Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and filler words, and give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Also correct grammar (use present simple and proper wording) and keep to no more than five sentences.

Ejemplo: I don't enjoy reading books very much. Instead, I prefer listening to audiobooks because I often feel sleepy when I read, but audio keeps me more engaged. For example, I can listen while walking or doing chores, which makes the experience more relaxing and enjoyable.

Sugerencia: Be clearer and use linking words to structure reasons. Reduce hesitations and incorrect words; use precise vocabulary (distractions, notifications). Give a concise example and finish with a summarizing sentence.

Ejemplo: If I had to choose, I prefer reading on paper. The main reason is that phones cause many distractions, such as notifications from social media, which interrupt my reading. For example, I often stop reading an article to reply to messages. Therefore, paper books help me concentrate better.

Sugerencia: Provide a direct topic sentence answering the question, avoid unclear phrases and repetition, and give a specific time and reason using linking words. Correct odd phrases (e.g., 'evenings high', 'evidence high') and keep response under five sentences.

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully in the evenings. I find evenings are when I can concentrate best because the house is quiet and I feel more relaxed. On the other hand, I don't read carefully during busy mornings when I'm rushing to work or school.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use linking words to contrast the two approaches. Reduce fillers and grammar mistakes (e.g., 'read very details' -> 'read in detail'). Provide a clear example showing when you choose each method.

Ejemplo: It depends on the text. If an article is interesting or important, I read it in detail to understand everything; for example, I read news analysis carefully. However, if a text is unimportant or boring, I usually scan it quickly to get the main points.

× Not at all, I hate reading honestly.

✓ Not at all; I honestly hate reading.

Placement of the adverb 'honestly' was awkward. Move 'honestly' before the verb phrase to modify the verb 'hate'. Also use a semicolon or period to separate contrasting clauses for clarity.

× Honestly when I whenever I read I fall asleep so I just listen audio instead of reading books because it makes me feel more relaxing and enjoyable.

✓ Honestly, whenever I read, I fall asleep, so I just listen to audio instead of reading books because it makes me feel more relaxed and comfortable.

Redundant words 'when I whenever' must be reduced to 'whenever'. 'Listen audio' is incorrect; use the verb phrase 'listen to audio'. Use adjective 'relaxed' (not 'relaxing') to describe a feeling; 'enjoyable' is better as 'comfortable' or 'more enjoyable' but here 'comfortable' suits context. Added commas for clarity.

× Get enjoyable moments from me.

✓ It gives me enjoyable moments.

The original lacks a subject and correct verb form. Use 'it gives me' to indicate that audio provides enjoyable moments; 'enjoyable' correctly modifies 'moments'.

× If I have to choose one, I prefer books because with umm on the phone you, you have a lot of distressions.

✓ If I have to choose one, I prefer books because on the phone you have a lot of distractions.

Remove the preposition 'with' and place 'on the phone' correctly before the subject. 'Distressions' is a misspelling; the correct word is 'distractions'.

× So for example, right, umm, you're reading, umm you are reading an article, then you got the nodi from my friend, then you stop reading, then go other social media.

✓ For example, when you're reading an article, you get a notification from a friend, then you stop reading and go on to other social media.

Streamline filler words. Use 'get a notification' rather than 'got the nodi'. Maintain consistent present simple tense 'you get' and 'you stop'. Use preposition 'on to' or 'onto' before 'other social media'.

× So yeah, and PayPal books it better for me.

✓ So yeah, paper books are better for me.

'PayPal' is incorrect; context requires 'paper'. Word order and article use: 'paper books are better for me' is correct. 'It' was unnecessary.

× Umm, that's a good question. Uh, since I really read books, but, uh, the time I read books the most is, I would say that evenings high, because evidence high is my favorite time so I can concentrate, umm, whatever I do.

✓ That's a good question. Although I read books, I read them most in the evenings because the evening is my favorite time; I can concentrate on whatever I do then.

Original had contradictory conjunctions and garbled phrases ('evenings high', 'evidence high'). Use 'Although' or 'Since' properly. Use 'the evenings' or 'in the evenings' and correct word 'evening' not 'evidence'. Reorder to make a coherent sentence and maintain present simple tense for habitual actions.

× So reading books in that time is the best, uh, time for that.

✓ So reading books at that time is the best time for me.

Use preposition 'at that time' not 'in that time'. Remove redundant 'for that' and specify 'for me' for clarity.

× It will depend on the articles like, uh, if the article is very interesting, I read very details until the end, but like, you know, umm, the article is very so so, so I just read, I just scan all the paragraph and then, you know, like finish the book.

✓ It depends on the article. If the article is very interesting, I read it in detail until the end, but if the article is so-so, I just scan the paragraphs and then finish the piece.

Use present simple 'it depends' for general statements. 'Read very details' is incorrect; use 'read it in detail'. 'Scan all the paragraph' should be 'scan the paragraphs' (plural) and avoid repeated fillers. Maintain consistent noun forms and verb phrases.