Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 用简洁、准确的句子直接回答并注意语法与时态。避免多余犹豫（如“uh”），纠正错误的短语（如“When was a child”应为“When I was a child”），并把观点和支持细节控制在不超过5句内。可以添加一两句具体说明为什么这本书对学习和工作有帮助。

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. When I was a child, I often visited the library after school to borrow books. My favorite book is The Ordinary World by Lu Yao, a famous Chinese writer, because it taught me about perseverance and social responsibility. Those lessons have helped me in my studies and in planning my career.

Sugerencia: 回答要更自然并修正语法与表达错误。避免冗长且重复的句子，使用衔接词（e.g. because, however）来组织理由。澄清模糊表达（如“convenient to take laws and easy to refuse later”不清楚），并给出具体例子，比如纸质书便于做笔记、翻页和减少眼睛疲劳。

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper because physical books are easier to annotate and flip through quickly. For example, when studying I can underline important passages and write notes in the margins, which helps me remember information better. Also, paper books reduce screen fatigue.

Sugerencia: 先用一句主题句直接回答，然后用一两句具体例子支持。修正错误单词（如“term retirees”应为“materials”或“texts”），注意语法（如“really very carefully”改为“very carefully”）。明确区分需要仔细阅读的情境（学习、工作相关材料）与不需要的情境（广告、招贴）。

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully when the material is related to my studies or work because I must understand and remember details. For instance, I read technical articles slowly and take notes to learn new skills. However, I rarely read street advertisements carefully since they are usually irrelevant to me.

Sugerencia: 答案要更简洁并避免重复信息。先给出直接回答，再用一到两句具体例子说明为何偏好细读。修正人名和书名拼写错误，并用连词使句子更连贯。

Ejemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me fully understand the content and retain information. For example, when I read The Ordinary World by Lu Yao, I studied the characters closely and noted the themes, which made the lessons more memorable and useful for my future studies.

× When was a child I usually went to the library to read and borrow books after school.

✓ When I was a child, I usually went to the library to read and borrow books after school.

句子中主语和时间状语顺序不当，且缺少逗号分隔。正确结构为“When I was a child”（当我还是个孩子时）放在句首，然后接过去时动词“went”。建议在时间状语后加逗号以提高可读性。

× My favorite book is The Ordinary Word written by Luia uh, Chinese famous writer.

✓ My favorite book is The Ordinary World, written by Luia, a famous Chinese writer.

原句中“The Ordinary Word”可能为书名拼写错误（应为 World），并且定语顺序错误。英文中形容词或名词短语前通常用不定冠词+a来引出职业或身份（a famous Chinese writer），且作者名与定语之间用逗号分隔。建议注意书名拼写并使用正确的定冠词和形容词顺序。

× The book taught me a lot at study and future work.

✓ The book taught me a lot for my studies and future work.

原句中介词“at”与“study”搭配不当，且“study”需要名词复数或所有格形式来表达学习这个领域。常用搭配是 “for my studies” 或 “for my future work”。建议用“for”引出用途，并把“study”改为“studies”或加上所有格。

× It also is.

✓ It was very helpful.

原句“It also is.”结构不完整，缺少具体内容，使句子含糊不明。需要补充完整谓语和宾语以表达意思，例如“It was also very helpful.” 或“It also helped me a lot.” 建议明确要表达的评价并用完整句子呈现。

× Although the technological advanced people can use mobile phones or computers to read books.

✓ Although technology has advanced and people can use mobile phones or computers to read books, ...

原句时态和词序问题：形容词“technological advanced”不正确，应该是名词“technology”加过去分词“advanced”构成短语“technology has advanced”或“technological advances”。另外，原句是一个让步从句，不能单独成句，应与主句连在一起。建议改为“Although technology has advanced, people can...”，并将句子与后文合并。

× But I think read physical books is more convenient to take laws and easy to refuse later.

✓ But I think reading physical books is more convenient to carry and easier to find later.

原句中动词形式错误，“think read”应改为动名词“reading”；“to take laws”不通，可能想表达“携带”（carry）或“便于携带”；“easy to refuse later”含义不明，推测为“容易之后查找”或“easy to refer to later”，应改为“easier to find/ refer to later”。建议使用动名词构成主语，并用恰当动词如“carry”或“refer to”。

× Also it protects our eyes from screen.

✓ Also, it protects our eyes from screens.

原句中“from screen”中名词单复数不当，且缺少逗号。应使用复数“screens”或者“the screen”。建议在“Also”后加逗号，并将“screen”改为“screens”或“the screen”。

× If the term retirees help me improve my skill or knowledge, I really very carefully because I need to understand every detail and remember it for later.

✓ If the terms are relevant to improving my skills or knowledge, I read very carefully because I need to understand every detail and remember it for later.

原句有多处结构和词汇错误：“term retirees”不合逻辑，可能是“terms”或“materials”；动词缺失和副词位置错误（“I really very carefully”不正确），需要动词“read”来完成动作。建议改为“If the terms/materials help me improve my skills or knowledge, I read very carefully...” 并修正复数和词序。

× But when I'm working on the street and just looking at all sides advertisements I don't pay much attention because they are usually not important overall whether I read carefully.

✓ But when I'm walking on the street and just looking at roadside advertisements, I don't pay much attention because they are usually not important overall and don't need careful reading.

原句中“working on the street”与语境不符，应为“walking on the street”；“all sides advertisements”不自然，应为“roadside advertisements”；句子结尾的逻辑混乱，需明确表达“不需要仔细阅读”。建议调整词汇并把句子重构以表达清晰逻辑。

× I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand details and remember it for later.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand details and remember them for later.

原句中代词“it”指代复数名词“details”不一致，代词应使用复数“them”。建议保持代词与先行词在数上一致。

× For example, my favorite book is The Ordinary Word, which was written by Luyang, whose story I still remember and taught me a lot in the future studies and work.

✓ For example, my favorite book is The Ordinary World, which was written by Luyang; its story I still remember and it has taught me a lot for my future studies and work.

原句问题包括书名拼写错误（Word→World）、从句衔接问题和时态不一致（“whose story I still remember and taught me a lot”中缺少主语和助动词）。应使用“its story”或重新引入主语并用现在完成时“has taught”来表示对未来学习和工作的影响。建议修正书名、连词使用并保持时态一致。