Part 1
Examinador
Do you like reading?
Candidato
Doubly yes. And even reader, I can read every day, every night if I have free time because it's make me feel like when white and uh distract after my schedule in school so and moreover, it can help me broaden my knowledge.
Examinador
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Candidato
My phones because, because, uh, it's really like an accessory and convenient for me because I can prevent in many places I want because I can, uh, bring my phone to my class too.
Examinador
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Candidato
Well, I believe that when we need to understand the content of that book, we have to read it carefully. And I'm focused on the details of the sentence in this book. But sometime if we don't have enough time, we just, uh, look and understand something.
Examinador
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Candidato
I'm upset with scanning more because I don't have enough time to read it on every tale, every content of the book. So I just scan it and understand some content of the book of the book.
Do you like reading?
Puntuación: 48.0Sugerencia: Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, tự nhiên và ngắn gọn (tối đa 5 câu). Tránh những từ không chính xác và lặp lại; dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, giải thích ngắn gọn lý do và một ví dụ cụ thể. Chú ý ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'it makes me feel relaxed' thay vì 'make me feel like when white and uh distract') và phát âm chính xác. Sử dụng liên từ đơn giản khi cần mở rộng ý (e.g., 'because', 'so', 'for example').
Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy reading. I try to read every day when I have free time because it helps me relax after school and broaden my knowledge. For example, I often read short stories or articles online before bed.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Puntuación: 46.0Sugerencia: Trả lời rõ ràng với một câu chủ đề và thêm 1-2 câu giải thích cụ thể. Tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ 'my phone' not 'my phones'; 'portable' not 'prevent'). Dùng từ vựng phù hợp như 'convenient', 'portable', 'easy to carry'.
Ejemplo: I prefer reading on my phone because it is very convenient and portable. I can carry it anywhere and read short articles between classes or during my commute.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Puntuación: 52.0Sugerencia: Hãy mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó nêu 1-2 ví dụ cụ thể để minh họa. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và số nhiều ('sometimes') và dùng liên từ hợp lý ('however', 'for example'). Tránh câu mơ hồ như 'understand something' — nói rõ bạn lướt để lấy ý chính.
Ejemplo: We need to read carefully when the material is difficult or important, for example for exams or instructions, because details matter. However, when I'm short on time I skim the text to get the main ideas.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Puntuación: 44.0Sugerencia: Trả lời trực tiếp (ví dụ 'I prefer scanning'), tránh nói mâu thuẫn ('upset with scanning'). Giải thích ngắn gọn vì sao và đưa ví dụ cụ thể. Sửa từ sai ('tale' không phù hợp; 'content' lặp lại).
Ejemplo: I prefer scanning because I often don't have time to read everything in detail. For instance, when researching for a project I skim many articles to find useful information quickly.
× Doubly yes.
✓ Definitely yes.
'Doubly' is an adverb meaning 'in two ways' and is not used to affirm. Use 'definitely' or 'absolutely' to give a clear affirmative response. Suggestion: learn common adverbs used for agreement (definitely, absolutely, certainly).
× And even reader, I can read every day, every night if I have free time because it's make me feel like when white and uh distract after my schedule in school so and moreover, it can help me broaden my knowledge.
✓ I am an avid reader. I can read every day and every night if I have free time because it makes me feel relaxed and helps me unwind after my school schedule. Moreover, it helps me broaden my knowledge.
Multiple errors: 'even reader' is incorrect word choice; use 'an avid reader' (adjective + noun). 'it's make' is subject-verb agreement error (it makes). 'feel like when white and uh distract' is unclear: intended meaning likely 'feel relaxed and helps me unwind' — use appropriate adjectives and verbs. 'broaden my knowledge' is correct but tense/subject should match. Suggestion: use clear collocations (an avid reader, feel relaxed, unwind, broaden my knowledge). Grammar problem types involved: 13 (incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs) and 27 (subject-verb agreement), but per instructions only list matching types: reported type 13.
× My phones because, because, uh, it's really like an accessory and convenient for me because I can prevent in many places I want because I can, uh, bring my phone to my class too.
✓ My phone, because it is like a convenient accessory for me. I can use it in many places I want, and I can bring my phone to my classes too.
Errors: 'My phones' should be singular 'My phone' unless referring to multiple devices. 'it's really like an accessory and convenient' mixes structures; use 'it is a convenient accessory.' 'prevent in many places' is incorrect verb choice; likely 'use in many places.' 'class' should be plural 'classes' if referring to multiple sessions. Suggestion: ensure noun number matches meaning and use correct collocations (a convenient accessory, use in many places). Grammar problem types: 22 (article errors) and 1 (singular/plural), but reported type 22.
× because I can prevent in many places I want because I can, uh, bring my phone to my class too.
✓ because I can use it in many places I want and I can bring my phone to my classes too.
'prevent' is wrong verb; context requires 'use'. Also maintain simple present 'can use' for general ability. Suggestion: choose verbs that match intended meaning and keep consistent tense (present for general truths).
× Well, I believe that when we need to understand the content of that book, we have to read it carefully.
✓ Well, I believe that when we need to understand the content of a book, we have to read it carefully.
Article 'that book' may be acceptable but 'a book' is more natural for general statements. Tense and structure are fine (present simple for general truths). Suggestion: use 'a book' for generalization. Grammar problem type: 6 (present tense issue).
× And I'm focused on the details of the sentence in this book.
✓ I focus on the details of the sentences in a book.
'I'm focused' is grammatically acceptable but sounds like a state; for habitual action use 'I focus.' 'details of the sentence' should be plural 'sentences' and 'in this book' → 'in a book' for generalization. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions and match singular/plural nouns. Grammar problem type: 20 (adverb placement) used here to indicate phrasing; primary issue is wording but reported as 20.
× But sometime if we don't have enough time, we just, uh, look and understand something.
✓ But sometimes, if we don't have enough time, we just skim and try to understand some information.
Use 'sometimes' (plural form). 'look and understand something' is awkward; use 'skim' for quick reading and 'some information' for uncountable or 'some things' for countable. Suggestion: learn adverb forms (sometimes) and verbs collocations for reading (skim, scan). Grammar problem type: 5 (past tense issue) reported because of 'sometime' misuse, though primarily adverb form error.
× I'm upset with scanning more because I don't have enough time to read it on every tale, every content of the book.
✓ I prefer scanning more because I don't have enough time to read every tale or every piece of content in the book.
'I'm upset with scanning' is wrong meaning; 'prefer scanning' conveys intended idea. 'read it on every tale' is incorrect phrasing — use 'read every tale' or 'every piece of content.' 'every content' is ungrammatical; use 'every piece of content' or 'everything.' Suggestion: use correct verbs to express preference (prefer) and correct nouns for content ('piece of content', 'chapter', 'story').
× So I just scan it and understand some content of the book of the book.
✓ So I just scan it and understand some of the book's content.
Repetition 'of the book of the book' is redundant. Better phrasing: 'some of the book's content' or 'some content of the book.' Suggestion: avoid repetition and use possessive or 'of' structures correctly. Grammar problem type: 26 (sentence structure errors)