Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise; avoid awkward intensifiers like “literally” when not literal. Start with a clear topic sentence and add one brief specific detail to support it.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading a lot; I usually read at least one book a month, mostly contemporary fiction and biographies.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and clearly, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid vague or confusing claims about feeling “stronger” or “more intelligent.”

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper because I like the feel of a physical book and find it easier to remember details. For example, I often highlight passages and flip back through pages to review important ideas.

Sugerencia: Make a clear contrast using linking words (e.g., “whereas” or “but”) and be precise about what ‘carefully’ means in each case. Avoid repetition and correct small errors.

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully when studying classic or academic texts to understand complex arguments, whereas I can be more relaxed when reading light novels for enjoyment.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer and explain briefly why, using correct grammar and a linking phrase. Be specific about what you look for during detailed reading.

Ejemplo: I prefer detailed reading because I enjoy looking for clues about the characters and themes; for instance, I note repeated images or subtle changes in tone that reveal the author's intention.

× I prefer to read on paper because it makes unique experience that on screen it feels like something that makes you stronger, something that makes you more intelligent and more interesting person.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because it makes a unique experience; on a screen, it feels like something that makes you feel more intelligent, stronger, and more interesting.

The sentence omits the indefinite article 'a' before 'unique experience' (Article errors, ID 22). Also 'on screen' should be 'on a screen' for clarity (Incorrect use of articles, ID 17/22). The original has awkward structure; splitting into two clauses with a semicolon and adding 'feel' before 'more intelligent' improves clarity. Use of commas and parallel structure for the list 'more intelligent, stronger, and more interesting' fixes adjective coordination (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs, ID 13). Suggestion: add appropriate articles before singular countable nouns and maintain parallel adjective structure.

× I need to read carefully while I'm reading classic or ancient books, but I need to be pretty careful and I can be a bit careless while I I'm reading novels.

✓ I need to read carefully when I'm reading classic or ancient books, but I can be a bit careless when I'm reading novels.

The phrase 'while I I'm' contains a typo and extra pronoun; remove the redundant 'I' (Incorrect use of pronouns, ID 12) and simplify 'while' to 'when' for naturalness. Repetition of 'I need to be pretty careful' is unnecessary; condensing improves flow. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct pronoun usage. Suggestion: avoid redundant words and check for doubled pronouns.

× I prefer detail reading 'cause I really into finding some hints that author left for us.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because I'm really into finding the hints that the author left for us.

'Detail reading' is incorrect; use the adjective 'detailed' with a noun (Verb/adjective form issues, ID 8/13). 'Cause' is informal; use 'because' in a test context. 'I really into' is missing the verb 'am' (Verb in present tense/form, ID 10). 'Some hints' is acceptable but 'the hints' is more natural if referring to hints in the text; include the definite article before 'author' ('the author') (Article errors, ID 22). Suggestion: use 'detailed reading', include the correct form of 'to be' with '-ing' constructions, and use appropriate articles.