Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 発音や語彙の誤用を直し、文を簡潔で自然にする必要があります。具体的には “leading audio” や “ever often” の誤りを修正し、主題文（topic sentence）→補足（理由・例）の順で答えを2〜3文にまとめてください。また語彙は “Japanese literature” や “English books” の使い方は良いので維持しつつ、動詞は正しい形（read, listen）を使ってください。例文では “I enjoy reading” と “I also listen to audiobooks” の違いを明確に示すと良いです。

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially Japanese literature. I don't read physical books very often, but I listen to audiobooks when I'm busy. I also read English books sometimes to improve my language skills.

Sugerencia: 文法と語順、語彙選択に注意が必要です。“our screen”や “starting asking for long periods. Name my eyes.” のような誤りを直し、理由は明確かつ具体的に述べてください（例：記憶しやすい、目の疲れが少ない）。接続詞（because, so, therefore）を使って文のつながりを明確にすると良いです。回答は3文以内にまとめましょう。

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper rather than on a screen because physical books help me remember information better. Also, screens tire my eyes after long periods, so paper is more comfortable. For these reasons I usually choose paperback books.

Sugerencia: 内容が伝わりにくいので、まず主題文で「いつ注意深く読むか」を明確に述べ、その後で理由を具体的に説明してください。語彙や文法ミス（lead→read、incurs→contains、came to the next→skip to the next）を直し、論理的な接続語（because, when, so）を用いてください。また、必要であれば具体例（どの科目のどの部分）を一つ挙げると良いです。

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully when I'm preparing for my leadership class at university because the material contains complex theories and research articles. When the topic is unfamiliar or important for exams, I read every detail slowly and take notes. But for familiar or less important topics, I usually skim and move on.

Sugerencia: 文法（it depends、situations、reading）と語順を修正し、選択をはっきり述べてから理由を簡潔に添えてください。接続詞（however, but, because）を使って対比を明確にし、具体例（趣味の本は楽しむために詳細は気にしない、学術資料は詳しく読む）を入れてください。文は2〜3文にまとめると効果的です。

Ejemplo: It really depends on the situation. For books about my hobbies I prefer to skim and enjoy the flow, but for materials related to my class I read in detail to understand concepts and take notes.

× Yes, I love leading audio.

✓ Yes, I love listening to audio.

The student used 'leading' which is a wrong word form; the intended verb is 'listen' with the -ing form after 'love'. Use 'listening to audio' to express enjoyment of that activity. Suggestion: replace incorrect verb with the correct gerund 'listening to'. Use collocation 'listening to audio'.

× I don't read books ever often.

✓ I don't often read books.

Word order is incorrect; adverb 'often' should come before the main verb in negative sentences ('do not often read'). Also 'ever' is unnecessary and creates redundancy. Suggestion: place frequency adverbs ('often') before the main verb or after auxiliary 'do'.

× I prefer reading Japanese literature, but I also read English books to improve my language skills.

✓ I prefer reading Japanese literature, but I also read English books to improve my language skills.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. Explanation: 'prefer reading' correctly uses the gerund and 'also read' fits present simple for habitual action.

× I prefer reading on paper rather than on our screen.

✓ I prefer reading on paper rather than on a screen.

Use of 'our' is incorrect because the student is comparing general mediums, not ownership. Use the indefinite article 'a' with 'screen'. Suggestion: use 'a screen' for generic reference.

× I found that reading physical books help me remember information better and starting asking for long periods.

✓ I find that reading physical books helps me remember information better and allows me to read for long periods.

Tense and agreement issues: 'found' should match present preference 'I find' or keep past consistently; here present 'I find' fits. 'books' (plural) requires singular verb 'helps' when the subject is 'reading physical books' as an activity, treated as singular. 'starting asking' is ungrammatical; correct phrase is 'allows me to read' or 'enables me to read'. Suggestion: use 'helps' and a clear verb phrase 'allows me to read for long periods'.

× Name my eyes.

✓ It is easier on my eyes.

'Name my eyes' is nonsensical; likely intended meaning is 'easier on my eyes'. Use idiomatic expression 'easier on my eyes' to explain reduced eye strain. Suggestion: use established idioms to express comfort concerning eyesight.

× Because of these reasons, I usually choose paperbacks.

✓ Because of these reasons, I usually choose paper books.

'Paperbacks' are a specific format (softcover) while previous context contrasts paper versus screen; 'paper books' is clearer. Also sentence is otherwise correct. Suggestion: use consistent vocabulary with earlier contrast.

× Also, I need to lead it carefully when I'm studying for my leadership class at university because the material incurs complex theories and many textbook and research articles for less important for familiar topics, I usually just came to the next.

✓ I also need to read carefully when I study for my literature/leadership class at university because the material includes complex theories and many textbooks and research articles; for less important or familiar topics, I usually just skim and move on.

Multiple issues: 'lead' should be 'read'; use present simple 'study' or present continuous consistently ('I study' fits habitual action). 'incurs' is wrong verb; use 'includes'. 'textbook' should be plural 'textbooks'. Phrase 'for less important for familiar topics' is malformed; correct is 'for less important or familiar topics'. 'I usually just came to the next' should be 'I usually just skim and move on'. Suggestion: simplify into clearer clauses, choose correct verbs ('read', 'include', 'skim'), and correct noun forms.

× I would say it's really depends.

✓ I would say it really depends.

Extra 'it's' is unnecessary and ungrammatical before 'depends'. Correct structure: 'it depends' or 'it really depends'. Suggestion: remove the contraction 'it's' here.

× So when it comes to situation leading about something what I like, I prefer to just keep reading.

✓ So when it comes to situations related to something I like, I prefer to just keep reading.

Awkward phrasing: 'situation leading about' is incorrect. Use 'situations related to' or 'situations involving'. Also pluralize 'situations'. Suggestion: use natural collocations like 'when it comes to situations involving something I like'.

× But if it's directly involved to that class, I need really carefully and then figuring out more details.

✓ But if it's directly related to that class, I need to be really careful and then figure out more details.

Use 'related to' instead of 'involved to'. 'need really carefully' is incorrect: require 'need to be careful' or 'must be careful'. 'figuring' should be base form 'figure' after 'then'. Suggestion: use 'need to be really careful' and 'figure out'.