Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện: Nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng (1 câu chủ đề + 1-2 câu hỗ trợ). Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp, viết hoa sai, và dùng từ không phù hợp (ví dụ “IT support” không đúng ngữ cảnh). Thêm chi tiết cụ thể về loại sách bạn thích và cách đọc ảnh hưởng tới bạn. Ví dụ cụ thể: tên thể loại hoặc một cuốn sách ngắn. Ngoài ra sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (help + V, support → supports hoặc replace with helps).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading a lot. I mainly read science fiction and non-fiction history because they expand my vocabulary and inspire new ideas. For example, reading The Martian helped me learn technical terms and improved my problem-solving skills.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện: Trả lời ngắn gọn rõ ràng, sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (it have → it has; informations → information; reason phrase: I don't have to pay → I can often access free content). Nên cung cấp 1-2 lý do cụ thể và một liên từ để liên kết ý (for example, because…).

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on a screen because it is convenient and often free. For example, I use e-books and online articles to quickly search for information and save money on buying physical books.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện: Trả lời cần cụ thể hơn và tổ chức logic: nêu lúc nào cần đọc cẩn thận và lúc nào không, dùng liên từ để chuyển ý (for example, however). Tránh mô tả mơ hồ (“stand up and find a certain place for me” unclear) — nói rõ hành động (find a quiet place, take notes).

Ejemplo: I read carefully when the material is important, for example when studying for exams or reading instructions, so I find a quiet place and take notes. However, I don't read carefully on public transport, where I just skim headlines or summaries.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện: Tránh lặp từ (Of course), sửa ngữ pháp và cú pháp (informations → information; awkward second sentence). Trình bày rõ lý do và cho ví dụ cụ thể về khi nào bạn dùng detailed reading vs scanning. Giữ câu ngắn (max 5 câu) và dùng liên từ (because, for example).

Ejemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand complex ideas and remember facts. For example, when I study technical articles I read slowly and highlight key points, while I only scan news headlines when I am short on time.

× Of course, I am engrossed in reading.

✓ Of course, I am engrossed in reading.

The sentence is grammatical; no correction needed. It uses present continuous appropriately to express a current state of being interested in reading.

× Reading helps me a lot with expanding my limited vocabulary and IT support my imagination, Become rich and think outside the box.

✓ Reading helps me a lot by expanding my limited vocabulary, supporting my imagination, enriching me, and helping me think outside the box.

Original sentence has sentence structure and parallelism errors and an incorrect capitalisation. 'IT support' is incorrect form and should be a gerund phrase 'supporting'. 'Become rich' should be 'enriching me' or 'help me become richer' to fit the list of benefits in parallel form. Maintain parallel structure for a list of gerunds: expanding, supporting, enriching, helping.

× Of course I prefer to read on the screen because it have specific and accurate informations for me and I don't have to pay for any page I read.

✓ Of course I prefer to read on the screen because it has specific and accurate information for me and I don't have to pay for any page I read.

Subject-verb agreement: 'it' requires the third-person singular verb 'has' not 'have'. 'Informations' is non-count in English; use 'information' (no plural). Also 'on the screen' is acceptable but 'on a screen' is often more general; correction keeps original but fixes grammar.

× I need to read carefully when it comes to an important part.

✓ I need to read carefully when it comes to an important part.

The sentence is grammatically acceptable in present tense; no change needed. It correctly uses present simple to state a habitual requirement.

× I have to stand up and find a certain place for me.

✓ I have to stand up and find a certain place for myself.

Incorrect pronoun: use reflexive pronoun 'myself' when the object refers back to the subject. 'For me' is not correct in this reflexive context.

× I cannot read a book completely when I am in crowded place.

✓ I cannot read a book completely when I am in a crowded place.

Missing article: 'a crowded place' requires the indefinite article 'a'. Also 'in a crowded place' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× Of course I prefer detailed reading because it gives me specific and accurate informations for me to read.

✓ Of course I prefer detailed reading because it gives me specific and accurate information to read.

'Informations' should be 'information' (uncountable). Also remove redundant 'for me' after 'information' and simplify to 'information to read'.

× Of course, found a write news and page to read is a is an essential part of reading.

✓ Of course, finding the right news and pages to read is an essential part of reading.

Multiple errors: 'found' (past tense) should be gerund 'finding' to match structure '... is an essential part'. 'write' is incorrect; should be 'right'. 'news' is usually uncountable, so say 'the right news' or better 'the right news articles' or 'pages'. Remove duplicated 'is a is an'. Use plural 'pages' or 'articles' for consistency.