Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Bạn cần trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng hơn và sửa ngữ pháp cùng cách diễn đạt. Hãy dùng 2–4 câu: nêu quan điểm, giải thích ngắn logic và một ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh lỗi như “can't read it all day” khi ý muốn nói bạn có thể đọc cả ngày, và dùng từ chính xác (“detective novels” thay vì “detective walks”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. Reading helps me relax and broaden my knowledge, especially after a busy day at school. For example, I often read detective novels in bed before sleeping because they are exciting and help me unwind.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp rồi đưa 1–2 lý do rõ ràng, dùng cấu trúc gọn và chính xác. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (e.g., “convenient than reading physical books”) và lặp từ. Thêm một câu ngắn nêu trường hợp cụ thể.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on my phone because it's more convenient than carrying physical books. For example, I can easily read on the bus or during breaks at school.

Sugerencia: Nói rõ khi nào cần đọc kĩ và khi nào chỉ quét lướt, dùng linking words để liên kết ý (e.g., “however”, “for instance”). Tránh lặp và sửa ngữ pháp (“scan” not “scanning”/“have to scanning”). Thêm ví dụ cụ thể về tình huống.

Ejemplo: We need to read carefully when the information is important or detailed, for example when studying for exams. However, if I'm looking for main ideas or short facts, I just scan the text because I don't have much time.

Sugerencia: Hãy dùng câu mở đầu rõ ràng (I prefer scanning), giải thích lí do ngắn gọn và liệt kê một ví dụ liên quan. Sửa phát âm viết thành “scanning” thay vì “skin”, và làm câu ví dụ hoàn chỉnh. Giữ trong 2–4 câu.

Ejemplo: I prefer scanning because I usually don't have time to read every detail and want to cover more books. For example, when I study for a test on my laptop, I scan articles to pick out the key points quickly.

× Definitely yes. I can't read it all day when I have free time because it's helped me balance my knowledge and arrive after my healthy schedule in school.

✓ Definitely yes. I can read all day when I have free time because it helps me broaden my knowledge and fit it into my healthy school schedule.

The original sentence has sentence structure and tense errors: 'I can't read it all day' contradicts intended meaning, and 'it's helped me' mixes past participle incorrectly. Use present simple 'can read' and 'helps' for habitual actions. Replace 'arrive after my healthy schedule' with 'fit it into my healthy school schedule' for clarity. Suggestion: state ability and habitual effects using present simple verbs and clear phrases.

× For example, I always read detective walks after I go to to bed because I'm I just wanna expand my knowledge and just like something.

✓ For example, I always read detective novels after I go to bed because I just want to expand my knowledge and I enjoy them.

Errors include wrong word 'walks' (wrong noun), doubled 'to', informal 'wanna', and an extra 'I'm I'. Use present simple 'read' for habits. Replace 'walks' with 'novels' and 'wanna' with 'want to'. Remove filler 'just like something' and use 'I enjoy them'. Advice: avoid contractions in formal speech and ensure correct word choice.

× Well definitely on on my phone because it's more convenient than read on physical books.

✓ Well, definitely on my phone because it's more convenient than reading physical books.

Problems: duplicated 'on on', missing gerund 'reading' after 'than', and incorrect article before 'physical books' (no article needed for general plural). Use 'reading' to compare activities. Suggestion: use gerund after comparative structures and avoid duplicate words.

× Well I can't bring it to every places I want.

✓ Well, I can't bring books to every place I want.

'Every places' is incorrect plural; use 'every place' or 'everywhere'. 'It' unclear; replace with 'books'. Maintain singular 'place' after 'every'. Suggestion: ensure pronouns clearly refer to nouns and use correct quantifier forms.

× Like for example I can bring it to my school to to read.

✓ For example, I can bring them to school to read.

Duplicate 'to to', unclear pronoun 'it' should be 'them' referring to books. Omit 'my' before 'school' unless specifying. Use concise phrasing. Suggestion: check pronoun reference and remove duplicate words.

× I believe that we have to read it carefully because we need to understand the every detail in that book.

✓ I believe that we have to read it carefully because we need to understand every detail in the book.

Article misuse: 'the every detail' is incorrect; use 'every detail' without 'the'. Also 'that book' can be 'the book' or 'that book' depending on context; use 'the book' for reference. Suggestion: use 'every' directly before a singular noun and avoid redundant articles.

× Sometime we just have to scanning, have to scan because, uh, we don't have enough time.

✓ Sometimes we just have to scan because, uh, we don't have enough time.

Use 'scan' (base form) after 'have to', not 'scanning'. Also plural 'Sometimes'. Remove redundancy 'have to scanning, have to scan'. Suggestion: after modal/periphrastic 'have to' use base verb.

× I'm keen on skin, I'm keen on scanning because I don't have enough time to read it in every detail and, uh, I want to read more books.

✓ I'm keen on skimming; I'm keen on scanning because I don't have enough time to read every detail and I want to read more books.

'skin' is incorrect word; likely 'skimming'. Repetition 'I'm keen on' okay but combine with correct term. 'Read it in every detail' should be 'read every detail'. Suggestion: choose correct term ('skimming') and correct object phrasing.

× So I believe that scanning is the best way for me. For example, I always can, uh, my reading test is on laptop.

✓ So I believe that scanning is the best way for me. For example, I can always do that because my reading test is on a laptop.

Awkward word order 'I always can' should be 'I can always'. 'My reading test is on laptop' needs article 'a laptop'. Insert connector 'do that' to clarify reference. Suggestion: place adverbs like 'always' after auxiliary verbs and include appropriate articles.