Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 문법과 어휘 선택을 바로잡고 문장을 명확하게 구성하세요. 현재 문장은 동사 누락('read a lot'에서 'read' 뒤의 'a' 위치 오류)와 불필요한 반복('some' 중복) 문제가 있습니다. 간단한 주제 문장(예: 'Yes, I enjoy reading.')으로 시작한 뒤, 구체적인 예시(어떤 장르의 소설인지, 얼마나 자주 읽는지)를 추가하고, 문장 수는 최대 3~4문장으로 유지하세요. 또한 ‘some’ 과 같은 모호한 표현 대신 정확한 빈도나 장르를 사용하면 더 자연스럽습니다.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. I usually read novels and comic books, especially fantasy novels, and I try to read for about an hour every day.

Sugerencia: 문장은 비교적 이해되지만 자연스러운 표현과 연결어 사용을 개선하세요. 'on the paper'는 어색하므로 'on paper'로 수정하고, 이유를 두 부분으로 나눌 때 연결어로 자연스럽게 연결하세요. 또한 'makes my eyes get worse' 대신 더 자연스러운 표현('strains my eyes' 등)을 사용하세요. 최대 3문장으로 요약해 주세요.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper because I like the texture and feel of a physical book. Also, reading on a screen tends to strain my eyes, so paper is more comfortable for long sessions.

Sugerencia: 질문을 이해하지 못했을 때 바로 재질문하는 것은 괜찮지만, 시험 상황에서는 간단히 clarification을 요청한 뒤 가능한 한 빠르게 답변을 시도하세요. 예를 들어 어떤 부분을 말하는지(예: 업무 관련 문서인지 소설인지) 확인한 뒤, 두 상황(꼼꼼히 읽어야 할 때와 대충 읽어도 되는 때)을 예시로 들어 비교하면 됩니다. 문장은 토픽 문장 + 한두 개의 구체적 예시로 구성하세요.

Ejemplo: Do you mean for work or for pleasure? If you mean work, I need to read carefully when I check official documents or instructions. For pleasure, like light articles or comics, I usually skim.

Sugerencia: 응답이 논리적으로 연결되지 않고 어휘·문법 오류가 많습니다('test routine' 의미 불분명, 'nobles' 오타). 질문에 직접 답하고 이유를 구체적으로 제시하세요. 예: 'I prefer detailed reading because...' 또는 'I prefer scanning when...' 처럼 명확한 주제 문장 후 연결어로 이유와 예시를 덧붙이세요. 불필요한 단어는 제거하고 2~3문장으로 간결하게 표현하세요.

Ejemplo: I prefer detailed reading because I enjoy novels and care about the author’s wording and descriptions. However, I usually scan when I’m looking for specific information, such as dates or names.

× Yes, I like to read some books, like some novels and comic books, but I don't really a lot.

✓ Yes, I like to read books, such as novels and comic books, but I don't really read a lot.

The original sentence omits the verb 'read' in the second clause, causing a sentence structure error and subject-verb relationship问题. Also, 'some books' and 'like some novels' is awkward; use 'books, such as novels' for clear examples. Suggestion: include the verb after 'don't really' and use 'such as' or 'like' correctly: 'I don't really read a lot.'

× I prefer to read on the paper because I like the texture of the paper also.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because I like the texture of the paper.

Use 'on paper' (no article) when referring to the medium in general. Repeating 'the paper' is redundant; keep one mention. Suggestion: say 'on paper' to indicate reading in physical form and avoid unnecessary articles.

× Reading on the screen makes my eyes get worse.

✓ Reading on a screen hurts my eyes or Reading on a screen makes my eyesight worse.

'Makes my eyes get worse' is awkward and unidiomatic. Use 'hurts my eyes' or 'makes my eyesight worse' to express deterioration. Also use 'a screen' for general reference to screens.

× Can you rephrase your request?

✓ Could you rephrase the question?

While not strictly ungrammatical, in this context the examiner asked a question; 'question' is more appropriate than 'request.' Use 'Could you' for polite clarification. Suggestion: respond with 'Could you rephrase the question?' or simply ask for clarification: 'Could you repeat the question?'

× I prefer to test routine because I like to read some novels and the detailed expression is important in when I read nobles so.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because I like to read novels and detailed expressions are important when I read them.

The original has multiple issues: 'test routine' is incorrect word choice—likely intended 'skimming' or 'detailed reading.' 'In when I read nobles' has wrong preposition and misspelling ('nobles'→'novels'), and 'so' is unnecessary. Correct structure: state preference ('I prefer detailed reading'), use 'novels' correctly, and place 'when I read them' as the time clause. Suggestion: choose correct term ('detailed reading' or 'skimming') and ensure nouns are spelled and clauses positioned properly.