Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and use correct tense and smoother phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence in present tense, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Reduce fillers (uh, umm) and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: I enjoy reading, especially when I have free time. When I was a child I read more because I had fewer responsibilities, and reading used to help me relax and feel comforted.

Sugerencia: Give a clear preference reason and a concise explanation with specific details. Use linking words (because, although) and avoid vague phrases and fillers. Clarify what you mean by 'feeling the book'.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper because I like the physical sensation of holding a book and turning pages. Also, paper helps me concentrate more, whereas screens can be distracting and cause eye strain.

Sugerencia: Structure the answer with a topic sentence, then give clear, specific examples and use linking words (for example, however). Avoid vague wording like 'feel'—explain what careful reading involves (analyzing, checking details).

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully when the material is complex, for example academic articles or legal texts, because I have to understand details and meaning. However, for simple texts like news summaries or short stories, I usually skim and don't focus on every detail.

Sugerencia: Clarify whether you mean 'detailed reading' and state reasons with specific benefits. Use correct vocabulary and a coherent structure: topic sentence + 1–2 supporting points with linking words. Remove unclear phrases and fillers.

Ejemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it allows me to understand all the ideas and notice how sentences are constructed. For example, reading carefully helps me improve vocabulary and learn writing techniques, whereas scanning is better only when I need quick information.

× I really liked reading, but when I was a child and when I was young, I uh, enjoyed more umm, by reading.

✓ I really liked reading when I was a child; when I was young, I enjoyed reading more.

The original sentence uses past tense but has awkward structure and extra words ('by reading') that are unnecessary. Combine clauses with a semicolon or conjunction and use simple past 'enjoyed reading' to express a past habit. Remove filler words for clarity.

× But umm, I think it depends on umm, my free time because when I was younger I had a lot of free time and reading was something that makes me umm feel relaxed and comforted.

✓ But I think it depends on my free time because when I was younger I had a lot of free time, and reading was something that made me feel relaxed and comforted.

This sentence mixes present 'makes' with past context 'when I was younger'. Use past tense 'made' to maintain consistent past narrative. Also remove filler words and add a comma before 'and' for clarity.

× I prefer to read on paper because it makes me feel I am feeling the book and on the screen you cannot feel, uh, the umm. What kind of field there? Umm.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because it makes me feel like I am experiencing the book, and on a screen you cannot get the same feeling.

The original mixes awkward phrasing and tense. Use present simple 'prefer' and clear collocations: 'feel like I am experiencing the book' and 'get the same feeling.' Remove broken question 'What kind of field there?' which is unclear.

× Ah, when I am reading something sophisticated, something complicated, I need to read that very carefully, because it you need to feel what you are reading.

✓ When I am reading something sophisticated or complicated, I need to read it very carefully because you need to understand what you are reading.

Replace 'that' with the pronoun 'it' (correct reference) and remove the extra 'it' before 'you.' Use 'understand' instead of 'feel' for clarity in this context. Maintain present continuous for ongoing actions: 'I am reading.'

× And when you read something simple, you cannot, you don't need to be careful.

✓ And when you read something simple, you don't need to be very careful.

Avoid redundant negatives 'cannot, you don't need'. Use a single clear negative 'you don't need to be very careful.' This corrects pronoun phrasing and redundancy.

× I prefer the child to reading because umm you can read every detail and you can umm uh give what umm the book is about and it helped to improve.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because you can read every detail, understand what the book is about, and it helps to improve understanding.

'The child to reading' is incorrect. Likely intended 'detailed reading' (a noun phrase) or 'close reading'. Also change verbs to present tense to match 'I prefer' (prefer + noun), use 'understand' instead of 'give', and 'helps' for general truth. Fix article use and word choice.

× Also your sentences also umm give the lot of ideas and.

✓ Also, your sentences give a lot of ideas.

Remove redundant 'also' and incorrect article 'the' before 'lot of ideas.' Ensure a complete sentence by removing trailing 'and.' This corrects adverb/adjective redundancy and article misuse.