Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện câu chủ đề cho rõ ràng và ngữ pháp; giảm lặp từ và trình bày ý mạch lạc hơn. Cụ thể: (1) Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ "books are on the screen" → "books on a screen" hoặc "e-books"). (2) Tránh lặp từ như "reading skills" bằng cách thay thế hoặc gộp câu. (3) Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu, bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó nêu 1–2 lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ ngắn nếu cần.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially e-books on a screen. They broaden my horizons and help me improve my reading skills. For example, I can access diverse topics quickly, which helps me learn new ideas every week.

Sugerencia: Sửa ngữ pháp và hoàn chỉnh câu còn dang dở; tránh lặp từ ("and and"); thêm liên từ hợp lý để câu mạch lạc. Cụ thể: (1) Hoàn thiện cụm từ thiếu (ví dụ "on my" → "on my device"). (2) Sử dụng liên từ và cấu trúc so sánh ngắn nếu cần. (3) Giữ câu gọn, tối đa 3 câu, nêu lý do cụ thể (tiện lợi, điều chỉnh hiển thị) và một ví dụ ngắn về khi bạn thích dùng màn hình.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on a screen because it is more convenient and portable. I can carry thousands of books on my device and adjust brightness and font size for comfortable reading. For instance, when commuting I usually read articles on my phone.

Sugerencia: Cố gắng dùng một câu chủ đề ngắn rồi mở rộng bằng ví dụ cụ thể như bạn đã làm; chỉnh một vài lỗi nhỏ (số ít/số nhiều, chia động từ). Cụ thể: (1) Sử dụng các từ nối để nhấn mạnh sự tương phản (e.g., "However, for routine messages I don't read carefully"). (2) Thêm một ví dụ ngắn về lúc không cần đọc kỹ để cân bằng trả lời. (3) Giữ 2–3 câu rõ ràng và logic.

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully during exams because it helps me avoid mistakes and fully understand each question. For example, in a math test I read each problem slowly so I don’t misinterpret it. However, I usually skim casual text messages or simple emails.

Sugerencia: Sửa lỗi nhỏ về danh từ số nhiều và diễn đạt ("informations" → "information", "switch to detail" → "switch to detailed reading"); sử dụng từ nối rõ ràng để thể hiện so sánh. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn nêu sở thích chính. (2) Giải thích khi nào dùng mỗi phương pháp và đưa ví dụ cụ thể. (3) Giữ tối đa 3 câu, tránh từ thừa.

Ejemplo: I usually prefer scanning at first because it allows me to find key information quickly, especially under time pressure during exam preparation. However, when the material is complex or requires deep understanding, I switch to detailed reading to study it thoroughly.

× Yes, I like reading, especially like books are on the screen.

✓ Yes, I like reading, especially books that are on the screen.

The phrase 'especially like books are on the screen' uses an incorrect structure. Use a relative clause 'books that are on the screen' or 'books on a screen' to modify 'books'. Also remove the redundant 'like'. Suggestion: Use 'especially books on a screen' or 'especially books that are on the screen.'

× I think it can help me broaden my horizons and also I can improve learn reading skills and reading skills play a vital role in my day.

✓ I think it can help me broaden my horizons, and I can also improve my reading skills; reading skills play a vital role in my daily life.

Several present tense and word order issues: 'improve learn reading skills' is incorrect sequence and missing article/possessive. Use 'improve my reading skills' and change 'in my day' to the correct phrase 'in my daily life.' Also add commas and connectives for clarity. Suggestion: Keep present simple for general truths and use proper noun phrases like 'my reading skills' and 'daily life.'

× I prefer reading on a screen because it's more convenient and and portable.

✓ I prefer reading on a screen because it's more convenient and portable.

The sentence has duplicate 'and and' which is a typographical error. No third person singular verb issue here, but classified under correction list requiring minimal change. Remove the extra 'and' to make the sentence grammatical. Suggestion: Proofread for duplicate words.

× I can bring thousands of books on my.

✓ I can carry thousands of books on it.

The original uses wrong preposition and pronoun 'on my' which is incomplete. 'Thousands of books' is fine plural, but you need a correct object 'it' or 'my device' and verb 'carry' or 'store.' Suggestion: Use 'on it' referring to the device, or say 'on my device.'

× Moreover, I can adjust the brightness and font size so making easier to.

✓ Moreover, I can adjust the brightness and font size, so it makes reading easier.

The phrase 'so making easier to' is ungrammatical. Use a full clause 'so it makes reading easier' or 'making it easier to read.' Also add comma for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'making it easier to read' or 'so it makes reading easier.'

× I need to read carefully when I have an exam because it helps me avoid mistake and understand the questions fully.

✓ I need to read carefully when I have an exam because it helps me avoid mistakes and understand the questions fully.

Plural form 'mistake' should be 'mistakes' to match generalisation. Tense is present simple and appropriate; change to plural quantify correctly. Suggestion: Use 'avoid mistakes' for general actions.

× For example, in a math exam I always read each problem slowly so I don't misinterpret it and can get a better score.

✓ For example, in a math exam I always read each problem slowly so I don't misinterpret it and can get a better score.

Sentence is generally correct. Minor punctuation could improve clarity: add a comma after 'exam.' No tense change needed. Suggestion: Add a comma after introductory phrase: 'For example, in a math exam, I always...'.

× I prefer scanning when I first approach a text because it helps me locate key informations quickly, especially in time pressure situations like when I am studying for an exam.

✓ I prefer scanning when I first approach a text because it helps me locate key information quickly, especially in time-pressured situations like when I am studying for an exam.

'information' is an uncountable noun, so 'informations' is incorrect. Also 'time pressure situations' is awkward; 'time-pressured situations' or 'situations under time pressure' is better. Suggestion: Use uncountable noun 'information' and change phrase to 'time-pressured situations' or 'situations under time pressure.'

× However, for complex materials or when I need a deep understanding, I switch to detail.

✓ However, for complex materials or when I need a deep understanding, I switch to detailed reading.

The phrase 'switch to detail' is ungrammatical. Use the noun phrase 'detailed reading' or 'detail reading' is incorrect; 'detailed reading' or 'a more detailed approach' fits. Suggestion: Say 'switch to detailed reading' or 'switch to a more detailed approach.'