Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix grammatical errors. Try to limit to 2–3 sentences and use precise vocabulary (e.g., "I don't enjoy reading much" instead of "I hate screen SO or books really").

Ejemplo: I don't enjoy reading very much. I find it hard to concentrate, so I usually only read when I have exams or when it's necessary.

Sugerencia: Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and one specific supporting detail. Use linking words like "because" or "so" correctly and avoid unfinished phrases. Mention a brief example or consequence to show depth.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper because screens strain my eyes. For example, after reading on a tablet I often get headaches, so paper books are more comfortable for me.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence and use linking words to contrast the two situations (e.g., "When... but... "). Correct collocations ("skim an exam" not "scheme"), avoid repetition, and be specific about strategies used for each case.

Ejemplo: It depends: when I need specific information, I read carefully and take notes; but when I'm studying for an exam, I usually skim to grasp the main points and save time.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear direct answer, then give one or two focused reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy ("clear very clearly") and choose precise vocabulary ("vocabulary" singular). Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand the text thoroughly and learn new vocabulary. For instance, when I study articles I read slowly and note down unfamiliar words.

× No, actually I am not fond of reading because I find it quite difficult to concentrate because nowadays I hate screen SO or books really.

✓ No, actually I am not fond of reading because I find it quite difficult to concentrate on screens or books these days.

The sentence misuses pronouns and contains unclear phrasing 'screen SO or books really'. Replace with 'on screens or books' to use the correct prepositional object and plural noun. Also use 'these days' instead of 'nowadays' placement is fine but 'nowadays I hate' sounded abrupt; keeping 'these days' after the clause improves flow. Suggestion: simplify and place prepositional phrase after 'concentrate'.

× I just read books when I have exams and when it is necessary, otherwise I try to not.

✓ I only read books when I have exams or when it is necessary; otherwise I try not to.

The phrase 'I try to not' is an incorrect placement of the negation. Use 'try not to' or restructure as 'I only read books when...'. Also replace 'and' with 'or' for clarity and use a semicolon or comma to connect clauses. Suggestion: place 'not' before the infinitive verb and use 'only' to express restriction.

× Obviously on paper because as I said before, I don't like to look on screens.

✓ Obviously on paper because, as I said before, I don't like to look at screens.

The verb 'look' usually takes the preposition 'at' when referring to directing one's gaze toward something. 'Look on' is incorrect in this context. Suggestion: use 'look at screens' for natural English.

× I have issues in my eyesight, so I try to avoid screens nowadays and reading with paper is really convenient for me.

✓ I have problems with my eyesight, so I try to avoid screens these days and reading on paper is really convenient for me.

'Issues in my eyesight' is unnatural; use 'problems with my eyesight'. Also use 'reading on paper' rather than 'reading with paper'. Replace 'nowadays' with 'these days' for smoother flow. Suggestion: prefer 'problems with' and correct preposition 'on paper'.

× It's really handy as.

✓ It's really handy.

The fragment 'as' at the end creates an incomplete sentence. Remove the extraneous word to form a complete sentence. Suggestion: avoid dangling words and ensure each sentence has a clear object or finishes cleanly.

× Actually actually depends.

✓ Actually, it depends.

The sentence lacks a subject and repeats 'actually'. Add the subject 'it' and use a single 'actually' for clarity. Suggestion: include subject and avoid repetition.

× Whenever I need a specific information about something then I try to read very carefully.

✓ Whenever I need specific information about something, I try to read very carefully.

The phrase 'a specific information' is incorrect because 'information' is uncountable and should not take 'a'. Remove 'a' and add a comma after the introductory clause. Suggestion: use uncountable noun forms correctly and punctuate clauses.

× But when I'm trying for a exam then I try to scheme it and don't really bother bother to reading everything because I just need to understand the main context about the part.

✓ But when I'm preparing for an exam, I try to skim it and don't really bother to read everything because I just need to understand the main idea of the section.

Multiple errors: 'for a exam' should be 'for an exam' (article before vowel sound), 'trying for' is unnatural—use 'preparing for', 'scheme' is incorrect word choice; 'skim' is intended, 'don't really bother bother to reading' has repetition and wrong verb form—use 'don't really bother to read'. 'Main context about the part' is unnatural; use 'main idea of the section'. Suggestion: fix articles, choose correct vocabulary, and use base verb after 'bother to'.

× I think it depends on the situation, but if I had to have to make a specific choice then I prefer detailed reading because it's more convenient and it helps me understand the context clear very clearly and it's extremely impactful for me to learn new things and vocabularies as well.

✓ I think it depends on the situation, but if I had to make a specific choice I would prefer detailed reading because it's more useful and it helps me understand the context very clearly; it's also extremely helpful for me to learn new things and vocabulary.

This long sentence has tense/modal problems and awkward word choices. Use the conditional 'if I had to make a specific choice I would prefer' for hypothetical choice. 'More convenient' is acceptable but 'more useful' fits better. 'Understand the context clear very clearly' is redundant—use 'very clearly'. 'Vocabularies' is incorrect plural; use 'vocabulary'. Break into two clauses with a semicolon for readability. Suggestion: simplify, remove redundancies, correct conditional structure and countability of 'vocabulary'.