Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện rõ ràng và mạch lạc của câu trả lời: tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp. Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No + lý do ngắn gọn), sau đó thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể. Sử dụng liên từ như "because" hoặc "so" để nối ý. Ví dụ, sửa lỗi về thì và danh từ (reading books, promoted), và tránh nói quá dài trong một câu.

Ejemplo: I enjoy reading in general, but I prefer getting information from videos and podcasts because they are more engaging and time-efficient. For example, I often follow short educational YouTube channels and weekly podcasts that summarize new ideas quickly.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện ngữ pháp, trật tự từ và chọn từ phù hợp: dùng cấu trúc ngắn gọn để nêu quan điểm, sau đó liệt kê lí do với liên từ phù hợp (such as, because, and). Tránh sai cấu trúc như "would rather to choose" (phải là "would rather" hoặc "prefer") và sai tính từ/phó từ (instant → instantaneous or immediately). Nên đưa ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ: reading news on phone).

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on a screen rather than on paper because online content is updated quickly and it's more convenient and cheaper. For instance, I read news and articles on my phone during my commute, which saves time and feels less tiring than carrying heavy books.

Sugerencia: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt để rõ ý: dùng cấu trúc mạch lạc (topic sentence + supporting details). Giải thích rõ ràng phân biệt hai tình huống (careful vs casual) và dùng từ chính xác (e.g., "skimming headlines", "persuasive articles"). Tránh lỗi từ (gland → glance, persuasing → persuasive, social medial → social media) và dùng liên từ như "however" hoặc "for example" để nối ý.

Ejemplo: It depends on the material. I read carefully when studying academic texts or legal documents because I need to understand details and avoid mistakes. However, when I read comics, social media posts or news headlines I usually just skim them to get the main idea and relax.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và sự rõ ràng: tránh các lỗi như "registered scan" (không đúng), dùng "scan" hoặc "skim" đúng cách. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp, rồi giải thích lý do và thêm ví dụ cụ thể. Dùng liên từ như "because", "so", "for example" để kết nối ý.

Ejemplo: I prefer detailed reading for academic work because I need to understand concepts precisely and avoid mistakes. For leisure reading, I usually skim articles or blogs to get the main points quickly; for example, I skim recipe blogs when I just want a quick idea of ingredients.

× Well actually I come from the literature class which is promote the re reading but actually I prefer getting information from videos or podcasts instead of reading book.

✓ Well, actually I come from a literature class which promotes rereading, but I prefer getting information from videos or podcasts instead of reading books.

The adjectives/adverbs and verb forms are incorrect: 'promote' should be 'promotes' to agree with singular subject 'class' (subject-verb agreement), 're reading' should be 'rereading' as one word, and 'reading book' requires plural 'books' or an article. Suggested improvement: ensure verbs agree with their subjects and use correct word forms and plural nouns when generalizing about books.

× In my opinion, I would rather to choose reading on a screen instead of reading on a paper, because I think reading on screen is always updated recently, is more convenient, cheaper and instantly than on paper.

✓ In my opinion, I would rather choose reading on a screen instead of reading on paper, because I think reading on a screen is more up to date, more convenient, cheaper and more instant than on paper.

Errors include incorrect use of 'would rather to choose' (modal preference should be 'would rather choose'), unnecessary article 'a paper' should be 'paper' when speaking generally, comparative/adverb forms wrong: 'is always updated recently' should be 'is more up to date' and 'instantly' (an adverb) should be adjective 'instant' or phrase 'more immediate'. Suggested improvement: practice structures with 'would rather' and use comparative forms consistently (more X, more Y).

× It's make me not to feel stressed and tired, boring.

✓ It doesn't make me feel stressed, tired, or bored.

Wrong verb form and negation: 'It's make me not to feel' should be 'It doesn't make me feel'. 'Boring' is the present participle but the correct adjective describing feeling is 'bored'. Suggested improvement: use do-support for negation and match adjective forms to describe emotions (bored, tired).

× I think it is depend on what I'm reading.

✓ I think it depends on what I'm reading.

Verb form error: 'is depend' is incorrect; the present simple requires 'depends' for the third person singular subject 'it'. Suggested improvement: remember third-person singular present tense takes -s.

× When reading for fun like comics or like novel manga I just read to relax and avoid too busy and the stress of real life.

✓ When reading for fun, like comics or manga novels, I just read to relax and to escape the busyness and stress of real life.

Several issues: wording and tense need smoothing. 'Like novel manga' is awkward — reorder to 'manga novels' or 'novels or manga'. 'Avoid too busy' is ungrammatical; use 'escape the busyness' or 'avoid being too busy'. Suggested improvement: choose appropriate verbs ('escape', 'avoid') and correct noun phrases for clarity.

× Besides sometime I looking at persuasing literature, social medial or new headlines are usually just gland at the main point.

✓ Besides, sometimes I look at persuasive literature, social media, or news headlines, which are usually just glanced at for the main point.

Multiple grammatical errors: 'sometime' should be 'sometimes', 'I looking' needs auxiliary or base form 'I look', 'persuasing' should be 'persuasive', 'social medial' -> 'social media', 'new headlines' -> 'news headlines', and sentence structure unclear: use relative clause 'which are usually just glanced at for the main point'. Suggested improvement: check spelling, verb forms, and use relative clauses to connect ideas correctly.

× As I said, it is depend on what I'm reading.

✓ As I said, it depends on what I'm reading.

Same as earlier: 'is depend' is incorrect; use 'depends' for third person singular. Suggested improvement: add -s for third-person singular present verbs.

× For academic work I have to read in detail carefully to not make a mistake, but for daily free time I registered scan and for fun.

✓ For academic work I have to read carefully in detail so I don't make mistakes, but in my free time I scan material quickly for fun.

Awkward structure and wrong words: 'read in detail carefully' is redundant — use 'read carefully in detail' or just 'read carefully'. 'To not make a mistake' is less natural than 'so I don't make mistakes'. 'I registered scan' is incorrect and unclear; use 'I scan' or 'I skim'. Suggested improvement: remove redundancy, use natural collocations ('scan' or 'skim') and correct negative form 'don't'.