhone.

Missing indefinite article before 'busy schedule'. Use 'a busy schedule'. Also remove redundant 'so' after 'as' to avoid redundancy. Suggestion: 'As I have a busy schedule, I mostly prefer digital books on my iPhone.'

× Actually, I have, uh, iPhone has its, uh, it's on app for your books, uh, which gives me like, uh, which, which provides me easy way to read books whenever I have time in while traveling or.

✓ Actually, my iPhone has an app for books that provides an easy way to read whenever I have time while traveling.

The original is disfluent and has incorrect structure: 'I have, uh, iPhone has its' is redundant and ungrammatical. Use one subject 'my iPhone' and correct article 'an app'. 'Provides me easy way' needs an article and preposition: 'provides an easy way to read'. Remove extraneous fillers and finish the clause; 'in while traveling' is wrong — use 'while traveling.' Suggest practicing concise sentence planning.

× Especially when I need to research for any particular topic or I want to get any particular knowledge, that time I, uh, have to focus more on reading books And uh, whenever I have to do my assignments and, uh, I need to find some particular theory, that time I need to focus more on reading.

✓ Especially when I need to research a particular topic or want to gain specific knowledge, I have to focus more on reading books. Also, whenever I do my assignments and need to find a particular theory, I need to focus more on reading.

Tense is generally present simple for habitual actions; simplify 'research for' to 'research a topic' and 'get any particular knowledge' to 'gain specific knowledge.' Remove redundant phrases 'that time' and filler words. Use consistent present tense and clearer collocations: 'research a topic', 'gain knowledge', 'do my assignments.'

× I prefer scanning as I do not have much time to give to read a book, so I just uh, try to focus on major ideas through which I can get much knowledge.

✓ I prefer scanning because I do not have much time to spend reading a book, so I try to focus on the main ideas through which I can gain a lot of knowledge.

Preposition and verb collocations are incorrect: use 'time to spend reading' rather than 'time to give to read.' 'Major ideas' better rendered as 'main ideas.' 'Get much knowledge' is non-native; use 'gain a lot of knowledge.' Also replace 'as' with 'because' for clarity and remove filler 'uh.'